for Fear the Superhero2/21 c23 AdrianEzequielGarrido
Sabes que, si Shirou tenía como plan matar a los Ashikabis, podría haberlo hecho fácilmente ahora, ¿no? Es obvio que los principales Ashikabis se reunirían, lo que habría sido la oportunidad perfecta para matarlos a todos y conseguir los Jinki de forma rápida. Estableces un Shirou que ha trabajado durante años como un Magus Killer, pero apenas demuestras eso.
Ya ni hablemos de que TODO lo relacionado con Rin NO TIENE SENTIDO. Si Shirou no mató a Sakura fue porque Rin misma se lo impidió, y es EXTREMADAMENTE HIPÓCRITA que Rin le eche eso en cara CUANDO ELLA FUE LA RAZÓN POR LA QUE SHIROU NO MATÓ A SAKURA.
Además, toda esa mierda sobre lo "correcto" e "incorrecto" o el "bien" y el "mal", y el hecho de que diga que la existencia de Shirou solo trae miseria, cuando ELLA ES UNA MAGUS sin ninguna moralidad, es algo extremadamente ilógico.
Sabes que, si Shirou tenía como plan matar a los Ashikabis, podría haberlo hecho fácilmente ahora, ¿no? Es obvio que los principales Ashikabis se reunirían, lo que habría sido la oportunidad perfecta para matarlos a todos y conseguir los Jinki de forma rápida. Estableces un Shirou que ha trabajado durante años como un Magus Killer, pero apenas demuestras eso.
Ya ni hablemos de que TODO lo relacionado con Rin NO TIENE SENTIDO. Si Shirou no mató a Sakura fue porque Rin misma se lo impidió, y es EXTREMADAMENTE HIPÓCRITA que Rin le eche eso en cara CUANDO ELLA FUE LA RAZÓN POR LA QUE SHIROU NO MATÓ A SAKURA.
Además, toda esa mierda sobre lo "correcto" e "incorrecto" o el "bien" y el "mal", y el hecho de que diga que la existencia de Shirou solo trae miseria, cuando ELLA ES UNA MAGUS sin ninguna moralidad, es algo extremadamente ilógico.
2/19 c16 Guest
... Well this chapter seemed pointless. Nothing interesting happened. :/
... Well this chapter seemed pointless. Nothing interesting happened. :/
2/10 c23 Eating Upside Down
The abuse and neglect this story gets by the author should be investigated. I hope the next update is the author getting prosecuted.
The abuse and neglect this story gets by the author should be investigated. I hope the next update is the author getting prosecuted.
2/2 c23 
2thus dud
Great update! I've been jonesing for this one for a bit. Very excited for what you have in store for us.
2thus dudGreat update! I've been jonesing for this one for a bit. Very excited for what you have in store for us.
1/29 c23 KaleidoLibrarian
I know exactly what I signed up for with this story, but it's getting to me. Good work author, and I'm glad the Fate team wasn't behind the original Sekirei manga.
I know exactly what I signed up for with this story, but it's getting to me. Good work author, and I'm glad the Fate team wasn't behind the original Sekirei manga.
1/27 c23 kyurega
Honestly, I think the best outcome for everyone would be if Shirou and Karasuba just leave Shin Tokyo and go back to doing…whatever it is Mind of Steel Shirou does (but now as a couple. Seems pretty clear that this isn’t gonna happen. Seems that in canon Sekirei, Karasuba ends up losing in exactly the way one might expect: refusing any sort of power of love, to the point of outright handicapping herself. But that is another thing that is clearly not happening here, and Karasuba is clearly growing far more powerful than anyone in the Sekirei setting can do anything about, maybe save Miya (that one’s not so clear). I don’t really see a world where Emiya and Karasuba lose to the collective forces of Minato, Sanada, and Mikogami, unless Nasuverse nonsense gets involved.
Honestly, I think the best outcome for everyone would be if Shirou and Karasuba just leave Shin Tokyo and go back to doing…whatever it is Mind of Steel Shirou does (but now as a couple. Seems pretty clear that this isn’t gonna happen. Seems that in canon Sekirei, Karasuba ends up losing in exactly the way one might expect: refusing any sort of power of love, to the point of outright handicapping herself. But that is another thing that is clearly not happening here, and Karasuba is clearly growing far more powerful than anyone in the Sekirei setting can do anything about, maybe save Miya (that one’s not so clear). I don’t really see a world where Emiya and Karasuba lose to the collective forces of Minato, Sanada, and Mikogami, unless Nasuverse nonsense gets involved.
1/27 c23 GrandSaberEMIYA
Glad to see an update! The Sekirei Plan is building to a huge fight, one that’ll definitely involve a lot of major parties and I can’t wait for you to write it!
Glad to see an update! The Sekirei Plan is building to a huge fight, one that’ll definitely involve a lot of major parties and I can’t wait for you to write it!
1/25 c23 azeliosrosemile919
I'm looking forward to Atlas, Wandering sea and Magus association response to this. Don't forget the Church as well. And lastly, I'm waiting for the Counter Force/Guardians to respond. These guys didn't know about this, only Shirou does
I'm looking forward to Atlas, Wandering sea and Magus association response to this. Don't forget the Church as well. And lastly, I'm waiting for the Counter Force/Guardians to respond. These guys didn't know about this, only Shirou does