for Making Ashes7/31/2021 c8 alexaguamenti
Hi. So this is the second story of yours I have read this weekend, and I am obsessed with them. I love how badass yet human you write your characters. Is this sorry meant to be a prologue to “All the Time in the World” or stand on its own?
Anyway, you are a fantastic writer, and I can’t wait to read more of your works.
Hi. So this is the second story of yours I have read this weekend, and I am obsessed with them. I love how badass yet human you write your characters. Is this sorry meant to be a prologue to “All the Time in the World” or stand on its own?
Anyway, you are a fantastic writer, and I can’t wait to read more of your works.
1/10/2021 c8 
2Schattensammlerin
hi, I love your ff
i think your characters are well thought out and I love that you describe Ginny as the strong woman that she is (at least in my opinion).
You could maybe describe the changing of emotions a bit more eg in the last chapter in the end how Hermione goes from hexing Victor to having a panic attack by writing about how she looked in that situation
all in all a great ff, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
2Schattensammlerinhi, I love your ff
i think your characters are well thought out and I love that you describe Ginny as the strong woman that she is (at least in my opinion).
You could maybe describe the changing of emotions a bit more eg in the last chapter in the end how Hermione goes from hexing Victor to having a panic attack by writing about how she looked in that situation
all in all a great ff, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
1/8/2021 c8 NYFanFic
I am so glad I found this. I am very much enjoying this. Thank you.
I am so glad I found this. I am very much enjoying this. Thank you.
1/6/2021 c1 Zyxa
Very nice story. Interesting plot and I really like powerful Hermione. I like that Ginny is in on the secret and is helping Hermione. Not that many stories out there with Ron bashing but good Ginny. Ginny is an interesting character, so no need to bash her unless it's necessary for the plot. Also, not a lot of good Viktor/Hermione out there, and this one is really good. It would be nice to see this continued.
Just a suggestion, but I think it would be nice to add translations of the Bulgarian phrases. I suggest putting them at the end of the chapter, since the reader isn't meant to understand it exactly while reading (like Hermione doesn't), but it would still be helpful to know the meaning in the end.
Very nice story. Interesting plot and I really like powerful Hermione. I like that Ginny is in on the secret and is helping Hermione. Not that many stories out there with Ron bashing but good Ginny. Ginny is an interesting character, so no need to bash her unless it's necessary for the plot. Also, not a lot of good Viktor/Hermione out there, and this one is really good. It would be nice to see this continued.
Just a suggestion, but I think it would be nice to add translations of the Bulgarian phrases. I suggest putting them at the end of the chapter, since the reader isn't meant to understand it exactly while reading (like Hermione doesn't), but it would still be helpful to know the meaning in the end.
12/30/2020 c2 Guest
Love this new storyline! Excellent start! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
Love this new storyline! Excellent start! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
12/30/2020 c2 AdrienStalkry
Viktor/Hermione fics are some of my favorites and I had to check this one out when I saw the summary! The way you write Hermione and Viktor is so different from what I usually see (or have written myself) and I just love it. She’s so ballsy and powerful and he’s so taken aback by her. The way you changed the World Cup had me hooked from the first paragraph and I love the idea of these two meeting before he shows up at school. Can’t wait to see how their relationship progresses and for her to re-meet his mom and brother on better terms. Also can’t wait to see how those Death Eaters knew her name or how the adults handle her going for kill shots (considering Dumbledore is usually very much for stunning opponents). My phone’s being really mean and not letting me log in to comment/follow but I wanted to comment while it was still fresh in my mind, I’ll make sure to log in and follow this story later. Thank you so much for posting!
Viktor/Hermione fics are some of my favorites and I had to check this one out when I saw the summary! The way you write Hermione and Viktor is so different from what I usually see (or have written myself) and I just love it. She’s so ballsy and powerful and he’s so taken aback by her. The way you changed the World Cup had me hooked from the first paragraph and I love the idea of these two meeting before he shows up at school. Can’t wait to see how their relationship progresses and for her to re-meet his mom and brother on better terms. Also can’t wait to see how those Death Eaters knew her name or how the adults handle her going for kill shots (considering Dumbledore is usually very much for stunning opponents). My phone’s being really mean and not letting me log in to comment/follow but I wanted to comment while it was still fresh in my mind, I’ll make sure to log in and follow this story later. Thank you so much for posting!
12/30/2020 c2 James Birdsong
Splendid
Splendid