4/25 c6 2Potato-Sama69
Damn this guy got that CoreyxKenshin upload speed

4/17 c6 Guest
Looking at Rose's design she can totally pass off as Shirou's older sister if you ignore the difference in race

10/14/2023 c4 12The Mad Mystic
Gonna be honest, half the shit so far feels like it's unnecessarily nerfing Shirou and nothing else.
I know it's typical in the fate community to wank servants to death and back, all while ignoring the humans fighting them directly, but... This just disappoints me. Whether or not people like to admit it, even if we ignore all physical feats involved, shirou was able to react to the weapons from the Gate of Babylon. By the end of the UBW route, he is absolutely a monster and I really wish more fics showed that. Especially when so much of the fun of these crossovers is that the nature of the crossover, danmachi having much easier magic, eliminates the main problem shirou has, that being magic capacity.

6/18/2023 c3 1Whyso Tizz
I’ll be very honest, this story is a real slog to go through. I hope you find yourself a beta because your English is not good and it reflects on how you do your dialogue and narration. It’s clunky and tends to throw readers off.

6/9/2023 c5 Yog-sothsoth
Thank you for "only one girl" comment. There is no such thing as realistic harem

6/5/2023 c2 Guest
Shirou shouldn't suffer due to the increase in age of god mana level is less than the mana in a reality marble as stated by Merlin in shirou fought archer and gil in the reality marble then simply being in age of gods area shouldn't reduce his combat ability.

6/5/2023 c2 Guest
Sighs,no age of god mana doesn't mean shirou is gonna get weakened.

in babylonia singularity Merlin says that mana in a reality marble is far denser than age of shirou can fight gil and archer in ubw that excuse kinda falls apart.

And no,shirou when wielding np should be servant level who can destroy small countries with just thier bare stats.

6/6/2023 c6 1SentinalSlice
I’m glad I finally read this. It’s really good.
It’s interesting that Shirou was originally going to try and learn to blacksmith to get back home, but now has sort of given that up. Will he still try to get the blacksmith skill? I think the mage development skill would suit him much better.
By the way, does he still glow all the time or has that stopped?
I look forward to more.