for Long Roads8/30/2021 c8 Patriciadiane
Loved meeting James and as a result seeing a side of Edward and his patience and kindness. Meeting James' father didn't expect that. Curious if it will come up later.
Loved meeting James and as a result seeing a side of Edward and his patience and kindness. Meeting James' father didn't expect that. Curious if it will come up later.
8/30/2021 c7 Patriciadiane
Love Anthony - both Alice and Edward should be proud of him and his kind heart. I know Esme is as well.
Wow and Wow, huh - cute
Love Anthony - both Alice and Edward should be proud of him and his kind heart. I know Esme is as well.
Wow and Wow, huh - cute
8/30/2021 c6 Patriciadiane
I love all of your characters but I must admit Esme is one of my favorites ever. Her heart, soul, and mind are an inspiration.
Love her advice to Bella. Talk to Edward
I love all of your characters but I must admit Esme is one of my favorites ever. Her heart, soul, and mind are an inspiration.
Love her advice to Bella. Talk to Edward
8/30/2021 c5 Patriciadiane
I knew the tribe would cause issues. He is pleading not guilty. Incredibly kind offer from Esme. Bella was so excited to be experiencing normalcy. Edward is a kind soul and a good man.
I knew the tribe would cause issues. He is pleading not guilty. Incredibly kind offer from Esme. Bella was so excited to be experiencing normalcy. Edward is a kind soul and a good man.
8/24/2021 c15 Guest
It would be really sad if you decided to put this story on hiatus. I love that Bella is getting stronger every chapter. i love that she has found love and a family with Edward. I also love that I know you will make sure that Jake and everyone in La Push will get what is coming to them!
I hope you decide to continue...
It would be really sad if you decided to put this story on hiatus. I love that Bella is getting stronger every chapter. i love that she has found love and a family with Edward. I also love that I know you will make sure that Jake and everyone in La Push will get what is coming to them!
I hope you decide to continue...
8/11/2021 c15 benjimg
This is such a well written story! Please consider continuing it. I would love to read how it turns out.
This is such a well written story! Please consider continuing it. I would love to read how it turns out.
8/11/2021 c15 
13archy12
I would really like it if you could complete this story. It's a very well-written story, and I'm sure all the readers are looking forward to Jacob getting punished, and Bella beginning her new life with Edward.
So, now Edward can't go back to his house? And obviously he can't bring Antony with him. What a pickle they are in!
Now that Bella has explained to him, he might be more adventurous with her.
How long will this media circus last? I hope not for very long.
13archy12I would really like it if you could complete this story. It's a very well-written story, and I'm sure all the readers are looking forward to Jacob getting punished, and Bella beginning her new life with Edward.
So, now Edward can't go back to his house? And obviously he can't bring Antony with him. What a pickle they are in!
Now that Bella has explained to him, he might be more adventurous with her.
How long will this media circus last? I hope not for very long.
8/2/2021 c15 grandmachix
Please! Don't put this on hiatus. I am so involved with this family. So many stories I get involved in and the author quits on me. I don't want to give up on WIPs.
Judy
Please! Don't put this on hiatus. I am so involved with this family. So many stories I get involved in and the author quits on me. I don't want to give up on WIPs.
Judy
8/2/2021 c14 grandmachix
The reception went well. After the sent Esme and Tony home, Bella decided it was time for the real deal. Edward was careful to avoid trigger movements ane the evening was perfect.
Judy
The reception went well. After the sent Esme and Tony home, Bella decided it was time for the real deal. Edward was careful to avoid trigger movements ane the evening was perfect.
Judy
8/2/2021 c13 grandmachix
I'm shuddering. Bella is getting her picture taken. The press and the Quileutes will know where she is. Alice should have thought of that. So should Edward have.
Judy
I'm shuddering. Bella is getting her picture taken. The press and the Quileutes will know where she is. Alice should have thought of that. So should Edward have.
Judy
8/2/2021 c12 grandmachix
Lemony was bound to happen. We were all expecting it. We didn't expect Angela, Bella's best friend, to be judgmental and accusatory. That's why she got the comments.
Judy
Lemony was bound to happen. We were all expecting it. We didn't expect Angela, Bella's best friend, to be judgmental and accusatory. That's why she got the comments.
Judy
8/2/2021 c10 grandmachix
I think Edward made a good impression on Charlie. Bella might be right, though, about the flirting.
Judy
I think Edward made a good impression on Charlie. Bella might be right, though, about the flirting.
Judy
8/2/2021 c15 Tiskit
This is such a wonderful story, but you need to do what is best for you. Your readers will be here whether you update next week or next year. I can’t believe that intern! She needs to be dealt with, otherwise she’ll probably do it again in the future if the opportunity arises.
This is such a wonderful story, but you need to do what is best for you. Your readers will be here whether you update next week or next year. I can’t believe that intern! She needs to be dealt with, otherwise she’ll probably do it again in the future if the opportunity arises.