for GATE: Worlds At War12/27/2022 c1 TheJob
You plan on updating my guy?
You plan on updating my guy?
1/4/2022 c1 Guest
Are you still alive, is the rewrite still active!?
Are you still alive, is the rewrite still active!?
10/12/2021 c1 Guest
So, when are we gonna have chapter 2?
So, when are we gonna have chapter 2?
8/29/2021 c1 dn
good
good
8/6/2021 c1 Arms Dealer
I hope we bring something Overkill because you gonna need it against Roman wannabes and fake ass Gods of Falmart.
I hope we bring something Overkill because you gonna need it against Roman wannabes and fake ass Gods of Falmart.
5/9/2021 c1 
1YeetMahn69
Glad you're back but please if you could, do away with the weeb cringe which most authors of this fic do. It gets disappointing when a character starts frothing at the mouth at the opportunity to fulfil their harem/loli fantasies. Contrary to what another user suggested, adding vampires or werewolves to this would be even more cringe and a waste of time. So far so good keep it up.
1YeetMahn69Glad you're back but please if you could, do away with the weeb cringe which most authors of this fic do. It gets disappointing when a character starts frothing at the mouth at the opportunity to fulfil their harem/loli fantasies. Contrary to what another user suggested, adding vampires or werewolves to this would be even more cringe and a waste of time. So far so good keep it up.
4/22/2021 c1 1onearmedduck
this story is quite a well-written one, bravo. looking forward to seeing more of this
1onearmedduckthis story is quite a well-written one, bravo. looking forward to seeing more of this
4/7/2021 c1 Nantono
Nice chapter
Nice chapter
4/7/2021 c1 Guest
Please update this
Please update this
3/26/2021 c1 MordredBestGirl
Ah yeah! Edgy Frost is back! Third time is the charm!
Though, was that Karen moment really necessary? I felt so forced and unnatural. unnecessary filler.
Ah yeah! Edgy Frost is back! Third time is the charm!
Though, was that Karen moment really necessary? I felt so forced and unnatural. unnecessary filler.
3/21/2021 c1 Guest
I've recently watched all three seasons of Castlevania , maybe you could put among demi humans vampires and werewolves even though there is already a Wolf race in the manga/novel. Somekind of small vassal kingdom where it's ruled by similar council like "Council of Sisters" and who have forgemasters who turn dead into monsters like in the series , that would be cool addition into the story.
I've recently watched all three seasons of Castlevania , maybe you could put among demi humans vampires and werewolves even though there is already a Wolf race in the manga/novel. Somekind of small vassal kingdom where it's ruled by similar council like "Council of Sisters" and who have forgemasters who turn dead into monsters like in the series , that would be cool addition into the story.
3/21/2021 c1 Guest
As chapters progress could you put into your story some real world weapons and prototypes. Like M1A3 main battle tank , completely unmanned robot vehicle based on Bradley IFV , F-15 EX figther jet , F-35A & B , C-130 armed with 20mm minigun , 40mm bofors & 105mm cannon (i remember mention it in previous banned story) , upgraded A-10's , B2 strategic bomber , and anything else you can think of...
I'm so happy that you are back with this story. Can't wait for more :)
As chapters progress could you put into your story some real world weapons and prototypes. Like M1A3 main battle tank , completely unmanned robot vehicle based on Bradley IFV , F-15 EX figther jet , F-35A & B , C-130 armed with 20mm minigun , 40mm bofors & 105mm cannon (i remember mention it in previous banned story) , upgraded A-10's , B2 strategic bomber , and anything else you can think of...
I'm so happy that you are back with this story. Can't wait for more :)
3/21/2021 c1 Guest
Dude , i'm glad that you're back! , can't wait for more chapters where it will be more or less similar to previous story that got banned , but with less Derek's flashback and more focus on the story how US Army destroys Empire.
Dude , i'm glad that you're back! , can't wait for more chapters where it will be more or less similar to previous story that got banned , but with less Derek's flashback and more focus on the story how US Army destroys Empire.
3/19/2021 c1 45Thunderstrike16
Huh, I remember reading this a while ago, but it was a different version. I just randomly thought of it, looked it up, and here it is. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
45Thunderstrike16Huh, I remember reading this a while ago, but it was a different version. I just randomly thought of it, looked it up, and here it is. Hope to see the next chapter soon.