for Northern Wind4/8 c38 isa
que hermosa historia estuve contigo casi desde el principio que tumusa continue
que hermosa historia estuve contigo casi desde el principio que tumusa continue
3/28 c38 
1AiyaKnight
So after spending the last day and a half reading the story I Really only have a few things to say. Most of it was good. I think the arc of the fight for dawn was good, really well written. Some of the POV changes felt like whiplash. I honestly ignored all the Danny arc stuff and it didn't make a single bit of difference in the end. You never did anything with the two Valarian steal swords in the stark vault. The ending was hella rushed. I know you already admitted that but this story deserved a better ending. I expected some kind of end with loki and sif, either them going back to asguard or harry going back to hogwarts. Some of the stanis vs loras renly stuff was just a drag and i skipped a fair bit of it. You pretty much did the same thing JKR did in her book end where you took all the characters and married them off no matter of age difference like a kid playing with action figures making sure each one has some one to kiss. I have to say though I would have to give this story a 7.5 / 10 Stars. Its good, better than most harry in westeros out there but I will not re-read this. Good job!
1AiyaKnightSo after spending the last day and a half reading the story I Really only have a few things to say. Most of it was good. I think the arc of the fight for dawn was good, really well written. Some of the POV changes felt like whiplash. I honestly ignored all the Danny arc stuff and it didn't make a single bit of difference in the end. You never did anything with the two Valarian steal swords in the stark vault. The ending was hella rushed. I know you already admitted that but this story deserved a better ending. I expected some kind of end with loki and sif, either them going back to asguard or harry going back to hogwarts. Some of the stanis vs loras renly stuff was just a drag and i skipped a fair bit of it. You pretty much did the same thing JKR did in her book end where you took all the characters and married them off no matter of age difference like a kid playing with action figures making sure each one has some one to kiss. I have to say though I would have to give this story a 7.5 / 10 Stars. Its good, better than most harry in westeros out there but I will not re-read this. Good job!
3/19 c14 Lupina Maeve Lupin
Deuses eu só estou no capitulo 14 e ainda tenho tanto a explorar nessa história, isso é tão bom!
Deuses eu só estou no capitulo 14 e ainda tenho tanto a explorar nessa história, isso é tão bom!
3/18 c38 Guest
Love the story and enjoy the ending but if possible can there be a small epilog with a 1,000 to 2,000 years in the future?
Love the story and enjoy the ending but if possible can there be a small epilog with a 1,000 to 2,000 years in the future?
3/17 c8 Lupina Maeve Lupin
Por algum motivo meu tradutor fica traduzindo 'Liege Lord' para lorde/senhor de mentira, fiquei tão confusa que fui procurar o significado de Liege e ainda não consigo entender como esse erro de tradução aconteceu, mas tornou um pouco engraçado de se ler porque minha mente ficava criando cenarios estranhos toda vez que a palavra aparecia.
(Pelo menos acho que foi nesse capitulo que meu tradutor cometeu o erro, sinceramente me perdi na passagem dos capitulos por conta da fluidez da história que me lembra muito das histórias 'Conde do Norte' e 'The Tale of The French Prince', ambas de Harry Potter também e com uma vibe parecida)
Me surprendi com a aparição do Loki, sinto que a lança da Meera tem algo haver com ele e muito possivelmente seja a lança de Odin, o que me faz pensar...Meera é tipo um Odin feminino,mas mais bonito e muito mais simpatico do que o original, até um par de lobos e corvos ela tem pelo amor dos deuses (só espero que ela não fique cega de um olho, ai seria conhecidência de mais até).
Por algum motivo meu tradutor fica traduzindo 'Liege Lord' para lorde/senhor de mentira, fiquei tão confusa que fui procurar o significado de Liege e ainda não consigo entender como esse erro de tradução aconteceu, mas tornou um pouco engraçado de se ler porque minha mente ficava criando cenarios estranhos toda vez que a palavra aparecia.
(Pelo menos acho que foi nesse capitulo que meu tradutor cometeu o erro, sinceramente me perdi na passagem dos capitulos por conta da fluidez da história que me lembra muito das histórias 'Conde do Norte' e 'The Tale of The French Prince', ambas de Harry Potter também e com uma vibe parecida)
Me surprendi com a aparição do Loki, sinto que a lança da Meera tem algo haver com ele e muito possivelmente seja a lança de Odin, o que me faz pensar...Meera é tipo um Odin feminino,mas mais bonito e muito mais simpatico do que o original, até um par de lobos e corvos ela tem pelo amor dos deuses (só espero que ela não fique cega de um olho, ai seria conhecidência de mais até).
3/16 c38 l30rusty
i enjoyed the book very much the ending could be dusted up a bit but even so amazing story
i enjoyed the book very much the ending could be dusted up a bit but even so amazing story
3/15 c32 l30rusty
i dont believe the attack would of been successful on all three targets at once there'd of at least one of the three that didn't work
i dont believe the attack would of been successful on all three targets at once there'd of at least one of the three that didn't work
3/14 c25 l30rusty
how come the sullied with the sword didn't fight with them?
how come she could no longer summon her spear later in battle?
how come the sullied with the sword didn't fight with them?
how come she could no longer summon her spear later in battle?
3/13 c3 PlushyMoss
Pretty disappointing for me. You have Harry's past life the knowledge download. It was already an incredible amount of power to just give her but it would have taken time to get going. Adding in a random spear of destiny is just lazy as fuck.
It's especially annoying because you she could have easily been given a similar powerset through magic, potions, runes and blacksmithing her own spear. Then she would have actually earned her power instead of just having it handed over to her.
Why not just have the King hand over Westeros too since Meera is such a special snowflake? No need for learning or fighting or inventing, that would be boring just have her instant win. Disappointing.
Pretty disappointing for me. You have Harry's past life the knowledge download. It was already an incredible amount of power to just give her but it would have taken time to get going. Adding in a random spear of destiny is just lazy as fuck.
It's especially annoying because you she could have easily been given a similar powerset through magic, potions, runes and blacksmithing her own spear. Then she would have actually earned her power instead of just having it handed over to her.
Why not just have the King hand over Westeros too since Meera is such a special snowflake? No need for learning or fighting or inventing, that would be boring just have her instant win. Disappointing.