for The Legacy of House Ordo9/30/2024 c46 Dretnuh
Holy shit is one of the good guys finally actually gonna die in this “War”. And only in the final battle lmao. Don’t get me wrong, I love this story, but to have a war and NONE of the main good guys die…. Just makes there be no stakes whatsoever. And this is coming from a guy who usually loves mary sue type stories as pure escapism lol.
Holy shit is one of the good guys finally actually gonna die in this “War”. And only in the final battle lmao. Don’t get me wrong, I love this story, but to have a war and NONE of the main good guys die…. Just makes there be no stakes whatsoever. And this is coming from a guy who usually loves mary sue type stories as pure escapism lol.
9/30/2024 c46 Dretnuh
Holy shit is one of the good guys finally actually gonna die in this “War”. And only in the final battle lmao. Don’t get me wrong, I love this story, but to have a war and NONE of the main good guys die…. Just makes there be no stakes whatsoever. And this is coming from a guy who usually loves mary sue type stories as pure escapism lol.
Holy shit is one of the good guys finally actually gonna die in this “War”. And only in the final battle lmao. Don’t get me wrong, I love this story, but to have a war and NONE of the main good guys die…. Just makes there be no stakes whatsoever. And this is coming from a guy who usually loves mary sue type stories as pure escapism lol.
9/20/2024 c47 
10Fabianadat
Ufa, terminei! Só posso resumir com uma palavra: incrível. Apesar de não conhecer uns 70% de suas referências de povos, armas, mundos, guerras, naves,.,. Curti muito a história em si. Fiquei impressionada com o nível de detalhes e só imaginar o tanto de pesquisa que deve ter feito. Parabéns!
10FabianadatUfa, terminei! Só posso resumir com uma palavra: incrível. Apesar de não conhecer uns 70% de suas referências de povos, armas, mundos, guerras, naves,.,. Curti muito a história em si. Fiquei impressionada com o nível de detalhes e só imaginar o tanto de pesquisa que deve ter feito. Parabéns!
9/18/2024 c43 Dretnuh
Yeah, what’d you expect. Halfthe important people in the galaxy who are against the empire are at this wedding lmao.
Yeah, what’d you expect. Halfthe important people in the galaxy who are against the empire are at this wedding lmao.
9/17/2024 c47 Obsidian Dreamweaver
Hello!
I hope you're doing well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "The Legacy of House Ordo," and found it incredibly inspiring. I believe it has great potential to be transformed into art, and as a professional artist, I'd love to create a comic book adaptation of it.
To clarify, this would be a commission-based project where you'd hire me to create custom artwork tailored to your story. We would start by designing the characters, and once you've approved the lineart, I'd proceed to adapt the story into a complete comic. I offer a variety of artwork services, including character designs, reference sheets, book covers, novel illustrations, and full comics, with the option for custom requests.
If you're interested in having your story illustrated, I'd be thrilled to discuss the details with you—covering the process, pricing, and any ideas you have in mind for the artwork.
Please feel free to reach out if you'd like to move forward! You can contact me at:
Discord: lydiacrazy
Instagram: lydiacrazy1
Twitter: Lidi18337530019
Email:
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Hello!
I hope you're doing well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "The Legacy of House Ordo," and found it incredibly inspiring. I believe it has great potential to be transformed into art, and as a professional artist, I'd love to create a comic book adaptation of it.
To clarify, this would be a commission-based project where you'd hire me to create custom artwork tailored to your story. We would start by designing the characters, and once you've approved the lineart, I'd proceed to adapt the story into a complete comic. I offer a variety of artwork services, including character designs, reference sheets, book covers, novel illustrations, and full comics, with the option for custom requests.
If you're interested in having your story illustrated, I'd be thrilled to discuss the details with you—covering the process, pricing, and any ideas you have in mind for the artwork.
Please feel free to reach out if you'd like to move forward! You can contact me at:
Discord: lydiacrazy
Instagram: lydiacrazy1
Twitter: Lidi18337530019
Email:
Looking forward to hearing from you!
