for Northern Wind12/10/2023 c35 Estis68
This chapter was so good. Can't wait to read the next one and Meera's adventures.
This chapter was so good. Can't wait to read the next one and Meera's adventures.
12/10/2023 c35 cameron1812
Love that Shireen has learned from the Starks and does what needs to be done
Love that Shireen has learned from the Starks and does what needs to be done
12/10/2023 c35 
8Jebest4781
Great entry to see how this was done here. Can't wait for more when possible.
8Jebest4781Great entry to see how this was done here. Can't wait for more when possible.
12/10/2023 c35 EP
sympa
merci pour la lecture
sympa
merci pour la lecture
12/10/2023 c35 19Puffgirl1952 the 2nd
I also put the link to this on AO3, on my story...can't wait to read more and see what other battle will come.
19Puffgirl1952 the 2ndI also put the link to this on AO3, on my story...can't wait to read more and see what other battle will come.
12/8/2023 c34 Joe02
Hey Sage...Just checking in to see if there was anything new. Was reading some of the comments, and I hope you continue to ignore the less desirable comments, and continue to write the story you want to write. For they lack imagination and in the end really don't matter. If they had any talent they would be writing a story of their own and not trying to tear apart someone else's work. Some people just like to be negative in life. I'll be the first to admit I don't have the talent or patience to write a story, but enjoy coming on to the site to read other's work. Anyway, I hope you continue and look forward to your next chapters.
Hey Sage...Just checking in to see if there was anything new. Was reading some of the comments, and I hope you continue to ignore the less desirable comments, and continue to write the story you want to write. For they lack imagination and in the end really don't matter. If they had any talent they would be writing a story of their own and not trying to tear apart someone else's work. Some people just like to be negative in life. I'll be the first to admit I don't have the talent or patience to write a story, but enjoy coming on to the site to read other's work. Anyway, I hope you continue and look forward to your next chapters.
12/3/2023 c34 Angela
This is one of my favorite fanfics and I occasionally reread even when there are no updates. Thank you so much for posting.
This is one of my favorite fanfics and I occasionally reread even when there are no updates. Thank you so much for posting.
12/3/2023 c15 1jdboss2
a excellent well written Game of thrones story
But there are several gaping problems
-
1 the connection to the Harry Potter universe is irrelevant and the one or two mansions every chapter is so out of place it is pointless to even entering it
this story has no connection to Harry Potter and has no need for it
2 Your character is a supposedly Harry Potter turned female but only was his memories of the same age Harry
your main character acts nothing like Harry Potter
Harry Potter is an idiot
Harry Potter does not kill
Harry Potter doesn't know science
The idea that your Harry now turned female suddenly really really clever in
politics
intrigue
physical combat
inventions that would take the mediaeval world by storm
is laughable is totally actually ridiculously laughable
Your character has too overpowered
and his bloody ridiculous
3 you spend half your time criticising and bashing women and act like being a woman is bad and you must act like being a man
this is ridiculous
men hen women have different traits different qualities different roles
the idea that you're main character wants to run around and pretend she is a man while preaching how much she hates the role of women
4 having women serving mediaeval combat is laughable
women are physically weaker
women do not have the mentality to fighting kill
most importantly women are more important for the community
if the women die who's going to breed the next generation
it is not required many men to survive a battle to go home and impregnate all the women
You might think adding women to your army doubles the size of it
no it doesn't
99.9999999999999999999999999999999999999999% of women and not suitable the military
Yes you can get the occasional freak like Brion of the rainbow guard
if a mediaeval army had women in it they would lose I no longer exist
as all of they women will be dead and who's going to breed
On average trained mediaeval guard
can kill easily they well-trained woman soldier
quite a few mediaeval YouTube channels have demonstrated this
Women should be the last line of defence
Look at any sporting competition
men at so considerably stronger and women it is laughable
A woman can kill a man only if the following
1 be very lucky
2 the man she's fighting is asleep
3 the man is naked and doesn't have a weapon
4 the gods on her side
5 she's trained from birth
6 is at peak human strength
7 she has a genetic abnormality making her super exceptional
8 she has taken body enhancement drugs
9 she has backup
10 she's using a ballista, fortified location and the man is in the open and tied to a post she has been limited arrows
Other than these important points your story is well written
and a pretty interesting story
1jdboss2a excellent well written Game of thrones story
But there are several gaping problems
-
1 the connection to the Harry Potter universe is irrelevant and the one or two mansions every chapter is so out of place it is pointless to even entering it
this story has no connection to Harry Potter and has no need for it
2 Your character is a supposedly Harry Potter turned female but only was his memories of the same age Harry
your main character acts nothing like Harry Potter
Harry Potter is an idiot
Harry Potter does not kill
Harry Potter doesn't know science
The idea that your Harry now turned female suddenly really really clever in
politics
intrigue
physical combat
