for Is it wrong to try to be a hero in another world?3/23/2021 c5 
2MongoStomp910
Love this story! So few shirou-Danmachi fics and even fewer of those are consistently updated. So, quick query. I agree with avoiding the harem route but, at least for me, I think having two girls (my vote is for Ais and Ryuu, both because they’re my favorites and realistically I think they would be the two that would compliment shirou the most) would be understandable. I would assume that any confirmation of feelings leading to an established relationship wouldn’t happen until later on so building up these twos feelings for him would be fairly easier to write than a full harem and not much harder to write than a single pairing. Either way keep up the good work! Hope you read this and maybe I’ll be one of the lucky few you respond to lol looking forward to the next chapter.
2MongoStomp910Love this story! So few shirou-Danmachi fics and even fewer of those are consistently updated. So, quick query. I agree with avoiding the harem route but, at least for me, I think having two girls (my vote is for Ais and Ryuu, both because they’re my favorites and realistically I think they would be the two that would compliment shirou the most) would be understandable. I would assume that any confirmation of feelings leading to an established relationship wouldn’t happen until later on so building up these twos feelings for him would be fairly easier to write than a full harem and not much harder to write than a single pairing. Either way keep up the good work! Hope you read this and maybe I’ll be one of the lucky few you respond to lol looking forward to the next chapter.
3/23/2021 c5 Old leaf
Awesome chapter! Shirou already raising flags eh? but that was kinda expected of him ahah. Happy to see you use different characters as Aimid and Rose, i find them extremely under-used which is a shame as they are fairly interesting. Will they fall under the might of the skill harem-protagonist EX of our protagonist? Anyway i'm really interested to see how you are going to procede with the story, the danmachi world seem like one in which Shirou "heroic" trait can thrive but also one where his almost forgotten Human side can heal through establishing bonds with the members of his familia and in general of Orario, since they are much more open and genuine than the ones of his home world, not that this one lacks such characters obviously ;). Hope to see another update soon, i really like how this fic is coming out :)
Awesome chapter! Shirou already raising flags eh? but that was kinda expected of him ahah. Happy to see you use different characters as Aimid and Rose, i find them extremely under-used which is a shame as they are fairly interesting. Will they fall under the might of the skill harem-protagonist EX of our protagonist? Anyway i'm really interested to see how you are going to procede with the story, the danmachi world seem like one in which Shirou "heroic" trait can thrive but also one where his almost forgotten Human side can heal through establishing bonds with the members of his familia and in general of Orario, since they are much more open and genuine than the ones of his home world, not that this one lacks such characters obviously ;). Hope to see another update soon, i really like how this fic is coming out :)
3/23/2021 c5 1Voidborne II
Also, is it just me, or is Shirou starting to become something like Sengo Muramasa?
1Voidborne IIAlso, is it just me, or is Shirou starting to become something like Sengo Muramasa?
3/23/2021 c5 Voidborne II
Pretty sure Adamantite is FAR stronger and tougher than any steel in the real world. After all, it is the second-strongest metal in a fantasy setting and the weapons made by Adamantite perform better than weapons made from any type of steel. Also, Adamantite is not an alloy.
Pretty sure Adamantite is FAR stronger and tougher than any steel in the real world. After all, it is the second-strongest metal in a fantasy setting and the weapons made by Adamantite perform better than weapons made from any type of steel. Also, Adamantite is not an alloy.
3/23/2021 c5 Tordmund
Gracias por el capitulo, estuvo bastante buen, sigue con el buen trabajo. Valió la pena la espera XD
Gracias por el capitulo, estuvo bastante buen, sigue con el buen trabajo. Valió la pena la espera XD
3/23/2021 c5 1SentinalSlice
Shutout should also end up increasing his strength and endurance just by forging stuff. I’m surprised his magic didn’t increase more. If you think about it, every moment he has something projected and is fighting with a projection he is using his magic. It’s almost in constant use, so I’d expect it to go up faster.
Is Shirou trying to create the jeweled sword? Or something similar? Because that’s ambitious.
1SentinalSliceShutout should also end up increasing his strength and endurance just by forging stuff. I’m surprised his magic didn’t increase more. If you think about it, every moment he has something projected and is fighting with a projection he is using his magic. It’s almost in constant use, so I’d expect it to go up faster.
Is Shirou trying to create the jeweled sword? Or something similar? Because that’s ambitious.
3/23/2021 c5 sawtooth44
make a sword that can get him home?
sounds like a job for the Jewled Sword to at least be the first step
make a sword that can get him home?
sounds like a job for the Jewled Sword to at least be the first step
3/23/2021 c5 BatCornMan
Oh Rose is going to be shirou advisor, cant wait for them to interact with each other.
Oh Rose is going to be shirou advisor, cant wait for them to interact with each other.
3/21/2021 c4 6dutchsoldier
In spite of my commentary in my previous review, I would like to say the story itself is very good one, probably one of the most well written fanfictions I've read. Quite a bit better than my own ones back when I could still use my writing computer.
6dutchsoldierIn spite of my commentary in my previous review, I would like to say the story itself is very good one, probably one of the most well written fanfictions I've read. Quite a bit better than my own ones back when I could still use my writing computer.
3/21/2021 c3 dutchsoldier
I would like to point out from the authors note in chapter 3, as far as I remember fate didn't say the average human, but the average trained/fit human. I myself can run 30 kilometers per hour if I sprint and I'm only a military reservist and on the lower half of my platoon physical capability wise. Any actual well trained professional soldier can sprint 35 without much of a problem in most terrain types for some five minutes. Meaning that archer would come at 1050 on average, meaning that in the right terrain, he would be able to reach mach1. Meanwhile Cu would reach 1650 km per hour on average, meaning that even in horrible terrain he would reach mach1.
Wikipedia is written by random people who write up their own capabilities as either average or good, while in all practicality they're usually not, in addition the heroic spirits are beings who in life oft could fight Gods on almost physically equal or in rarer case fully equal level (or at the very least to such a level that their greater capabilities in other fields allowed them to even the odds) as such it would kind of make no sense to calculate their capabilities from those of a below average civilian.
I would like to point out from the authors note in chapter 3, as far as I remember fate didn't say the average human, but the average trained/fit human. I myself can run 30 kilometers per hour if I sprint and I'm only a military reservist and on the lower half of my platoon physical capability wise. Any actual well trained professional soldier can sprint 35 without much of a problem in most terrain types for some five minutes. Meaning that archer would come at 1050 on average, meaning that in the right terrain, he would be able to reach mach1. Meanwhile Cu would reach 1650 km per hour on average, meaning that even in horrible terrain he would reach mach1.
Wikipedia is written by random people who write up their own capabilities as either average or good, while in all practicality they're usually not, in addition the heroic spirits are beings who in life oft could fight Gods on almost physically equal or in rarer case fully equal level (or at the very least to such a level that their greater capabilities in other fields allowed them to even the odds) as such it would kind of make no sense to calculate their capabilities from those of a below average civilian.
3/10/2021 c2 2BrawlBroMario
You telling me this Shirou accepts to do a gods bidding after having the memories of hell etched into his soul from his future counterpart serving a god himself? You could at least put some flare to him joining the familia. I honestly thought he would know better than to trust a god.
2BrawlBroMarioYou telling me this Shirou accepts to do a gods bidding after having the memories of hell etched into his soul from his future counterpart serving a god himself? You could at least put some flare to him joining the familia. I honestly thought he would know better than to trust a god.