9/17/2024 c43 Dretnuh
Honestly the fact that you have basically managed to squeeze like any Star Wars show or movie anywhere in the vicinity on the timeline in some way into this story. While including the disney shows, AND like a shit ton of stuff from legends/EU, while also adding a bunch of stuff from other franchise and MOST of that fitting pretty seemlessly. Honestly blows my mind how much research must have gone into making this. Especially for your spaceship builder simulator, which while at times is kind of annoying, is also mind bogling how many different ships you have made in this (like 90% of which I have only a very very very vague idea of what they look like because I’m not googling everytime a new ship comes up lmao). But still bravo with how in depth it is. I only wish it was longer now that I’m close to the ends…
Honestly the fact that you have basically managed to squeeze like any Star Wars show or movie anywhere in the vicinity on the timeline in some way into this story. While including the disney shows, AND like a shit ton of stuff from legends/EU, while also adding a bunch of stuff from other franchise and MOST of that fitting pretty seemlessly. Honestly blows my mind how much research must have gone into making this. Especially for your spaceship builder simulator, which while at times is kind of annoying, is also mind bogling how many different ships you have made in this (like 90% of which I have only a very very very vague idea of what they look like because I’m not googling everytime a new ship comes up lmao). But still bravo with how in depth it is. I only wish it was longer now that I’m close to the ends…
9/17/2024 c42 Dretnuh
“Did not take it as a challenge, instead as a means of proving himself.” Is that not like basically the definition of a challenge….?¿¿?
“Did not take it as a challenge, instead as a means of proving himself.” Is that not like basically the definition of a challenge….?¿¿?
9/17/2024 c41 Dretnuh
Kind of stupid to me that this whole time you built up Mon Mothma as like as someone who staunchly believes in her values, aka like peace and kind of pacifism. Yet as soon as she doesn’t get her way she resorts to violence….. so much for the only thing you said she cared about and literally the only personality trait she’s been showing. Abandons it as soon as people aren’t listening to her…
Kind of stupid to me that this whole time you built up Mon Mothma as like as someone who staunchly believes in her values, aka like peace and kind of pacifism. Yet as soon as she doesn’t get her way she resorts to violence….. so much for the only thing you said she cared about and literally the only personality trait she’s been showing. Abandons it as soon as people aren’t listening to her…
9/17/2024 c39 Dretnuh
My god. The merging of the Skywalker and Ordo bloodlines… the absolute powerrrr!
My god. The merging of the Skywalker and Ordo bloodlines… the absolute powerrrr!
9/16/2024 c35 Dretnuh
You know you’re running out of spaceship designs when you base one on a freaking call of duty ship! Lol
You know you’re running out of spaceship designs when you base one on a freaking call of duty ship! Lol
9/16/2024 c34 Dretnuh
Damn, Palpatines goons take out a base full of like tech geeks and Palpatine is just like “Yes finally a force that can match those mandolorians!” Lmao
Damn, Palpatines goons take out a base full of like tech geeks and Palpatine is just like “Yes finally a force that can match those mandolorians!” Lmao
9/16/2024 c47 Skiin1041
Fantastic story, a truly enjoyable read that I recommend! Well done, author! Really glad that you finished it!
Fantastic story, a truly enjoyable read that I recommend! Well done, author! Really glad that you finished it!
9/16/2024 c34 Dretnuh
Honestly, I appreciate all the effort you out in to have this ridiculous amount of space ships and stuff. But most of the time it just gets boring and repetitive. Because I don’t know what like 95% of these ships are, and I’d rather not google them every five minutes. It would work exactly the same for me if you just had like classes for the sizes of ships. And then maybe like if it has a special weapon, instead of a whole new ship name you just say like so and so class ship with a big ion canon on it or something idk. Like I love this story but if we just swapped some of the ship builder simulator for some more personal character moments 8 feel like it would be much better.
Honestly, I appreciate all the effort you out in to have this ridiculous amount of space ships and stuff. But most of the time it just gets boring and repetitive. Because I don’t know what like 95% of these ships are, and I’d rather not google them every five minutes. It would work exactly the same for me if you just had like classes for the sizes of ships. And then maybe like if it has a special weapon, instead of a whole new ship name you just say like so and so class ship with a big ion canon on it or something idk. Like I love this story but if we just swapped some of the ship builder simulator for some more personal character moments 8 feel like it would be much better.