for An Ocean of Lives4/30 c59 NaruashZero
Ha ha! I knew that rereading the entire story was going to do magic for the next chapter to arrive.
I can't wait to see everything this scenario has in store from here on out. In some way, what leaves me most intrigued are each and every one of the flashbacks, to a certain extent it is so pleasant to see his time on his old continent.
Ha ha! I knew that rereading the entire story was going to do magic for the next chapter to arrive.
I can't wait to see everything this scenario has in store from here on out. In some way, what leaves me most intrigued are each and every one of the flashbacks, to a certain extent it is so pleasant to see his time on his old continent.
4/28 c17 
1Aruto-kun
enough! I'm fed up, this should be a story about ninjas and pirates not about call of duty, lots of names without characters plus confusing the reader, it gets even more absurd when America and France are mentioned. I had high expectations at the beginning of the story and it got even more interesting when Naruto joined the sun pirates, I started to lose interest in reading when Naruto became a waiter, he should have gone exploring the world and become stronger, I thought he went to alabasta to defeat crocodile and make vivi like him and fall in love, instead you made him 10 years old LOL.
1Aruto-kunenough! I'm fed up, this should be a story about ninjas and pirates not about call of duty, lots of names without characters plus confusing the reader, it gets even more absurd when America and France are mentioned. I had high expectations at the beginning of the story and it got even more interesting when Naruto joined the sun pirates, I started to lose interest in reading when Naruto became a waiter, he should have gone exploring the world and become stronger, I thought he went to alabasta to defeat crocodile and make vivi like him and fall in love, instead you made him 10 years old LOL.
4/26 c59 Guest02957
Awesome chapter! I love how you had Camie say that Luffy and his crew are invited to the surprise celebration for Naruto's return. I also love how you had Naruto got intimate with Ishilly and Seira. I personally hope that Naruto has mastered Nine-Tails Chakra Mode during the two-year time skip. Will Naruto have access to all three types of Haki? Will more people from Konoha show up in the future? These are just suggestions since this is your story and you can write it however you want.
Anyway, awesome chapter and keep up the great work!
Awesome chapter! I love how you had Camie say that Luffy and his crew are invited to the surprise celebration for Naruto's return. I also love how you had Naruto got intimate with Ishilly and Seira. I personally hope that Naruto has mastered Nine-Tails Chakra Mode during the two-year time skip. Will Naruto have access to all three types of Haki? Will more people from Konoha show up in the future? These are just suggestions since this is your story and you can write it however you want.
Anyway, awesome chapter and keep up the great work!
4/26 c59 Djinn
Great new chapter, Sanji is going to be so jealous.
Great new chapter, Sanji is going to be so jealous.
4/26 c59 Guest
Sanji would die of envy if he saw this scene!
Sanji would die of envy if he saw this scene!
4/26 c59 Samuel Santillan
I liked it. It was a good episode.
No one can deny that Naruto is receiving a very warm welcome from the girls, but Sharley is missing. She still hasn't given Naruto her gift for returning.
I'm waiting to see when Naruto and Luffy see Shirahoshi. It will be interesting when they meet the mermaid princess.
By the way, is Jiriaya still alive or dead? Since there's been no mention of him since the war, it makes you wonder if the perverted sage is already dead.
I liked it. It was a good episode.
No one can deny that Naruto is receiving a very warm welcome from the girls, but Sharley is missing. She still hasn't given Naruto her gift for returning.
I'm waiting to see when Naruto and Luffy see Shirahoshi. It will be interesting when they meet the mermaid princess.
By the way, is Jiriaya still alive or dead? Since there's been no mention of him since the war, it makes you wonder if the perverted sage is already dead.
4/20 c44 Guest
Glad he finally gets to rep the Sun Pirates. Waiting too long to see him do that.
Glad he finally gets to rep the Sun Pirates. Waiting too long to see him do that.
4/19 c1 AadenFo
I still dunno if i wanna read it, but i feel like any story with a harem should be required to give an amount estimate. Like, you say its a harem story, and i gotta read to find out, but do i really want to be disappointed by reading and finding out he dates like 20 different girls (just an example)? Anyone who enjoys a story like that, isnt actually reading the story for its worth.
I still dunno if i wanna read it, but i feel like any story with a harem should be required to give an amount estimate. Like, you say its a harem story, and i gotta read to find out, but do i really want to be disappointed by reading and finding out he dates like 20 different girls (just an example)? Anyone who enjoys a story like that, isnt actually reading the story for its worth.