for A Skeleton's Guide to not Dying again8/16/2023 c6 skyloxskyxdeadlox
I know this is old and you’ll probably never read this but what about hermaus mora daedric prince of KNOWLEDGE he really could have helped and the the only he could’ve possibly wanted was to probably see the dudes adventure to study the not undead skeleton so… just throwing this out there
I know this is old and you’ll probably never read this but what about hermaus mora daedric prince of KNOWLEDGE he really could have helped and the the only he could’ve possibly wanted was to probably see the dudes adventure to study the not undead skeleton so… just throwing this out there
4/10/2023 c8 turtleshep
please do more of this story it is really well written and has been pretty funny
please do more of this story it is really well written and has been pretty funny
1/13/2023 c5 
1Verdauga
Alright, pretty cool chapter overall, and him being 17 explains a bit of the emo.
1VerdaugaAlright, pretty cool chapter overall, and him being 17 explains a bit of the emo.
6/11/2022 c4 3XXxxxadisxxxXX
Gonna be honest here.
The first impressions on this are completely back and forth. The basic concept and writing are readable. The characters so far seem to be serviceable, this can change quickly with how you phrase your dialogue and their actions.
The system feels like it shouldn't even be in this fic with how you have it presented. It seems kinda arbitrary and useless as a system. There has been no real work or growth shown from the MC with it. It's just handed everything to him on a platter willy-nilly. It also contradicts itself to further the plot. It feels like it was thrown in either without much thought or as a side dish to the story. Either way, it feels underdeveloped and without a real "concept" for the system. I have more I could go into here for system-focused fics and my ideas of dos and don'ts, but this fic really feels like the system shouldn't even be in it from the writing so far.
I have more I could say on the believability of the fic and how there are issues with the details of what's happening in it, but that would come after this fic actually decides what it wants to be. Does it want to be a skeleton isekai? Does it want to be a Skyrim system SI? Does it want to be both? If so, the system needs to be completely thought out in how it's going to work from the beginning or it will lead to more inconsistency than has already been shown. Hell, it could also not want to be any of those. This could just be exploratory writing with a general idea of a concept and nothing else.
If it is that last one, I hope you find what you're looking for, and if not I hope you give this story some well thought out direction.
3XXxxxadisxxxXXGonna be honest here.
The first impressions on this are completely back and forth. The basic concept and writing are readable. The characters so far seem to be serviceable, this can change quickly with how you phrase your dialogue and their actions.
The system feels like it shouldn't even be in this fic with how you have it presented. It seems kinda arbitrary and useless as a system. There has been no real work or growth shown from the MC with it. It's just handed everything to him on a platter willy-nilly. It also contradicts itself to further the plot. It feels like it was thrown in either without much thought or as a side dish to the story. Either way, it feels underdeveloped and without a real "concept" for the system. I have more I could go into here for system-focused fics and my ideas of dos and don'ts, but this fic really feels like the system shouldn't even be in it from the writing so far.
I have more I could say on the believability of the fic and how there are issues with the details of what's happening in it, but that would come after this fic actually decides what it wants to be. Does it want to be a skeleton isekai? Does it want to be a Skyrim system SI? Does it want to be both? If so, the system needs to be completely thought out in how it's going to work from the beginning or it will lead to more inconsistency than has already been shown. Hell, it could also not want to be any of those. This could just be exploratory writing with a general idea of a concept and nothing else.
If it is that last one, I hope you find what you're looking for, and if not I hope you give this story some well thought out direction.
5/25/2022 c8 Guest
Good fic
Good fic
5/27/2022 c8 Hitler's Moustache
Gawd dayum. That reveal of Mirmulnir was probably the most dramatic I've ever seen in a story, as well being stupid accurate and my new favorite too
Gawd dayum. That reveal of Mirmulnir was probably the most dramatic I've ever seen in a story, as well being stupid accurate and my new favorite too
11/30/2021 c7 3Detsella Morningdew
Yeah, if people already know about Helgen in Riverwood, the Dragonborn should either be in the town, or on the road to Whiterun. (Which you just came from.) Things aren't going according to canon already.
3Detsella MorningdewYeah, if people already know about Helgen in Riverwood, the Dragonborn should either be in the town, or on the road to Whiterun. (Which you just came from.) Things aren't going according to canon already.