for Is it wrong to try to be a hero in another world?3/23/2021 c5 NomadicNine
Since this is UBW Route, mentions of Rin? Cause I doubt Shirou is going to end up falling in love with anyone else.
Since this is UBW Route, mentions of Rin? Cause I doubt Shirou is going to end up falling in love with anyone else.
3/23/2021 c5 FabledLife
Seems like a good pace for Shirou to acclimate himself with Orario and the dungeon. Can't wait for the shock of those of the Loki Familia and others learning of Shirou's Magecraft as well as the main story progress with his intervention. Makes sense for Shirou to now be able to beat Ryuu once after their second bout since Shirou can quickly adapt to others fighting style. Also, shouldn't Shirou have said Magecraft instead of Magic as he knows the difference between the 2? There are a few grammar errors such as some of the pronouns with his and her.
Keep up the good work!
Seems like a good pace for Shirou to acclimate himself with Orario and the dungeon. Can't wait for the shock of those of the Loki Familia and others learning of Shirou's Magecraft as well as the main story progress with his intervention. Makes sense for Shirou to now be able to beat Ryuu once after their second bout since Shirou can quickly adapt to others fighting style. Also, shouldn't Shirou have said Magecraft instead of Magic as he knows the difference between the 2? There are a few grammar errors such as some of the pronouns with his and her.
Keep up the good work!
3/23/2021 c5 Vini666
The smartest thing for Shirou is for him to go to the deepest floors instead of using weak weapons.
The smartest thing for Shirou is for him to go to the deepest floors instead of using weak weapons.
3/23/2021 c5 the-lost-memories6
Love the chapter, so Ryuu is one of shirou love candidate, can't wait to see who else Shirou will attract. Will it be the red were wolf rose so the a icy heart? Any ways keep up the great work.
Love the chapter, so Ryuu is one of shirou love candidate, can't wait to see who else Shirou will attract. Will it be the red were wolf rose so the a icy heart? Any ways keep up the great work.
3/23/2021 c5 
2MongoStomp910
Love this story! So few shirou-Danmachi fics and even fewer of those are consistently updated. So, quick query. I agree with avoiding the harem route but, at least for me, I think having two girls (my vote is for Ais and Ryuu, both because they’re my favorites and realistically I think they would be the two that would compliment shirou the most) would be understandable. I would assume that any confirmation of feelings leading to an established relationship wouldn’t happen until later on so building up these twos feelings for him would be fairly easier to write than a full harem and not much harder to write than a single pairing. Either way keep up the good work! Hope you read this and maybe I’ll be one of the lucky few you respond to lol looking forward to the next chapter.
2MongoStomp910Love this story! So few shirou-Danmachi fics and even fewer of those are consistently updated. So, quick query. I agree with avoiding the harem route but, at least for me, I think having two girls (my vote is for Ais and Ryuu, both because they’re my favorites and realistically I think they would be the two that would compliment shirou the most) would be understandable. I would assume that any confirmation of feelings leading to an established relationship wouldn’t happen until later on so building up these twos feelings for him would be fairly easier to write than a full harem and not much harder to write than a single pairing. Either way keep up the good work! Hope you read this and maybe I’ll be one of the lucky few you respond to lol looking forward to the next chapter.