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for Is it Wrong to get Isekai'd into a Dungeon (or, by Truck-kun)?

4/12/2022 c7 Guest
Dear writter
Are you trying continue this novel, hope you continue this novel, i just wait for he came to Orario. But would you to put this novel in webnovel website
There all many fanfic novel about if wrong trying pick wrong girl in dungueon
12/16/2021 c3 BigRig2.0
trash fic
2/14/2021 c2 Ahtu
No mention of the MC being transgendered forcefully in the description, and certainly not into an unusually weak 13yr old female elf... And to add to that he's stupid in several ways. The system just explained he had perfect stealth for 2 hrs, which he could easily use to reach the surface, if he had half a brain. Instead of breaking out and crying. The system then clearly states he really is stupid as well. Add in the point that you make it a transmig OC to the world of Danmachi, but for some reason they still don't know shit about it...

You're not being upfront about the story contents, and certainly not selling it. Putting the MC in a situation where only raw luck could save them, then removing their luck. It either means it's a very fkn short story, or very badly written. Take your pick.
Either way, I am done here.

It's a pity you had to shoe-horn in all the worst tropes of the last 5 years(including this BS bait and swtich -.-). At least you know the language, and you wrote in a Glados-esque system. Things that can be made interesting with a smart MC. But nope! You just had to go the forced transgen route, make the MC both weak and retarded, hide the truth from the description, and then remove all his luck. Just to make the chances of him having a future as utterly unrealistic/uninteresting as possible.

But what vexes me the most, is the fact you're not linguistically inept, and got my hopes up - Just a moment before you shat all over them. This is probably the harshest review I've ever left over any such issues. But considering your bait and switch? I don't think I could have picked a more well deserving recipient. Be honest next time.
2/14/2021 c1 Chewybar
Pretty fun read. Like the OC as I am starting to dislike bell even though I love Danmachi’s world building. Looking forward to your next update
2/2/2021 c1 Guest
Y'know, dumbass who walks onto the street because she was only watching her phone doesn't deserve the Isekai experience, lol.
2/2/2021 c7 pix25
Damn, what’s up with the deduction skill review, it looks like my screen had a virus haha
2/1/2021 c7 M2R
ah wrong chapter commented.

also, Im curious, might have stated or not but i wonder why she never encountered people considered
she is truly in the dungeon beneath the babel tower
2/1/2021 c5 M2R
so the reward from leaving the dungeon will be substantial? considering the xp will be adjusted to what stated?
1/30/2021 c6 IsekaiFanBoi
Good so far but her system sucks.
1/22/2021 c6 5Soledge1
I wonder what her level will be like when she joins a family. will she start out as a Level one or higher do to the system. she can't lie to a god if they ask how she got so strong. time to learn so magic soon. start throwing fireballs or ice needles.
1/19/2021 c6 M2R
interesting, despite weak she uses biology weakness to deal severe damage. although the exp reward isn't satisfying but it is fine
1/19/2021 c6 5loop2
getting monster drop isnt that easy in danmachi but nvm... this might effect of gamer skill... i looks forward what happen with falna thing...
1/18/2021 c2 Alcov
All the shit talking from the system got old fast.
1/17/2021 c6 pix25
For such a low level character to be killing these high level monsters, must be the knife doing all the work
1/14/2021 c5 AnimeA55Kicker
You really must not like the OC to give her a system like that.
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