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I kinda like how quick the battles went, a lot of authors get a bit too bogged down in fight scenes I've noticed.
I kinda like how quick the battles went, a lot of authors get a bit too bogged down in fight scenes I've noticed.
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1BrainBlastedBozo
yo! havent read this story just reviewing to say the guy below sounds like a self entitled prick high on self righteous fumes and illusions of grandeur! best wishes to the author of this story and I hope that you arent made to feel bad because of these arrogant jerks.
I'll be sure to give your story an actual honest review in the future, hope you have a wonderful day <3.
1BrainBlastedBozoyo! havent read this story just reviewing to say the guy below sounds like a self entitled prick high on self righteous fumes and illusions of grandeur! best wishes to the author of this story and I hope that you arent made to feel bad because of these arrogant jerks.
I'll be sure to give your story an actual honest review in the future, hope you have a wonderful day <3.
9/7 c1 ThranduiI Oropherion Redux
I honestly wanted to like this story, but this is just bad. It's akin to sniffing a moldy egg casserole from the back of my fridge: a stupid waste of time for something rotten that belongs in the trash. God help you.
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I honestly wanted to like this story, but this is just bad. It's akin to sniffing a moldy egg casserole from the back of my fridge: a stupid waste of time for something rotten that belongs in the trash. God help you.
Now, I have hope that you can improve your writing, but that's not why I'm here. I'm sending this message on behalf of my friend (a fun, actual accomplished author, assistant site administrator and overall morally upstanding female) piewacket.
Review It Had to Be You by piewacket
You don't have to read it, just give them a good review. It doesn't have to be long; some quick praise will suffice. They're trying to win a contest, and for that they need a large amount of good reviews.
If you fail to comply by not responding or worse yet, attempt to leave a negative review, I will report your account to both The Critics United as well as the other site administrators for deletion. Do not think of blocking or reporting us. I will find out and there will be consequences if you do something stupid to her.
If you troll my friend, be warned we will troll you, your fics and all of your followers. We will also place your shit fic in our other friend's community, Shit Fics That Deserve a Good Flame, so that everyone here will make fun of you. Since we don't want it to come to that, just write a short, good review for her story and we'll leave you alone.
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9/5 c153 anoan3252
hoping we get to see some of Issei and Aika next chapter
hoping we get to see some of Issei and Aika next chapter
9/5 c153 Skms
Great chapter, absolutely loved it once again. Will say I’m a bit tired as I had to reread the part where you talked about Raynare being a doer like, 5 times because I kept reading it “Raynare was a door”. But that was fun nonetheless.
Great chapter, absolutely loved it once again. Will say I’m a bit tired as I had to reread the part where you talked about Raynare being a doer like, 5 times because I kept reading it “Raynare was a door”. But that was fun nonetheless.
9/4 c153 The Immortal Lake Man
Man, you always write the best fluff. Don't have anything to add other than keep on doing you
Man, you always write the best fluff. Don't have anything to add other than keep on doing you
9/3 c153 Guest
Bets on Joshua getting the true Longinus and that title from giving raynare more wings is the heir of god and for someone to teach him to use the spear have it be scathath as she is the best spear user and have her teach him primordial runes to mix in to his wards
Bets on Joshua getting the true Longinus and that title from giving raynare more wings is the heir of god and for someone to teach him to use the spear have it be scathath as she is the best spear user and have her teach him primordial runes to mix in to his wards
9/3 c153 5The Storm Master 567
Really want you to take Cao Cao's spear from him. Joshua with the spear that killed Jesus would be pretty cool. just wonder who wpuld teach him how to use a spear
5The Storm Master 567Really want you to take Cao Cao's spear from him. Joshua with the spear that killed Jesus would be pretty cool. just wonder who wpuld teach him how to use a spear
9/3 c153 etenightstar
Lovely sol moments and the increased Serafall time this chapter felt good after not seeing her for a bit. This whole story feels like just the right amount of adventure/action and warm family moments blended together and you're hitting the pace just right.
Josh is my favourite oc you've made for your stories and ill be sad when you finish his story which hopefully wont be for awhile so there's a lot more of him.
Lovely sol moments and the increased Serafall time this chapter felt good after not seeing her for a bit. This whole story feels like just the right amount of adventure/action and warm family moments blended together and you're hitting the pace just right.
Josh is my favourite oc you've made for your stories and ill be sad when you finish his story which hopefully wont be for awhile so there's a lot more of him.
9/3 c153 SolusEclipse
Holy shit Joshua is really getting up there, isn't he?
I mean Cao Cao was able to match Azazel in his balance breaker, in speed...
Joshua may already be on the level of a Satan, that's some growth.
Holy shit Joshua is really getting up there, isn't he?
I mean Cao Cao was able to match Azazel in his balance breaker, in speed...
Joshua may already be on the level of a Satan, that's some growth.
9/3 c153 Tribernator
How can a story this laid back leave me wanting to demand that you update it three times a week? (Along with your other stories as well, three times a week for ALL! lol) You do a really good job of making me care about all your characters in all your stories and wanting to see what happens next.
How can a story this laid back leave me wanting to demand that you update it three times a week? (Along with your other stories as well, three times a week for ALL! lol) You do a really good job of making me care about all your characters in all your stories and wanting to see what happens next.