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9Cheetah kid
i don't want to start a riot or anything but i think that gretchen should've realized that the risk she took, she was going to die and she should've listen to her brother, so it was her own fault tgat she pays the prize for her own demise but now she can rest knowing she in heaven but she could avoided death if she listen to her brother hazel, and nowi feelbad for hazel that he lost a sister and it wasn't ozpin fault but her own, rip gretchen, and sorry for the blaming and rest in peace.
9Cheetah kidi don't want to start a riot or anything but i think that gretchen should've realized that the risk she took, she was going to die and she should've listen to her brother, so it was her own fault tgat she pays the prize for her own demise but now she can rest knowing she in heaven but she could avoided death if she listen to her brother hazel, and nowi feelbad for hazel that he lost a sister and it wasn't ozpin fault but her own, rip gretchen, and sorry for the blaming and rest in peace.
2/17/2021 c11 Qwark's Guest
Hey Nan. The Rebooted Ninja Gaiden Trilogy is gonna be on Switch. Are you planning to get the Master Collection?
Hey Nan. The Rebooted Ninja Gaiden Trilogy is gonna be on Switch. Are you planning to get the Master Collection?
2/17/2021 c11 39RGGAM
Hope you make the right choice and become a good guy Hazel your sister would be proud if you become a hero again
39RGGAMHope you make the right choice and become a good guy Hazel your sister would be proud if you become a hero again
2/17/2021 c11 10Kaizerthewriter
I literally cannot wait to see how you implement Xenoblade Chronicles 2 into your timeline of a story, I know it’s going to be good.
10KaizerthewriterI literally cannot wait to see how you implement Xenoblade Chronicles 2 into your timeline of a story, I know it’s going to be good.
2/12/2021 c10 Rufus Wilde
...All I'ma say is two things. One: Keep up the fine work on this story which has so far had very little or zero grammar issues unless intentional. Two: The little mid-air bit with Blake and Bowser reminded me of the waterfall scene from Emperors New Groove, I liked it.
...All I'ma say is two things. One: Keep up the fine work on this story which has so far had very little or zero grammar issues unless intentional. Two: The little mid-air bit with Blake and Bowser reminded me of the waterfall scene from Emperors New Groove, I liked it.
2/12/2021 c10 7
Awesome
Awesome
2/12/2021 c10 16LogBook
Fun chapter, nice reference to the emperor's new groove, fun battle against O'chunks and Dimentio and overall just a fun chapter.
16LogBookFun chapter, nice reference to the emperor's new groove, fun battle against O'chunks and Dimentio and overall just a fun chapter.
2/11/2021 c10 Megan Romero
Welcome to Team Bleck Mr. L and the Phantom Four. How about Team Rowan? At least Nastasia is trying to change Count Bleck's mind. Dry Bowser's fight in Flipside's Pit of 100 Trials caused a lot of aftershocks. Bowser's Arms! Hello Flopside! Hurry Merlon heal Dashell! Ah yes Land of the Cragnons very prehistoric. Ruby's observation is pretty spot on though it's mean that most of the group doesn't believe her. Ruby found most of the stone tablets by herself! Gloria and O'Chunks rematch! Bowser, Marnie, and Neo have great teamwork against Dimentio now what to call their team attacks? *Curious* Uh oh I have a bad feeling about Dimentio's "Acquaintance". That is one inspiring quote and Cudgel joined the group! Hopefully Ruby's theory can get through the other's thick skulls soon!
Welcome to Team Bleck Mr. L and the Phantom Four. How about Team Rowan? At least Nastasia is trying to change Count Bleck's mind. Dry Bowser's fight in Flipside's Pit of 100 Trials caused a lot of aftershocks. Bowser's Arms! Hello Flopside! Hurry Merlon heal Dashell! Ah yes Land of the Cragnons very prehistoric. Ruby's observation is pretty spot on though it's mean that most of the group doesn't believe her. Ruby found most of the stone tablets by herself! Gloria and O'Chunks rematch! Bowser, Marnie, and Neo have great teamwork against Dimentio now what to call their team attacks? *Curious* Uh oh I have a bad feeling about Dimentio's "Acquaintance". That is one inspiring quote and Cudgel joined the group! Hopefully Ruby's theory can get through the other's thick skulls soon!
2/11/2021 c10 3topaz3
I was gonna start throwing hands on the group this chapter for ignoring Ruby. but glad SOME people have a brain in this.
3topaz3I was gonna start throwing hands on the group this chapter for ignoring Ruby. but glad SOME people have a brain in this.
2/11/2021 c10 Jacob9594
Hmm Ruby is definitely onto to something with her theory. That was a good Scots fight. Nice to see what Mr. L and the Phantom four said to the rest of Bleck's minions.
Hmm Ruby is definitely onto to something with her theory. That was a good Scots fight. Nice to see what Mr. L and the Phantom four said to the rest of Bleck's minions.
2/8/2021 c9 7
Dry bowser
Dry bowser