for To Live Peacefully In This Wonderful World11/28 c1 Guest
Whats this? Its a mess. A mumbo jumbo of nonsense everywhere. Inconsistency that you pulled out of your ass. You need to remember that were not in your head, that whole mess that make sense for you because you're the one that came up with that, is a goddamn headach for us.
I gave up 30 sec in with Momo confessing out of nowhere for no reason at all. I can bet my balls on the fact that this will remain useless and serve no purpose at all for the rest of the story.
Whats this? Its a mess. A mumbo jumbo of nonsense everywhere. Inconsistency that you pulled out of your ass. You need to remember that were not in your head, that whole mess that make sense for you because you're the one that came up with that, is a goddamn headach for us.
I gave up 30 sec in with Momo confessing out of nowhere for no reason at all. I can bet my balls on the fact that this will remain useless and serve no purpose at all for the rest of the story.
5/20/2023 c13 Marshall Cross Marian
I think the Blue Demon mentioned here is Aqua. She was used by her followers to kill a race who forbid the sharing of their technology to the native inhabitants of the world. I think greed took over in the native inhabitants mind that they decided and think
I think the Blue Demon mentioned here is Aqua. She was used by her followers to kill a race who forbid the sharing of their technology to the native inhabitants of the world. I think greed took over in the native inhabitants mind that they decided and think
12/29/2022 c8 Banfan
I like what you did with Izuku and nana, and from a certain point of view makes him not seem ooc. that point of view is because Izuku is the host, when the souls mixed the two halves of Izuku did as well, Nana got the child like excitement and Izuku got the cool under pressure when he goes hero mode.
I like what you did with Izuku and nana, and from a certain point of view makes him not seem ooc. that point of view is because Izuku is the host, when the souls mixed the two halves of Izuku did as well, Nana got the child like excitement and Izuku got the cool under pressure when he goes hero mode.
5/2/2022 c13 
22Kingdark
Interesting story, only observation and critisism that I have, is that you randomly use a lower case i instead of a higher case I when needed. as in, i am walking on the road and it should be I am walking on the road.
One trick I personally use is auto replace. It will take a word, or anything basically, and it will automatically replace it with something else. In other words, whenever you type i it will replace it with I
22KingdarkInteresting story, only observation and critisism that I have, is that you randomly use a lower case i instead of a higher case I when needed. as in, i am walking on the road and it should be I am walking on the road.
One trick I personally use is auto replace. It will take a word, or anything basically, and it will automatically replace it with something else. In other words, whenever you type i it will replace it with I
12/12/2021 c13 Harleking31
Oh, retconning the Destroyer and the Crimson demons origins?
OK I suppose
Idea is great
Oh, retconning the Destroyer and the Crimson demons origins?
OK I suppose
Idea is great
5/18/2021 c13 10OniTenshi500
I have a feeling that Momo, Darkness, Izuku, and Nana are in the same place as Kyouya and Fio. Hopefully they can apprehend the two so they can be taken in, but since I also have the feeling that Kyouya is going to be a recurring antagonist, that probably won't happen. But since Kyouya ditched Clemea, I can see him ditching Fio too so he can escape.
Looking forwards to the next update.
10OniTenshi500I have a feeling that Momo, Darkness, Izuku, and Nana are in the same place as Kyouya and Fio. Hopefully they can apprehend the two so they can be taken in, but since I also have the feeling that Kyouya is going to be a recurring antagonist, that probably won't happen. But since Kyouya ditched Clemea, I can see him ditching Fio too so he can escape.
Looking forwards to the next update.
4/11/2021 c12 ProjectIceman
Was Kyouya this bad in canon Konosuba? Though it seems he is easing much more than before when he treated this life as so much of an MMORPG, that I believed he was the Spear Hero XD
Was Kyouya this bad in canon Konosuba? Though it seems he is easing much more than before when he treated this life as so much of an MMORPG, that I believed he was the Spear Hero XD