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1HeavyandHardcore
Lol, you mention Achilles, go into a thing about the Spartans. Achilles wasn’t a Spartan, he was a Myrmidon. Also, I hope you were able to pay attention in writing class since you’ve stopped writing stories, because even the stories you’ve written after this one, you still refuse to put a space between the commas, no matter how many times reviewers advised you to do so.
1HeavyandHardcoreLol, you mention Achilles, go into a thing about the Spartans. Achilles wasn’t a Spartan, he was a Myrmidon. Also, I hope you were able to pay attention in writing class since you’ve stopped writing stories, because even the stories you’ve written after this one, you still refuse to put a space between the commas, no matter how many times reviewers advised you to do so.
2/19/2022 c1 Achalon
If you can't bother to put a space after commas, then I can't bother to read this.
If you can't bother to put a space after commas, then I can't bother to read this.
9/8/2021 c3 X3runner
It was funny I would have cracked up if most everyone refused to believe it until like a double wedding or something drastic or over the top like that.
It was funny I would have cracked up if most everyone refused to believe it until like a double wedding or something drastic or over the top like that.
9/5/2021 c3 Gh0stSpartan
Shame this has come to an early end. Well it was a fun ride while it lasted.
Shame this has come to an early end. Well it was a fun ride while it lasted.
2/22/2021 c2 0akarigan0
Oh esos fueron argumentos muy fuertes para Weiss y Ruby. Pero son ciertos en gran medida. Me encantó el capítulo, esperó con ansias el próximo capítulo muchas
Oh esos fueron argumentos muy fuertes para Weiss y Ruby. Pero son ciertos en gran medida. Me encantó el capítulo, esperó con ansias el próximo capítulo muchas
2/19/2021 c1 Axccel
If everyone thinks you’re homosexual when you’re not, the opposite sex won’t approach you even if they’re interested in you as they’d assume they’d be rejected. I can see how that would be upsetting. Especially for hormonal teenagers.
If everyone thinks you’re homosexual when you’re not, the opposite sex won’t approach you even if they’re interested in you as they’d assume they’d be rejected. I can see how that would be upsetting. Especially for hormonal teenagers.
2/15/2021 c2 Zathol
Yeah I suppose so. Though I never tried to judge the characters what they were basically based off of as it was always seemed like a visual superficial way. They barley resembled their historic/fairy tale persona's where I can't project their fairy tail aspects on them at all. So saying Pyrrha does view herself in a spartan way seems iffy. I based her arrogance off more of the situation and the choices she made instead of any actual planning and not what she represents.
I do like her character but I feel they didn't add enough depth in her character to get a real understanding of the scope of her personality. In what she would do and why in certain situations. Like what was her true goal in life? She was already famous and we know she came to Beacon to make real bonds away from her fame. But did she want to be a hero? Did she just love fighting and want to face greater challenges? Was she competitive person or just a talented hard working huntress in training who felt she was duty bound to be a huntress just because she was a talented arena fighter?
Not expecting answers from these questions at all because it would be mostly base on speculation of what little is shown about her and anything else wouldn't be based on anything concrete. Still I liked her character and she just didn't get enough time to show more of what she could have been or what else made her personality.
Though interesting fact that I found humorous. All of Jaune's team are based of historic/mythical figures who all cross-dressed as the opposite gender for one reason or another. Which all four did to later become warriors or continue to be one. Which I like to think mirror Jaune's desire to trick his way into getting the chance to get into a huntsman academy despite not being prepared for it. Dressing himself in the guise of a hunter in training despite being a civilian at best. Though I think he manage to keep up well enough physically during initiation. I mean he managed to keep up with the rest physically despite his lack of training carrying around a metal shield and sword which has to count for something.
Achilles in some variation of history was hidden among someone's daughters disguised as a girl named 'Pyrrha'.
Ren and Jaune I don't think I even need to mention.
Apparently Thor dressed himself as a bride to reclaim his hammer which was stolen by a king who would only return it for the hand of Freyja. I guess even a thunder god like Thor would put on a dress to retrieve his trusty hammer.
So outside of that I can't really compare them any further to their historic/mythical counterparts.
But yeah I agree with many of your points. I won't go on further then this though.
Anyways about this chapter.
Least we see some reasonable reasons they do like Jaune and they aren't anything outrageous. They are simple and reasonable reasons which is good enough to gain an interest in Jaune. Jaune clearly knows his flaws but Yang and Blake can see the positives that no doubt Pyrrha saw. No one is perfect and sometimes people forget that when they question if they are good enough for someone when that question isn't really important where it matters.
Both girls see Jaune as someone who will stick with them and be a good man despite still raw grief in the loss of someone special to him.
I also agree that Ruby while seeing Pyrrha's death didn't have no where near the connection with her to truly compare to Jaune who had to experience a tragic goodbye and confession in all the same time.
Liked how Jaune can be sneaky to. That little get out of sight he pulled off at the end. If it worked or not we will see but it was pretty clever. Though with his luck I bet he finds himself in a lingerie shop and finds himself trapped by Blake and Yang who block the only exit.
Also I don't find it weird at all in a world as dangerous as this if they are willing to share him. They are partners on a team that have learned to fight together and live together, pretty much tolerate one another in order to survive on missions so it wouldn't be a stretch that they can easily bring in a shared lover into their dynamic. Jaune with his characteristic would be a good love interest once he got past the initial awkwardness and doubts. Which would eventually grow into a comfortable relationship once they all find their equilibrium.
Anyway thanks for latest chapter!
