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2/8/2022 c9 6lilly-flower15
Great chapter update soon
4/5/2021 c1 Jenna Gem
I'm not sure what's going on...can't read right
3/11/2021 c1 2iiqp5l
GOOD story
1/19/2021 c9 5Dark Neko 7000
What will happen next time
1/13/2021 c1 2Phoenix Namikaze
in the process of a rewriting. will upload the chapters when I finish fixing the dialogue. almost done
1/13/2021 c1 arvora
Hello, the story seems to be interesting, but if I can make a remark, It is a bit tedious to read because it is difficult to differentiate dialog from narration. Could you differentiate more between the two ? put in punctuation mark or go to the line for the dialog ?

Best regards,
1/12/2021 c1 Phoenix Namikaze
thank you I will work on it
1/12/2021 c1 31Sakura Lisel
Hey you need to reupload all of your chapters.

First off, you need to put EVERYTHING in the proper paragraph format that SEPERATES everything that is being said and done in the story instead of them all of them being mashed together in ONE paragraph.

Second I don’t know if you did it on purpose, but another thing that needs to change is the lack of “ and ‘ for all of the SPEAKING parts of the characters.

The missing “ and ‘ combined with the mashed up paragraphs, is making it IMPOSSIBLE to tell exactly WHO is saying WHAT and WHEN they are saying it. *lol*

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