1/15/2024 c59 perseusdiangelo007
Recently decided to start this fanfic and managed to read it in around 4 or 5 days (taking advantage of a break at uni). Definitely one of my favorites not only in Naruto fics but also across all other series. I understand that it's been a while since it was last updated but I saw that in another of your fanfics published in December it was mentioned that you'd try to come back and update some of the fanfics soon after a couple of months without writing. Just wanted to let you know that the story is appreciated and there are people that await an update and understand that it might not be as fast as we'd like. Good luck with the next chapter and the other stories you're currently writing.

1/10/2024 c37 Guest
Well that was incredibly predictable.

1/5/2024 c25 Dr. Valentine
I do mostly agree with your points on Madara and Kaguya. Unfortunately, I typically always prefer things to be as close to canon as possible, for better or for worse. But I find your points on the so called cycle-of-hatred to be very insightful, and I'm very excited to see how you deal with the later parts of this story.

12/31/2023 c6 3Detsella Morningdew
Your chakra growth spurt thing seems like a very good reason why children in Naruto are taught when they are.

It's a compromise between giving up utility of having more soldiers faster and preventing needless death of children.

11/21/2023 c3 Dissapointed
I give up. I don't need to read more than here to know this will be a massive shitfest of emotionally unstable BS.

It might be a good story... maybe... but it is definitely a garbage-tier fanfiction.

Just not my cup of tea. Peace out.

10/4/2023 c18 5Pvtcheeks
Okay. We’re back af a solid 9/10. Recognizing he’s hypocritical is what ive been waiting for. Not just saying he is but acknowledging it. Proud of you N keep growing and getting better bug man.

10/3/2023 c10 Pvtcheeks
Ima be brutally honest… this made the story drop to a 4/10. Many things could have happened differently that would have in no way shape or form caused any harm to come ro him OR Rin. However. I know emotions are volatile and the fact he is scared shitless ontop of that clouding his judgement. Then add on to it he isn’t a shinobi born person… I’ll give it a 8/10 from a realistic perspective but I’m taking two because I see no reasonable way that he argued over his modern personality he still had when it was changeable. Another one for the fact he could face Kakashi down in a fit of rage but cower in fear even though he would have had help from Hiruzen, Kakashi, Jiryia, many powerful people he could have, granted not told the everything, but made up something along the lones of sensing an evil presence saying its an ability that he got from the yin Kurama like Kushina had…there were just many MANY ways that dont require even the mildest of thinking to cover up his ‘Knowing’ of what danzo would do. It made little sense when he showed such devotion and strong will then to crumble out of seemingly nowhere effectively feeling a little forced…The emotion portrayal is amazing as always of course, and it just felt off you spent that couple of weeks building him up to suddenly change him almost? Anyway it’s more of a personal thing so I am probably criticizing this more harshly than I should but it feels very off putting for him to say hes better than Kakashi, better than Hiashi…then to just let a whole clan die because he didnt have the balls to say something. Keep it up this is great and keep on raging my mans.