Yeah I suppose so. Though I never tried to judge the characters what they were basically based off of as it was always seemed like a visual superficial way. They barley resembled their historic/fairy tale persona's where I can't project their fairy tail aspects on them at all. So saying Pyrrha does view herself in a spartan way seems iffy. I based her arrogance off more of the situation and the choices she made instead of any actual planning and not what she represents.
I do like her character but I feel they didn't add enough depth in her character to get a real understanding of the scope of her personality. In what she would do and why in certain situations. Like what was her true goal in life? She was already famous and we know she came to Beacon to make real bonds away from her fame. But did she want to be a hero? Did she just love fighting and want to face greater challenges? Was she competitive person or just a talented hard working huntress in training who felt she was duty bound to be a huntress just because she was a talented arena fighter?
Not expecting answers from these questions at all because it would be mostly base on speculation of what little is shown about her and anything else wouldn't be based on anything concrete. Still I liked her character and she just didn't get enough time to show more of what she could have been or what else made her personality.
Though interesting fact that I found humorous. All of Jaune's team are based of historic/mythical figures who all cross-dressed as the opposite gender for one reason or another. Which all four did to later become warriors or continue to be one. Which I like to think mirror Jaune's desire to trick his way into getting the chance to get into a huntsman academy despite not being prepared for it. Dressing himself in the guise of a hunter in training despite being a civilian at best. Though I think he manage to keep up well enough physically during initiation. I mean he managed to keep up with the rest physically despite his lack of training carrying around a metal shield and sword which has to count for something.
Achilles in some variation of history was hidden among someone's daughters disguised as a girl named 'Pyrrha'.
Ren and Jaune I don't think I even need to mention.
Apparently Thor dressed himself as a bride to reclaim his hammer which was stolen by a king who would only return it for the hand of Freyja. I guess even a thunder god like Thor would put on a dress to retrieve his trusty hammer.
So outside of that I can't really compare them any further to their historic/mythical counterparts.
But yeah I agree with many of your points. I won't go on further then this though.
Anyways about this chapter.
Least we see some reasonable reasons they do like Jaune and they aren't anything outrageous. They are simple and reasonable reasons which is good enough to gain an interest in Jaune. Jaune clearly knows his flaws but Yang and Blake can see the positives that no doubt Pyrrha saw. No one is perfect and sometimes people forget that when they question if they are good enough for someone when that question isn't really important where it matters.
Both girls see Jaune as someone who will stick with them and be a good man despite still raw grief in the loss of someone special to him.
I also agree that Ruby while seeing Pyrrha's death didn't have no where near the connection with her to truly compare to Jaune who had to experience a tragic goodbye and confession in all the same time.
Liked how Jaune can be sneaky to. That little get out of sight he pulled off at the end. If it worked or not we will see but it was pretty clever. Though with his luck I bet he finds himself in a lingerie shop and finds himself trapped by Blake and Yang who block the only exit.
Also I don't find it weird at all in a world as dangerous as this if they are willing to share him. They are partners on a team that have learned to fight together and live together, pretty much tolerate one another in order to survive on missions so it wouldn't be a stretch that they can easily bring in a shared lover into their dynamic. Jaune with his characteristic would be a good love interest once he got past the initial awkwardness and doubts. Which would eventually grow into a comfortable relationship once they all find their equilibrium.
Anyway thanks for latest chapter!
2/12/2021 c2 X3runner
I dug this chapter and the non normal relationship is understandable for yang to be ok with abs see as optimal since if not for a similar relationship she would not have a sister or the happiest years of her life. Also while it was kinda mean I’m glad you didn’t just get rid of yangs hotheadedness when she lost control for a bit and pushed back on ruby and wiess. I also like how you noted how fixeted sun was with Blake being a faunis abs the fact that ninja Blake wouldn’t lat that fact about him slip. Also you could potentially mirror the whole summer tryed snd succeeded in bringing her dad from being depressed at the loss of raven and how she sees herself as being like the mother she actually loves. On the inconsistency with jaune’s character after Pyrrhas death it seems that they tried to split the anger between him and yang since the whole outbursts she has against Oz kinda feel forced with the whole Oz giving her mom snd uncle magic angers her for no reason where as jaune seems calm or maybe numb would be the right word
I dug this chapter and the non normal relationship is understandable for yang to be ok with abs see as optimal since if not for a similar relationship she would not have a sister or the happiest years of her life. Also while it was kinda mean I’m glad you didn’t just get rid of yangs hotheadedness when she lost control for a bit and pushed back on ruby and wiess. I also like how you noted how fixeted sun was with Blake being a faunis abs the fact that ninja Blake wouldn’t lat that fact about him slip. Also you could potentially mirror the whole summer tryed snd succeeded in bringing her dad from being depressed at the loss of raven and how she sees herself as being like the mother she actually loves. On the inconsistency with jaune’s character after Pyrrhas death it seems that they tried to split the anger between him and yang since the whole outbursts she has against Oz kinda feel forced with the whole Oz giving her mom snd uncle magic angers her for no reason where as jaune seems calm or maybe numb would be the right word
2/11/2021 c2 LuckyPickl3
You should put a space after each comma
I'm curious how blake and yang can contribute to his growth as a huntsman pretty good chapter
You should put a space after each comma
I'm curious how blake and yang can contribute to his growth as a huntsman pretty good chapter
2/11/2021 c2 22EternalInternalScreaming
Don't forget about space after each comma.
Also, imo that Yang comment about Pyrrha to Weiss is unwarranted and completely insensitive. Tough love really isn't the angle to go for here, plus it came off more as a petty no u more than anything else.
22EternalInternalScreamingDon't forget about space after each comma.
Also, imo that Yang comment about Pyrrha to Weiss is unwarranted and completely insensitive. Tough love really isn't the angle to go for here, plus it came off more as a petty no u more than anything else.