for The Self Made Man9/15 c74 FunkyDipShit
Rereading this story in tidbits. God i forgot how much of a cold and cunning badass jaune coukd be in this story “the king is dead…long live the king” goes so fucking HARD!
Rereading this story in tidbits. God i forgot how much of a cold and cunning badass jaune coukd be in this story “the king is dead…long live the king” goes so fucking HARD!
6/6 c68 Guest
Interesting choice to blackmail Jaune with the life of a character that literally no one cares about. And the escalation has gotten comical
Interesting choice to blackmail Jaune with the life of a character that literally no one cares about. And the escalation has gotten comical
4/7 c74 
16Myomo
okay, that part where jaune threatened catelyn is just so cold i finna need some blanket man
16Myomookay, that part where jaune threatened catelyn is just so cold i finna need some blanket man
4/3 c54 3maskedkeeper
Just played resident evil village. Now this duke looks like the games duke in my mind
3maskedkeeperJust played resident evil village. Now this duke looks like the games duke in my mind
2/2 c87 FatedWait
Окей, это определённо лучшая работа из всех фанфиков RWBY, которые я читал. Хоть фик и не был наполнен юмором, остальные составляющие были просто на космическом уровне. Спасибо за работу.
Okay, this is definitely the best work of all the RWBY fanfiction I've read. Although the fic was not filled with humor, the rest of the components were just on a cosmic level. Thank you for your work.
Окей, это определённо лучшая работа из всех фанфиков RWBY, которые я читал. Хоть фик и не был наполнен юмором, остальные составляющие были просто на космическом уровне. Спасибо за работу.
Okay, this is definitely the best work of all the RWBY fanfiction I've read. Although the fic was not filled with humor, the rest of the components were just on a cosmic level. Thank you for your work.
1/14 c87 EternalAnglo94
Ok I've really enjoyed reading this story kind of sad we didn't get to see Jaune conquer the Criminal Underworld fully but given how powerful he is now he's basically in charge anyway
On the Romance
I've read your other stories and the Romance was amazing in them but the "Romance" in this story felt hollow and never really felt like it was apart of the story but rather tacked on
I don't say that to be mean it's just seriously how it felt to me
I feel like the story would have been better without any of it
Ok I've really enjoyed reading this story kind of sad we didn't get to see Jaune conquer the Criminal Underworld fully but given how powerful he is now he's basically in charge anyway
On the Romance
I've read your other stories and the Romance was amazing in them but the "Romance" in this story felt hollow and never really felt like it was apart of the story but rather tacked on
I don't say that to be mean it's just seriously how it felt to me
I feel like the story would have been better without any of it
1/10 c41 EternalAnglo94
Ok I'm not a big fan of the Jaune-Dove scenes I don't hate them but it just feels like it doesn't add anything to the story
It's your story I'm not telling you what to do just stating my opinion
Ok I'm not a big fan of the Jaune-Dove scenes I don't hate them but it just feels like it doesn't add anything to the story
It's your story I'm not telling you what to do just stating my opinion
1/8 c24 EternalAnglo94
Jaune needs to wisen-up damn fast he's a Mob boss now that won't change even next year he's being idiotically naïve thinking that he can just walk away at any point it's time to dive feet in and take control
Jaune needs to wisen-up damn fast he's a Mob boss now that won't change even next year he's being idiotically naïve thinking that he can just walk away at any point it's time to dive feet in and take control
1/4 c87 Krump
Hi Couer, this was a really fun read.
A lot of people seem to be taking this one seriously, judging from the reviews anyways. Personally I though it was really interesting and fun for you to shake up the story in the ways you did.
And that’s just it, it’s fun, a lot of bad actors and larpers seem real insecure over certain choices or directions, but a lot of people seem to forget a person is behind the helm of all of this.
Either way, I’m sorry if this isn’t very constructive, trust me your work is an amazing discussion topic, both critically and for entertainment, but it just rubbed me the wrong way to see so many belligerent reviews.
Bah, you’re an adult, I’m sure you’ve had more nonsense ‘reviews’ than I could ever imagine, but it’s still sad to see people use this place as a means to detract your work.
In my opinion this was a delightful read, you really kept cohesion in a way I never expected, and honestly the focus on ‘side characters’ in this setting was very interesting to me.
Wishing you all the best, and as always, I’ll be reading whatever you decide to write up next!
Hi Couer, this was a really fun read.
A lot of people seem to be taking this one seriously, judging from the reviews anyways. Personally I though it was really interesting and fun for you to shake up the story in the ways you did.
And that’s just it, it’s fun, a lot of bad actors and larpers seem real insecure over certain choices or directions, but a lot of people seem to forget a person is behind the helm of all of this.
Either way, I’m sorry if this isn’t very constructive, trust me your work is an amazing discussion topic, both critically and for entertainment, but it just rubbed me the wrong way to see so many belligerent reviews.
Bah, you’re an adult, I’m sure you’ve had more nonsense ‘reviews’ than I could ever imagine, but it’s still sad to see people use this place as a means to detract your work.
In my opinion this was a delightful read, you really kept cohesion in a way I never expected, and honestly the focus on ‘side characters’ in this setting was very interesting to me.
Wishing you all the best, and as always, I’ll be reading whatever you decide to write up next!
12/26/2023 c87 Chudak
I feel like this story doesn't have enough side characters. In your other stories there's a side characters who do their own stuff or react to the protagonist's actions. Here's there just 400.000 words of just Jaune. Velvet and Sebastian just disappeared in middle of the story,friendship with CRDL and Ruby are not shown enough and Malachite sisters stoped being characters in halfway through.
I feel like this story doesn't have enough side characters. In your other stories there's a side characters who do their own stuff or react to the protagonist's actions. Here's there just 400.000 words of just Jaune. Velvet and Sebastian just disappeared in middle of the story,friendship with CRDL and Ruby are not shown enough and Malachite sisters stoped being characters in halfway through.