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8/17/2021 c4 Harmonymoony
please continue it
5/16/2021 c4 megafangirl
omg, I've read your other story, alone, and I'm absolutely hooked on both. please please please keep updating!
1/11/2021 c4 3pjolarry
Please continue ! :)
12/28/2020 c1 PJOBlackjack
Hey, the story is pretty good. I think you shouldn't jump from point of view to point of view in one chapter. If you really want to change the pint of views, I suggest doing it in separate chapters or space them out so they won't be switching right after just one paragraph or two. I advice using a spell checker like Grammarly to edit your chapters.
12/22/2020 c2 pjolarry
This is a really good story. My only complaint is the first few paragraphs of the first chapter need a bit of editing to make them flow more smoothly, but otherwise it's really good. :)

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