for Revenge of Monkey D Luffy4/12 c7 Im a nice guy
Also to the person Who gave me that nasty comment On on that other fanfiction Screw your fanfiction it was terrible anyways If It had A plot it would be terrible to read, honestly it would be better to hear metal Nails Scraping Against a chalkboard For 24 hours Or watching Jason Voorhees and sloth From the goonies Having kids together that would be much better than that fanfic. My point is That you can remove my comments all you want and call me out all you want but I don’t give a shit oh and People Don’t be posting harassing messages on here I’m Not going to see them anyways because I’m done with fanfiction besides if you people Knew what he said to me you wouldn’t blame me and all Over a few spelling errors And the fact I said it could use some work
Also to the person Who gave me that nasty comment On on that other fanfiction Screw your fanfiction it was terrible anyways If It had A plot it would be terrible to read, honestly it would be better to hear metal Nails Scraping Against a chalkboard For 24 hours Or watching Jason Voorhees and sloth From the goonies Having kids together that would be much better than that fanfic. My point is That you can remove my comments all you want and call me out all you want but I don’t give a shit oh and People Don’t be posting harassing messages on here I’m Not going to see them anyways because I’m done with fanfiction besides if you people Knew what he said to me you wouldn’t blame me and all Over a few spelling errors And the fact I said it could use some work
4/11 c7 Guest
First of all I just want to say this fanfic Is really good kudos To the writer of this story.
Second I know you all are not going to care…but People in todays society say to speak your truth So that is exactly what I’m going to do… The truth is I’m done With anime for the most part Because of the toxic asshole fans The gratuitous over the top fan service, and the fact I received judging looks My coworkers who I believe are avoiding me because of my anime T-shirt which is not inappropriate it’s not of a naked or A scantily clad anime girl people i just want to make that clear(It’s a classy picture of Tomie kawakami looking as cute and scary as ever. I work as a custodian So it’s not really inappropriate to wear a shirt like that especially when you’re On the evening shift The place I work at is pretty lax with the rules As long as you don’t cross the line over what’s acceptable. Anyways back to the topic I’m leaving anime (mostly) and fanfiction Completely because I’m tired of people being rude I’m tired of commenting on a fanfiction And people are assholes because I critique it I’m not even being Rude either, I am just pointing out spelling errors or that it needs some work It’s pathetic really I had this person Call me a Twat Because I pointed out spelling errors And I’m just like get over yourself you pathetic snowflake quit being insecure I’m not talking about this Writer (different writer) and finally I guess I’m just sick and tired of not being able to watch my anime in front my two elderly parents it’s awkward with all the fan service especially when I come over to visit it gets weird And as for my coworkers They’re eccentric So I’m not really worried about it just kind of annoys me
First of all I just want to say this fanfic Is really good kudos To the writer of this story.
Second I know you all are not going to care…but People in todays society say to speak your truth So that is exactly what I’m going to do… The truth is I’m done With anime for the most part Because of the toxic asshole fans The gratuitous over the top fan service, and the fact I received judging looks My coworkers who I believe are avoiding me because of my anime T-shirt which is not inappropriate it’s not of a naked or A scantily clad anime girl people i just want to make that clear(It’s a classy picture of Tomie kawakami looking as cute and scary as ever. I work as a custodian So it’s not really inappropriate to wear a shirt like that especially when you’re On the evening shift The place I work at is pretty lax with the rules As long as you don’t cross the line over what’s acceptable. Anyways back to the topic I’m leaving anime (mostly) and fanfiction Completely because I’m tired of people being rude I’m tired of commenting on a fanfiction And people are assholes because I critique it I’m not even being Rude either, I am just pointing out spelling errors or that it needs some work It’s pathetic really I had this person Call me a Twat Because I pointed out spelling errors And I’m just like get over yourself you pathetic snowflake quit being insecure I’m not talking about this Writer (different writer) and finally I guess I’m just sick and tired of not being able to watch my anime in front my two elderly parents it’s awkward with all the fan service especially when I come over to visit it gets weird And as for my coworkers They’re eccentric So I’m not really worried about it just kind of annoys me
1/21 c1 Gexco
Hey man pls update this more I love this story and I want to see how luffy beat up everyone while his crew helps him
Hey man pls update this more I love this story and I want to see how luffy beat up everyone while his crew helps him
1/18 c7 Shank
Hey dude please update this story it is getting good.
Hey dude please update this story it is getting good.
8/10/2023 c5 Monkey Prince
Ok I have seen it too many times now. It's They not There!. Both words have different meanings!
Ok I have seen it too many times now. It's They not There!. Both words have different meanings!
7/29/2023 c7 Shank
Man please continue this story it is getting good don't give up
Man please continue this story it is getting good don't give up
3/16/2023 c7 Guest
Where's ch 8?
Where's ch 8?
11/20/2022 c7 Guest 2
Hello? Are you still alive?
Hello? Are you still alive?
10/25/2022 c2 
1thomquiri
Luffy: "I'm not like the pirate that hurt you, let's be friends"
also Luffy: "some navy hurt me, I gotta kill them all"
yeah... I hopte it's planned and not just pure hypocrisy without scenaristic goal
1thomquiriLuffy: "I'm not like the pirate that hurt you, let's be friends"
also Luffy: "some navy hurt me, I gotta kill them all"
yeah... I hopte it's planned and not just pure hypocrisy without scenaristic goal
8/15/2022 c7 Guest
Please do more
Please do more
6/15/2022 c7 Somera dom
As much as i like nami x luffy, nami is a stuttering mess I'd rather have the actual nami, tbh but ut to you its a greay fanfic
As much as i like nami x luffy, nami is a stuttering mess I'd rather have the actual nami, tbh but ut to you its a greay fanfic
6/14/2022 c7 Someopfanficread
holy shit i cant explain how much i love this fic hope theres more chapters
holy shit i cant explain how much i love this fic hope theres more chapters
3/26/2022 c6 Guest
Wow
Wow
2/19/2022 c7 Anime100
This is truly interesting to read; please update soon
I wonder how Luffy will react to seeing farp (purposely spelt the name wrong); I won't be surprised if Luffy beats him up terribly for being part of the marines
This is truly interesting to read; please update soon
I wonder how Luffy will react to seeing farp (purposely spelt the name wrong); I won't be surprised if Luffy beats him up terribly for being part of the marines