for The Snorkackic Trio2/16/2023 c14 Kai
I wonder if it's a crime to interfere in a police action. Nothing would ever come out of Dumbledore in court for that, he has imperiussed too many people in the ministry to be his slaves, more than Riddle, btw. Still, every night Dumbledore spends in a cell he can't hurt his victims, that is, everybody.
I wonder if it's a crime to interfere in a police action. Nothing would ever come out of Dumbledore in court for that, he has imperiussed too many people in the ministry to be his slaves, more than Riddle, btw. Still, every night Dumbledore spends in a cell he can't hurt his victims, that is, everybody.
1/17/2023 c17 Arjayess
Chapter 15 (Thanatos speaking):
"Well, a waste of part of my boon! Dobby, as your loyal House Elf, would already have lived as long as you did. Amelia Bones will probably miss her lover, Sirius Black, over the coming centuries. 'Pity' that!"
*Apparently, I've already 'reviewed' Chapter 18 and couldn't post this there. If it is the same as the last review, when I previously read the whole story, sorry.*
Chapter 15 (Thanatos speaking):
"Well, a waste of part of my boon! Dobby, as your loyal House Elf, would already have lived as long as you did. Amelia Bones will probably miss her lover, Sirius Black, over the coming centuries. 'Pity' that!"
*Apparently, I've already 'reviewed' Chapter 18 and couldn't post this there. If it is the same as the last review, when I previously read the whole story, sorry.*
1/8/2023 c18 
7jada951
I do so like reading revenge on Dumbles stories!
Talk about child abuse.
I also appreciated reading more about Luna and having her join H&H as the golden trio.
Well done!
7jada951I do so like reading revenge on Dumbles stories!
Talk about child abuse.
I also appreciated reading more about Luna and having her join H&H as the golden trio.
Well done!
1/7/2023 c18 3Ryan Chessman aka Crys
Keeping the information from AD is the surest way to torment him. Bravo.
3Ryan Chessman aka CrysKeeping the information from AD is the surest way to torment him. Bravo.
1/2/2023 c15 Fick Chick
He chose Sprout over Luna's Dad or her future husband or any of their future kids?
He chose Sprout over Luna's Dad or her future husband or any of their future kids?
1/2/2023 c18 Azentra
Whelp, apparently I'm just devouring all your stories now haha
God, I love your Luna. She's such a joy to read every time, no matter if you make her a full Seer like here or not, great fun.
It was also fun to finally meet Nigel, though you hyped him up a bit to much in advance, I was expecting a bit more from him, though he was still great fun to see and read about.
I really liked the love ritual and the idea that the founders performed it together as an explanation for how powerful they were and why
So yeah, not too much to say about this one, apart from that I really liked it. And I have to say I do like how so far, you've managed to prevent Draco being a total ass that needs to be imprisoned/killed in any of the stories I've read, which I appreciate. Most stories that have Draco as a side character don't do that. And of course I have to thank you for using Daphne to a small extent in pretty much all your stories. I love her even though she's not even really a character in the canon (maybe that's why, because of the freedom writers have with her)
Anyway, on to the next one!
Greetings,
Azentra
Whelp, apparently I'm just devouring all your stories now haha
God, I love your Luna. She's such a joy to read every time, no matter if you make her a full Seer like here or not, great fun.
It was also fun to finally meet Nigel, though you hyped him up a bit to much in advance, I was expecting a bit more from him, though he was still great fun to see and read about.
I really liked the love ritual and the idea that the founders performed it together as an explanation for how powerful they were and why
So yeah, not too much to say about this one, apart from that I really liked it. And I have to say I do like how so far, you've managed to prevent Draco being a total ass that needs to be imprisoned/killed in any of the stories I've read, which I appreciate. Most stories that have Draco as a side character don't do that. And of course I have to thank you for using Daphne to a small extent in pretty much all your stories. I love her even though she's not even really a character in the canon (maybe that's why, because of the freedom writers have with her)
Anyway, on to the next one!
Greetings,
Azentra
12/8/2022 c18 nightpurr1
Very good. I must admit I hate When SS dies. When it all comes together in the last book u understand the life time of heart break and having to be someone he didn't want to be because that's what AD request of him. I know its just a story but it was still heartbreaking. I always felt it was AD that made the man live and be the way he was. He never really had happiness except when he was with Lily.
okay enough of that. I enjoy your stories except that one part. I look forward to reading more of your writings.
Very good. I must admit I hate When SS dies. When it all comes together in the last book u understand the life time of heart break and having to be someone he didn't want to be because that's what AD request of him. I know its just a story but it was still heartbreaking. I always felt it was AD that made the man live and be the way he was. He never really had happiness except when he was with Lily.
okay enough of that. I enjoy your stories except that one part. I look forward to reading more of your writings.
12/6/2022 c18 Guest
Nice! I like both the similarities and the differences to some of your other stories.
Nice! I like both the similarities and the differences to some of your other stories.
9/23/2022 c18 libbyxoox
great story !
great story !
9/14/2022 c10 BlazeStryker
Headbastards Must Die.
They all must Die.
The Policy is to never raise more devils than you lay down and a headbastard is a duke of HELL.
Headbastards Must Die!
Headbastards Must Die.
They all must Die.
The Policy is to never raise more devils than you lay down and a headbastard is a duke of HELL.
Headbastards Must Die!
9/6/2022 c5 10kgfinkel
It's a wonder how no one in the Ministry ever considered offing Umbridge in a completely innocuous way like a leg-locker charm at the top of the stairs, a blinding hex and push in front of a muggle train, incarcerous ropes and dumping her in the DoM with a tag reading, "She's all yours! Have fun!"
The Tyranny of the Toad could've been forestalled before it became a real problem.
10kgfinkelIt's a wonder how no one in the Ministry ever considered offing Umbridge in a completely innocuous way like a leg-locker charm at the top of the stairs, a blinding hex and push in front of a muggle train, incarcerous ropes and dumping her in the DoM with a tag reading, "She's all yours! Have fun!"
The Tyranny of the Toad could've been forestalled before it became a real problem.