for Invictus2/16/2023 c41 Pato HM
Oh God, the amount of references in this fic...
It's beautiful!
I see that you are a Man of culture as well, and you have my highest respect for all the star wars references!
This is without a doubt the most fun I had reading a fanfic, I lost count how many times I laughed my ass off.
Your dialogues are superb, the best part of this story!
Oh God, the amount of references in this fic...
It's beautiful!
I see that you are a Man of culture as well, and you have my highest respect for all the star wars references!
This is without a doubt the most fun I had reading a fanfic, I lost count how many times I laughed my ass off.
Your dialogues are superb, the best part of this story!
2/11/2023 c15 Guest
dropped
dropped
2/11/2023 c14 Guest
all this emo crap id getting annoying... close to dropping this
all this emo crap id getting annoying... close to dropping this
2/11/2023 c18 Agent Frank
Yeah this is unfortunately where I call it quits. I know how good of a writer you are now (I've read your other Naruto fic) but this fic is long and I have no idea when it's gonna take the leap. It's tough cause I really like the premise of this story but for the past 10-15 chapters I've been split on the direction you've taken with some of the core characters. Especially the MC.
On a side note, props to you for somehow writing 850k in a little over 2 years. That's mad impressive
Yeah this is unfortunately where I call it quits. I know how good of a writer you are now (I've read your other Naruto fic) but this fic is long and I have no idea when it's gonna take the leap. It's tough cause I really like the premise of this story but for the past 10-15 chapters I've been split on the direction you've taken with some of the core characters. Especially the MC.
On a side note, props to you for somehow writing 850k in a little over 2 years. That's mad impressive
2/10/2023 c13 Agent Frank
Solid chapter, I'm still decently split about the first half of the chapter (Naruto's attack on the compound) but I like how everything was tied into this also being an acceptable way to warn Hiruzen.
Solid chapter, I'm still decently split about the first half of the chapter (Naruto's attack on the compound) but I like how everything was tied into this also being an acceptable way to warn Hiruzen.
2/10/2023 c6 Agent Frank
Pretty solid story so far, you talked about it in the AN but yeah this is the first pretty shaky chapter so far.
Pretty solid story so far, you talked about it in the AN but yeah this is the first pretty shaky chapter so far.
2/7/2023 c58 JemeryT
I'm really hoping Naruto finds a way to access sage mode. It's one of my favourite techniques. Possibly acquiring the snake summons?
I'm really hoping Naruto finds a way to access sage mode. It's one of my favourite techniques. Possibly acquiring the snake summons?
2/7/2023 c57 JemeryT
Nearly caught up. I look forward to seeing this continued and starting your other fics.
Nearly caught up. I look forward to seeing this continued and starting your other fics.
2/6/2023 c48 
1FireFox2590
I suspected it earlier but now I think that Ashina is also our main character, but just a past reincarnation of him. Ashina is basically to OC Naruto, what Hashirama is to Rin/Naruto (Canon) and what Madara is to Sasuke.
1FireFox2590I suspected it earlier but now I think that Ashina is also our main character, but just a past reincarnation of him. Ashina is basically to OC Naruto, what Hashirama is to Rin/Naruto (Canon) and what Madara is to Sasuke.
2/6/2023 c50 3JemeryT
I definitely agree that this should have been split up. It took me days to read through.
3JemeryTI definitely agree that this should have been split up. It took me days to read through.
2/3/2023 c2 Guest
yet another worthless naruto fanfic that follows the original story making it completely redundant
yet another worthless naruto fanfic that follows the original story making it completely redundant