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2/9 c2 89Skylark Starflower
Aw, the start of this chapter is cute. :) Asp seems like a cool snake. Are they non-binary perhaps? I noticed you use they/them pronouns for them. (Shipping Acronix with serpentine is fun, though, ain't it? That boy is a scalie through and through. XD)

Hope you don't mind one bit of advice, though. Try putting in some kind of marker for scene breaks. While it's not too hard to tell when a new scene is starting in this chapter, sometimes it can be confusing if there's no visual notation. I personally use X's for mine, but you can do whatever you want.

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