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1/19 c1 37seven dragons
This is such a touching story, to see Jean find healing in the sunroom.
1/19 c1 Mosaika
You almost made me cry! Oh, you captured Jean's very soul very well here, her softness and the simple desire for happiness, her courage, and strength.
And I adore the way you write it using the present tense, it feels like first-person narration.
1/19 c1 PerfectSublimeRebel
Beautifully written. I love how you traced Jean's rollercoaster of emotions through the different phases of her life, and the way you portrayed her early interaction with the Dr Thomas Blake.

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