for Here We Go Again3/21/2022 c15 YermakGundyr
Wow! The "renegade" army general here being sympathetic and having some sort of a tragic and a 'meaningful' death scene instead of the original where "hurdur, this is unfair." I loved the scene of him dying at the hands of the Princess and cursing her for the actions of the Empire which makes her realize that there really is something wrong with her kingdom and thus makes Pina's reason for quickly siding with the Earth military more valid instead of just "Hurdur, otherworld military stronk".
Wow! The "renegade" army general here being sympathetic and having some sort of a tragic and a 'meaningful' death scene instead of the original where "hurdur, this is unfair." I loved the scene of him dying at the hands of the Princess and cursing her for the actions of the Empire which makes her realize that there really is something wrong with her kingdom and thus makes Pina's reason for quickly siding with the Earth military more valid instead of just "Hurdur, otherworld military stronk".
3/18/2022 c15 AsSeenInBaybayin
Ramirez! Get that peace treaty with the Formal Clan completed!
Ramirez! Get that peace treaty with the Formal Clan completed!
3/18/2022 c15 
2chekhov's firing squad
Love it, keep the chapters coming! I saw that you astrisk'ed KIA, was that an accident or did you forget to define it? My only comment is that there is little to no transition in-between scenes, but it's a super small detail that doesn't make any difference. Besides that, I always look forward to and enjoy your story.
Thank you for the chapter. And thank you for your service.
2chekhov's firing squadLove it, keep the chapters coming! I saw that you astrisk'ed KIA, was that an accident or did you forget to define it? My only comment is that there is little to no transition in-between scenes, but it's a super small detail that doesn't make any difference. Besides that, I always look forward to and enjoy your story.
Thank you for the chapter. And thank you for your service.
3/18/2022 c15 1thewookie1
Old Mage kicking ass, finally I get to see him actually do something in a fanfic lol.
How exactly do you clean a tank off from body parts? How can anyone stomach it?
Rory had fun, Itami dropped the mages off and ran lol, and the helicopters carved up ogres like Thanksgiving Day turkeys.
Pina is going to learn an awful lot over this story I'd assume.
1thewookie1Old Mage kicking ass, finally I get to see him actually do something in a fanfic lol.
How exactly do you clean a tank off from body parts? How can anyone stomach it?
Rory had fun, Itami dropped the mages off and ran lol, and the helicopters carved up ogres like Thanksgiving Day turkeys.
Pina is going to learn an awful lot over this story I'd assume.
3/18/2022 c15 Asianman2
quite a different take. not bad honestly but it did felt a bit rushed.
or having armor and air support is that much overkill. lol
great job. also glad our little birdy survived as well.
quite a different take. not bad honestly but it did felt a bit rushed.
or having armor and air support is that much overkill. lol
great job. also glad our little birdy survived as well.
3/18/2022 c15 8No Country For Old Men78
Great chapter! Really enjoyed it, and although there were things I enjoyed about the OG version, I do agree that this is more concise and better written. Keep it up and can't wait for the next chapter.
8No Country For Old Men78Great chapter! Really enjoyed it, and although there were things I enjoyed about the OG version, I do agree that this is more concise and better written. Keep it up and can't wait for the next chapter.
3/15/2022 c14 Guest
God, you can smell Aldritch’s and Pina’s sexual tension all the way from fucking Ginza lol.
God, you can smell Aldritch’s and Pina’s sexual tension all the way from fucking Ginza lol.
3/15/2022 c3 Guest
Hey, you got something for that Dollar Tree Gozer? Bitch needs a reason why she sucks.
Hey, you got something for that Dollar Tree Gozer? Bitch needs a reason why she sucks.
3/11/2022 c14 Sirius-about-harmione
Great chapter. I recently got recommended this fic and binged it in a day, been waiting for an update for a couple weeks. I'm curious as to if Aldritch's pledge is forshadowing something. Do you have some sort of update schedule? Or is it just whenever you're free? Can't wait for the next chapter, wanna see the action.
Great chapter. I recently got recommended this fic and binged it in a day, been waiting for an update for a couple weeks. I'm curious as to if Aldritch's pledge is forshadowing something. Do you have some sort of update schedule? Or is it just whenever you're free? Can't wait for the next chapter, wanna see the action.