for A Jump in Time5/2/2021 c1 
2Phoenix Namikaze
thank you I left the story up . I have not finished the rewrite yet I have been a little busy lately to finish it yet.
2Phoenix Namikazethank you I left the story up . I have not finished the rewrite yet I have been a little busy lately to finish it yet.
3/20/2021 c1 Lady Gish
you might want to try a beta, or even just peer review. There is no proper punctuation in this and it's paragraphed in an odd way. I can appreciate the idea for the story, but it's hard to read in its current form.
you might want to try a beta, or even just peer review. There is no proper punctuation in this and it's paragraphed in an odd way. I can appreciate the idea for the story, but it's hard to read in its current form.