for Revenge of Monkey D Luffy12/30/2020 c2 Guest
I love the direction the story is heading. The Luffy x Nami pair here seems unique and open for continued growth and development. Hopefully through each other they can relearn how to trust others again and direct their anger to those truly responsible, celestial dragons and corrupt marines.
Hopefully we get some interaction between luffy and dragon in logtown, even if it is used for luffy to cuss out dragon for neglecting him to marine experiments
I love the direction the story is heading. The Luffy x Nami pair here seems unique and open for continued growth and development. Hopefully through each other they can relearn how to trust others again and direct their anger to those truly responsible, celestial dragons and corrupt marines.
Hopefully we get some interaction between luffy and dragon in logtown, even if it is used for luffy to cuss out dragon for neglecting him to marine experiments
12/30/2020 c2 
3IndraAshura
Well, well Luffy with DF based from 'the baldie huh? It piques my interest. I also like LuffyXNami moments here since I'm a LuNa fan. I'm looking forward to the next and always take care yourself, okay?
3IndraAshuraWell, well Luffy with DF based from 'the baldie huh? It piques my interest. I also like LuffyXNami moments here since I'm a LuNa fan. I'm looking forward to the next and always take care yourself, okay?
12/30/2020 c2 Guest
I love it, please make more chapter and longer if it is possible
And also can you add the pairing options in the filter? Your story kinda miss it when i'm searching Luffy x Nami fanfiction by filter
And lastly, that's a nice Saitama reference lol
I love it, please make more chapter and longer if it is possible
And also can you add the pairing options in the filter? Your story kinda miss it when i'm searching Luffy x Nami fanfiction by filter
And lastly, that's a nice Saitama reference lol
12/25/2020 c1 Guest
Can't wait for the next chapter Ben. I think this story will be awesome.
Can't wait for the next chapter Ben. I think this story will be awesome.
12/23/2020 c1 Guest
That's a good concept
But still i have one question, what about Coby?
That's a good concept
But still i have one question, what about Coby?