for Naruto: Rise of the Uzumaki2/26 c23 nanox876
I know some of these questions might be late or off topic, but did Kin end up running away, dying to Gaara during the one month, or being used in the Edo Tensei? Also regarding your Bleach story do you plan to include Matsuri or Fujimaru Kudo or any other spin off material?
I know some of these questions might be late or off topic, but did Kin end up running away, dying to Gaara during the one month, or being used in the Edo Tensei? Also regarding your Bleach story do you plan to include Matsuri or Fujimaru Kudo or any other spin off material?
2/11 c23 
1DivineBahamutXZ
Nice to see this is still alive. As much as I prefer the old version of Fuu that was more serious and with more emotional baggage, this story still has it's merits.
As for your killing Kabuto, screw it, don't worry so much about it. This is fanfiction, the unwritten rule of fanfiction is that unless it's a novelization, one MUST deviate from canon, no matter how little or how far (preferably far, so as to read something different than the original story that people already know).
As for Kaguya, the Juubi and the Otsutsuki, ERASE THEM. If not, then simply make their origins something more supernatural and mystique than scifi. And with a far better and developed background, if possible.
1DivineBahamutXZNice to see this is still alive. As much as I prefer the old version of Fuu that was more serious and with more emotional baggage, this story still has it's merits.
As for your killing Kabuto, screw it, don't worry so much about it. This is fanfiction, the unwritten rule of fanfiction is that unless it's a novelization, one MUST deviate from canon, no matter how little or how far (preferably far, so as to read something different than the original story that people already know).
As for Kaguya, the Juubi and the Otsutsuki, ERASE THEM. If not, then simply make their origins something more supernatural and mystique than scifi. And with a far better and developed background, if possible.
2/11 c22 LigMcGooche
glad to see this fic wasn't abandoned! you gotta good story going here, hopefully we can see more frequent updates. keep it up!
glad to see this fic wasn't abandoned! you gotta good story going here, hopefully we can see more frequent updates. keep it up!
2/8 c23 1Ilireanwri
I like the whole "Naruto summons one of the sage toads by accident" idea. It's not something I've read often (I think this is the second or third time). I really enjoyed that moment Orochimaru went from amused to massively worried. And how Kabuto's arrogance bit him in the ass here. That's definitely a first. I can't remember reading a story where Kabuto gets killed of so early. I like the idea as I found his role in the 4th shinobi war to be rather stupid. I'm curious what else you'll change in this story.
As for the new body of Orochimaru, I'm guessing it will be the kid Guren takes care of or this Ranmaru kid Raiga carries around.
I hope we see team 7 learning more jutsus. And maybe a new fighting style, and/or weapons? And will Sasuke get the Snake summons (from Anko instead of Orochmaru)? Or another summon?
Anyway, I really enjoyed this update and am very glad your still at it. Too many good naruto-fics went dead over the last years
1IlireanwriI like the whole "Naruto summons one of the sage toads by accident" idea. It's not something I've read often (I think this is the second or third time). I really enjoyed that moment Orochimaru went from amused to massively worried. And how Kabuto's arrogance bit him in the ass here. That's definitely a first. I can't remember reading a story where Kabuto gets killed of so early. I like the idea as I found his role in the 4th shinobi war to be rather stupid. I'm curious what else you'll change in this story.
As for the new body of Orochimaru, I'm guessing it will be the kid Guren takes care of or this Ranmaru kid Raiga carries around.
I hope we see team 7 learning more jutsus. And maybe a new fighting style, and/or weapons? And will Sasuke get the Snake summons (from Anko instead of Orochmaru)? Or another summon?
Anyway, I really enjoyed this update and am very glad your still at it. Too many good naruto-fics went dead over the last years
2/7 c23 thor94
good chapter and impressive battle.
also big plot twist, so, in this universe naruto killed kabuto. sure orochimaru will be pissed at naruto.
good chapter and impressive battle.
also big plot twist, so, in this universe naruto killed kabuto. sure orochimaru will be pissed at naruto.
2/7 c23 2BrazeRancor
Nice fight! I was confident that Kabuto had faked his death, I guess you got me there!
2BrazeRancorNice fight! I was confident that Kabuto had faked his death, I guess you got me there!
2/7 c23 3thtadthtshldntb
Given the presence of cloning in the series, I was always perplexed that Kishimoto didn't just have Orochimaru clone Sasuke or Itachi for a body. But that's neither here nor there with regards to you fiction.
Kabuto is not really gone. as Orochimaru said due to Edo Tensei. YOu might want to write a bit where Jiriaya works out a way to block Edo Tensei.
3thtadthtshldntbGiven the presence of cloning in the series, I was always perplexed that Kishimoto didn't just have Orochimaru clone Sasuke or Itachi for a body. But that's neither here nor there with regards to you fiction.
Kabuto is not really gone. as Orochimaru said due to Edo Tensei. YOu might want to write a bit where Jiriaya works out a way to block Edo Tensei.
2/4 c2 AuthorR
and like most fics i see, hiruzen is forgiven for not telling an orphan about his parents. wow. no anger, nothing. forgiven bc atleast he finally tolf him yeah?
and like most fics i see, hiruzen is forgiven for not telling an orphan about his parents. wow. no anger, nothing. forgiven bc atleast he finally tolf him yeah?
12/2/2024 c2 dixonjason403
yeah im done. any story that focuses this much on that useless loser sakura isnt worth reading. she's weak, so weak that no amount of training can make her worth having around. she's a liability at best.
yeah im done. any story that focuses this much on that useless loser sakura isnt worth reading. she's weak, so weak that no amount of training can make her worth having around. she's a liability at best.
12/2/2024 c1 dixonjason403
this is one of those fanfics that forces a useless sakura to be around, so i kinda hate it by default. sakura is just...a bad character. and for her to be not bad it pretty much needs to be AU from the start.
this is one of those fanfics that forces a useless sakura to be around, so i kinda hate it by default. sakura is just...a bad character. and for her to be not bad it pretty much needs to be AU from the start.
11/30/2024 c22 Anton Vlasov
Сюжет вообще не стоит времени который я на его потратил, это практически канон изменённый автором. Как писал до этого название вообще не соответствует сюжету персонажи не развиваются неё как. Взаимодействий между ними просто привет пока и миссия все. Толку от того что наруто знает кто его родителя, денег нету у него которые 100% были у его семьи хокаге отобрал их все как и дом их. Он живёт в дыре какой то и питается одной лапшой ведь денег нету на нормальную еду. Его нечего не обучают и он сам не его практически не делает. Тебе говорили про клонов ты ими не пользуешься как надо. Мог создать пол сотни они бы теорию и практику тебе оточили но ты и этого не делаешь сюжет 3/10 это потолок.
Сюжет вообще не стоит времени который я на его потратил, это практически канон изменённый автором. Как писал до этого название вообще не соответствует сюжету персонажи не развиваются неё как. Взаимодействий между ними просто привет пока и миссия все. Толку от того что наруто знает кто его родителя, денег нету у него которые 100% были у его семьи хокаге отобрал их все как и дом их. Он живёт в дыре какой то и питается одной лапшой ведь денег нету на нормальную еду. Его нечего не обучают и он сам не его практически не делает. Тебе говорили про клонов ты ими не пользуешься как надо. Мог создать пол сотни они бы теорию и практику тебе оточили но ты и этого не делаешь сюжет 3/10 это потолок.