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9/13/2003 c1 Hi
this is really cute! Are you going to write any more?
6/30/2003 c1 11CypherKitty
This is very funny, i was rolling around for ages... well kinda.

I think this is actually more realistic than the soppy "oh yeah i totally agree with you and never object" characters in the story.

I also adore the monopoly playing part, in fact it reminds me quite alot of something out of Terry Prachetts books but if not then, all i can say is it is excellent.

^_^
6/17/2003 c1 17JadedKatrina
Hey

This fanfic really is humorous, (sorry can't spell today)

Death Emperor: Like this hasn't happen before...

OH do shut up for once in your Ex-god life...

As I was saying before getting interupted (Death Emperor rolls eyes) it is really quite humorous and I can't wait to read more of the story.

By the way my story has been updated so please, please, please read if you would...

Death Emperor: You can get up from the floor now that you're done begging.

Roku: get back here you sorry son of a ...(Chases him with a sledge hammer)

where did that come from...

well while they destroy my home once again.

Please update, it is refreshing to read something humorous.

gotta go

Jadedkatrina
6/16/2003 c1 leels forgot how to spell her name again
(whos stoopid idea was "necrofeliac" anyway? oh yeah, mine, but lets not talk about that...)

:is havin fit of the giggles:

this fic very funny. keefyboi does look like a girl. "keefyboi"? i dun even want to kno what made me say THAT! prolly irn-bru, but you will not get irn-bru in whatever distant land u live in. irn-bru lives in scotland. it is orange and fizzy and makes ppl go HYPER! and makes them forget how to spell their own name. but irn-bru is correct spelling of drink. it's all u can remember when you have 3 cans in a row, its like "must get more irn-bru, is the water of life!"

or mebbe not. mebbe sane ppl stop at 1 can, but i'm not of the sane ppl league.

yep like i said is very funny, i would say more adgectives but i can't spell them. so think of ten words for "very funny" and its all of them, kay? i wanna see yuri crash a car or wotevr, he'd hav to drive a ford fusion, no?

oh an depends wot mood shes in wehen she reads this but greyfrars may wap you on the head for zhuzhen dementia jokes but dunno. acshully probly not ...

okays must shut up an go get more irn bru now!
6/15/2003 c1 Greyfriars
Well mine has a habit of turning "harmonixer" int "harmonica", but the second thing on the list of suggestions for a correct spelling is "food mixer". I don't know why it does that (I mean, "food mixer"? I don't think *anyone's* written about a food mixer on this computer ever!). But it's funny.

So is this, although this is a lot more funny than laughing at a spellchecker. Now I'm *really* looking forward to the bad guys, so update soon!
6/14/2003 c1 kimgrasshopper
*snort*, *cough*, hehehehehe!

Funy.

Perverted (I knew you'd like that one)

Only one comment:

"...depending on a pensioner..." Zhuzhen is 50, Margarete is ... 30? At least according to what I saw in the site info. Hm, concidering I'm also *0 ... no wonder I don't like the old coot. But he's no pensioner. (There Zhuzhen, I've defended your old hide, no run along and have day dreams about Ben and leave us all alone.) *sigh*

Kim
6/14/2003 c1 aegis
Hmm...Zhuzhen to Susan...O_o who wrote the fanfic with him in a dress?

It was pretty funny, and I liked it a lot. It'd be fun to see Yuri drive (can you please put that in?). The only thing I don't like is that Alice was again put down as 'helpless'. She DID save Yuri once, and she could probably hold her own in a one-on-one fight against the others (except maybe Yuri, but he's the hero; heros are almost always better than everyone else, those showoffs). But, this IS a parody, so everyone must be made fun of in equal doses.

The odd thing is, Yuri's the safest person for me in battle. I've never seen him go berserk (although Alice, on the other hand, is a completely different story).

And I liked the beginning paragraph best.

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