for Mass Effect: Per Tenebras Lux
1612/7/2021 c1 UNSC ODST
Interesting story concept, I like the alternative technology path for having an upsetting element to the ME status quo. I hope you continue the story, I'm very curious to see how it unfolds
Interesting story concept, I like the alternative technology path for having an upsetting element to the ME status quo. I hope you continue the story, I'm very curious to see how it unfolds
11/26/2021 c1 Tautomer
I like your idea (first contact OP humanity are my favourite).
A little bit of criticism: I don't think that an experienced officer would decide to attack one of the newly discovered aliens, even though one of the groups is obviously hostile. It would make more sense (in my oppinion), if the commander waited for the "squids" to take hostile actions against humans. Maybe, if an AI managed to create translators, the commander could broadcast something along the lines of: "this is human territory, etc., power down your weapons or we will open fire." Or just wait for the "squids" to attack them as well. It would give the commander a valid reason to basically begin a war with new species.
That said, I am looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully it won't take years :)
I like your idea (first contact OP humanity are my favourite).
A little bit of criticism: I don't think that an experienced officer would decide to attack one of the newly discovered aliens, even though one of the groups is obviously hostile. It would make more sense (in my oppinion), if the commander waited for the "squids" to take hostile actions against humans. Maybe, if an AI managed to create translators, the commander could broadcast something along the lines of: "this is human territory, etc., power down your weapons or we will open fire." Or just wait for the "squids" to attack them as well. It would give the commander a valid reason to basically begin a war with new species.
That said, I am looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully it won't take years :)
1/28/2021 c1 MM
Element Zero?
Element Zero?
1/28/2021 c1 Sorentia
Must... Have... Maor!
Sorry, the story just made me stupid with it's stupidly high quality and interesting take on things. I'll be watching this with avid interest and once I remember my password, I'll log in and make comments on all the chapters.
Must... Have... Maor!
Sorry, the story just made me stupid with it's stupidly high quality and interesting take on things. I'll be watching this with avid interest and once I remember my password, I'll log in and make comments on all the chapters.