inventions that would take the mediaeval world by storm
is laughable is totally actually ridiculously laughable
Your character has too overpowered
and his bloody ridiculous
3 you spend half your time criticising and bashing women and act like being a woman is bad and you must act like being a man
this is ridiculous
men hen women have different traits different qualities different roles
the idea that you're main character wants to run around and pretend she is a man while preaching how much she hates the role of women
4 having women serving mediaeval combat is laughable
women are physically weaker
women do not have the mentality to fighting kill
most importantly women are more important for the community
if the women die who's going to breed the next generation
it is not required many men to survive a battle to go home and impregnate all the women
You might think adding women to your army doubles the size of it
no it doesn't
99.9999999999999999999999999999999999999999% of women and not suitable the military
Yes you can get the occasional freak like Brion of the rainbow guard
if a mediaeval army had women in it they would lose I no longer exist
as all of they women will be dead and who's going to breed
On average trained mediaeval guard
can kill easily they well-trained woman soldier
quite a few mediaeval YouTube channels have demonstrated this
Women should be the last line of defence
Look at any sporting competition
men at so considerably stronger and women it is laughable
A woman can kill a man only if the following
1 be very lucky
2 the man she's fighting is asleep
3 the man is naked and doesn't have a weapon
4 the gods on her side
5 she's trained from birth
6 is at peak human strength
7 she has a genetic abnormality making her super exceptional
8 she has taken body enhancement drugs
9 she has backup
10 she's using a ballista, fortified location and the man is in the open and tied to a post she has been limited arrows
Other than these important points your story is well written
and a pretty interesting story
12/2/2023 c34 Kerchowder
My man, I understand that writing and publishing two chapters every month is hard work, perhaps you work even harder that a firefighter. That's why I humbly retract all of my previous statements about your upload schedule. Now that I realise how hard you work on your two monthly chapters, I humbly apologise about all of my previous comments that I made about it.
My man, I understand that writing and publishing two chapters every month is hard work, perhaps you work even harder that a firefighter. That's why I humbly retract all of my previous statements about your upload schedule. Now that I realise how hard you work on your two monthly chapters, I humbly apologise about all of my previous comments that I made about it.
12/2/2023 c34 999galaa
When is update?, I've been reading your stories since 2016. I like this story no matter what other people says because fiction is different event, or what if story and ending for me. Why some people judge it when it is author's fiction. If they don't like it their choice, they can read different fiction.
When is update?, I've been reading your stories since 2016. I like this story no matter what other people says because fiction is different event, or what if story and ending for me. Why some people judge it when it is author's fiction. If they don't like it their choice, they can read different fiction.
12/2/2023 c7 jdboss2
Jon Snow is a bastard and has no claim to the iron Throne the Iron Throne.
I'm really annoyed at many fan fiction writers overlook the established laws of succession in WesterosIn the intricate political landscape of Westeros, lineage and legal legitimacy play pivotal roles. Your story proposes Jon Snow as the legitimate heir, a notion I find fundamentally flawed. Jon, as we well know, is a bastard. His mother, Lyanna Stark, was abducted, negating any legal union with Rhaegar Targaryen as it lacked the consent of her lord father. Without his approval, any marriage, even if officiated by a high septon, holds no legal ground in the realm.
This oversight seems to overlook the established laws of succession in Westeros. Jon's claim is further weakened by his status as a Stark bastard, lacking any formal recognition or legitimization by his supposed father, Rhaegar.
Therefore, the true line of succession, as per the laws of the land, would place Viserys Targaryen (Viserys III) next in line. Upon his demise, the crown should logically pass to the eldest Baratheon brother, making Stannis Baratheon the rightful ruler following King Robert's death, considering the traditional exclusion of female heirs in succession.
Jon Snow is a bastard and has no claim to the iron Throne the Iron Throne.
I'm really annoyed at many fan fiction writers overlook the established laws of succession in WesterosIn the intricate political landscape of Westeros, lineage and legal legitimacy play pivotal roles. Your story proposes Jon Snow as the legitimate heir, a notion I find fundamentally flawed. Jon, as we well know, is a bastard. His mother, Lyanna Stark, was abducted, negating any legal union with Rhaegar Targaryen as it lacked the consent of her lord father. Without his approval, any marriage, even if officiated by a high septon, holds no legal ground in the realm.
This oversight seems to overlook the established laws of succession in Westeros. Jon's claim is further weakened by his status as a Stark bastard, lacking any formal recognition or legitimization by his supposed father, Rhaegar.
Therefore, the true line of succession, as per the laws of the land, would place Viserys Targaryen (Viserys III) next in line. Upon his demise, the crown should logically pass to the eldest Baratheon brother, making Stannis Baratheon the rightful ruler following King Robert's death, considering the traditional exclusion of female heirs in succession.