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1goblin81
A rare crossover and exceptionally done. Rachel Summers was incitefully chosen her history in the comics foreshadowing Vaders fall and redemption. This history giving you a means to forestall his prophesied fall by giving him a balance. I hope your muse returns you back to this story again.
1goblin81A rare crossover and exceptionally done. Rachel Summers was incitefully chosen her history in the comics foreshadowing Vaders fall and redemption. This history giving you a means to forestall his prophesied fall by giving him a balance. I hope your muse returns you back to this story again.
3/5 c4 44CLBONE13
Okay, that was BEAUTIFUL! Ekkreth was AWESOME! Leia was AWESOME! And Anakin TOTALLY named his Daughter after her. I REFUSE to believe otherwise! Also, finding the Kyber Crystals was BRILLIANT!
44CLBONE13Okay, that was BEAUTIFUL! Ekkreth was AWESOME! Leia was AWESOME! And Anakin TOTALLY named his Daughter after her. I REFUSE to believe otherwise! Also, finding the Kyber Crystals was BRILLIANT!
3/5 c1 CLBONE13
A. Okay, all of the Lore of Tatooine Fialleril created is AWESOME! I especially like that they have their own words for things and their own Gods.
B. Speaking of which, if I'm not mistaken gods (whether they exist in this world or not) are rarely referenced in the Star Wars Universe out of the Force as a (kind of) religion and the Ones/Ashla and Bogan. The only real exceptions to this are the Ewoks worshipping Threepio as a god in Return of the Jedi and the WEIRD worship of Mon Mothma's Home planet on Andor.
C. Okay, I don't know if Leia was named Leia INTENTIONALLY after the Great Dragon, but if Anakin TOLD Padme about those stories she may have decided...Also, let's just take in that they had names for both a boy and a girl ready, but didn't know they were expecting twins.
D. Okay, WHAT?
A. Okay, all of the Lore of Tatooine Fialleril created is AWESOME! I especially like that they have their own words for things and their own Gods.
B. Speaking of which, if I'm not mistaken gods (whether they exist in this world or not) are rarely referenced in the Star Wars Universe out of the Force as a (kind of) religion and the Ones/Ashla and Bogan. The only real exceptions to this are the Ewoks worshipping Threepio as a god in Return of the Jedi and the WEIRD worship of Mon Mothma's Home planet on Andor.
C. Okay, I don't know if Leia was named Leia INTENTIONALLY after the Great Dragon, but if Anakin TOLD Padme about those stories she may have decided...Also, let's just take in that they had names for both a boy and a girl ready, but didn't know they were expecting twins.
D. Okay, WHAT?
10/27/2024 c6 Doc scherer
Canonically not the children's version of the oath ir is the old oath the original from before the russan reformation which was made to end the lord's of light as a way to purposefully and permanently cripple the jedi order
Canonically not the children's version of the oath ir is the old oath the original from before the russan reformation which was made to end the lord's of light as a way to purposefully and permanently cripple the jedi order
10/24/2024 c17 ColdOnePaul
Stumbled across this story... and wow! It is fabulous.. I got thoroughly engrossed in reading the story of Rachel Summers and her presence in the Star Wars universe. I hope you will consider continuing this fabulous story! Thank you for sharing what you've written so far :) And I hope Rachel returns back to the balance... the Bendu, in between the Ashla and the Bogan. And wouldn't it be something if she were to meet the Bendu on Atollon someday?
Stumbled across this story... and wow! It is fabulous.. I got thoroughly engrossed in reading the story of Rachel Summers and her presence in the Star Wars universe. I hope you will consider continuing this fabulous story! Thank you for sharing what you've written so far :) And I hope Rachel returns back to the balance... the Bendu, in between the Ashla and the Bogan. And wouldn't it be something if she were to meet the Bendu on Atollon someday?
8/30/2024 c17 2chrisv002
Please update this soon. It is really good and I really want to know what happens next,
2chrisv002Please update this soon. It is really good and I really want to know what happens next,
8/8/2024 c17 Paul Dourlet
Excellent -keep going
Excellent -keep going
6/24/2024 c17 Guest
I both love and hate you - because you make all these amazing stories, and have a beautifully refined sense of drama, pacing & how to keep us on the edge of our seat...
which I gleefully despise yu for rn, because NOW I'm gonna go crazy waiting for the next chapter! *dies*
Always yu do this, you Magnificent Bastard!
And it's SO GOOD!
AAAAAA!
But in all seriousness, this is now one of my favorite SW crossovers I've read.
You always ️ surprise with them - they don't make sense till they do!
Live it! Love it! Please post more ️
I both love and hate you - because you make all these amazing stories, and have a beautifully refined sense of drama, pacing & how to keep us on the edge of our seat...
which I gleefully despise yu for rn, because NOW I'm gonna go crazy waiting for the next chapter! *dies*
Always yu do this, you Magnificent Bastard!
And it's SO GOOD!
AAAAAA!
But in all seriousness, this is now one of my favorite SW crossovers I've read.
You always ️ surprise with them - they don't make sense till they do!
Live it! Love it! Please post more ️
4/18/2024 c17 Woohoo
Really enjoyed this so far hope it gets continued at least a little because that’s cliff at the end of chapter 17 is too cruel
Really enjoyed this so far hope it gets continued at least a little because that’s cliff at the end of chapter 17 is too cruel
4/6/2024 c17 Anon jr
I really hope this story isn't dead!
I also really love your characterization of the various Jedi (and Sith). Unlike others, this is much closer to how I always perceived them. In AotC, Anikin flat out states that the bit about Jedi repressing or not feeling emotions is not a thing.
But thanks to the Travers Travisty, almost everyone goes on about it (and how Mandolorians are a match against Jedi). I hated those books. Travers has gone on to destroy other Fandom as well. Much like what Sweet Baby is doing to video games.
I really hope this story isn't dead!
I also really love your characterization of the various Jedi (and Sith). Unlike others, this is much closer to how I always perceived them. In AotC, Anikin flat out states that the bit about Jedi repressing or not feeling emotions is not a thing.
But thanks to the Travers Travisty, almost everyone goes on about it (and how Mandolorians are a match against Jedi). I hated those books. Travers has gone on to destroy other Fandom as well. Much like what Sweet Baby is doing to video games.