6/25/2021 c1 23Wysteria Fox
Hey I'm sorry I just now looked at your review. :(

I love this! It's super cute. And definitely Helga getting all worked up over something simple like Arnold fixing her hair. It was pretty adorable that he knew how to do that.

The only constructive thing I would say is more breaks in the dialogue/paragraphs. I know Helga tends to have a stream of conciousness type of thinking, but without breaks or some more periods it does blend together a bit.

Hope you decide to write more. :)

12/25/2020 c1 31The J.A.M. a.k.a. Numbuh i
Great one-shot!