for GATE: Worlds At War2/26/2021 c1 Guest
this ... puts a smile on my face:)
this ... puts a smile on my face:)
2/25/2021 c1 V
Everyone, what happened to impatient guy?
Everyone, what happened to impatient guy?
2/18/2021 c1 Guest
Ok, what happened to all the chapters of the previous story, are they lost forever!?
Ok, what happened to all the chapters of the previous story, are they lost forever!?
2/16/2021 c1 Guest
To The Big Man:
I don't know about the writing style - still quality read - but what the hell are you talking about the military budget cuts? Did you intentionally forget that the US was just invaded and the Russians basically razed important infrastructure to the ground? Yeah, I bet you did forget that part. Let me break it down for you then; what's more important after a devastating invasion that you managed to pull the win? You battered military which is still the best and most well funded force in the world even with budget cuts as stated in the story and managed to launch a counter offensive halfway across the globe...or your burning civilian infrastructure that handles your economy, energy grids, stock markets, and the place where your people live?
You think it's that easy to maintain your current military capabilities while your home is in ruins?That's just ignorant thinking and you bet your ass the author's right to re-appropriate some funds to the other sectors that need fixings.
Also, what's wrong about introducing outside forces? The problem with V2 is that while the Falmart side is beautifully constructed, our side has been neglected. Yeah, Europe is healing but what about the rest of the world? What's China doing? What about Africa? The Middle East, South America? After a world war, things are bound to happen - good and bad. And who knows, maybe this follows V2 just with a few tweaks that make the story that much better. This sets the stage for arcs outside Falmart and with the inclusion of elements from COD Ghosts, Black Ops universe, and Advanced Warfare (if that's still a thing) this is gonna be a blast. I personally want to see Menendez here.
To The Big Man:
I don't know about the writing style - still quality read - but what the hell are you talking about the military budget cuts? Did you intentionally forget that the US was just invaded and the Russians basically razed important infrastructure to the ground? Yeah, I bet you did forget that part. Let me break it down for you then; what's more important after a devastating invasion that you managed to pull the win? You battered military which is still the best and most well funded force in the world even with budget cuts as stated in the story and managed to launch a counter offensive halfway across the globe...or your burning civilian infrastructure that handles your economy, energy grids, stock markets, and the place where your people live?
You think it's that easy to maintain your current military capabilities while your home is in ruins?That's just ignorant thinking and you bet your ass the author's right to re-appropriate some funds to the other sectors that need fixings.
Also, what's wrong about introducing outside forces? The problem with V2 is that while the Falmart side is beautifully constructed, our side has been neglected. Yeah, Europe is healing but what about the rest of the world? What's China doing? What about Africa? The Middle East, South America? After a world war, things are bound to happen - good and bad. And who knows, maybe this follows V2 just with a few tweaks that make the story that much better. This sets the stage for arcs outside Falmart and with the inclusion of elements from COD Ghosts, Black Ops universe, and Advanced Warfare (if that's still a thing) this is gonna be a blast. I personally want to see Menendez here.
2/15/2021 c1 Guest
So you still alive then
So you still alive then
2/13/2021 c1 The Big Man
The writing/flow could be a little more matted out, not gonna lie.
Your writing style has had a noticeable change from v2 to v3, and honestly I think your style you used in v2 worked better. The flow of the sentence structure in this new story is just kinda like you are trying to fit a noun and it s explanation all into one sentence, if that makes sense. The flow is a little too compact, is another way of looking at it. I liked your general writing style as a while in v2 just a little bit more, as it’s more comfortable to read and store the information. Your writing style for v2 also seems to be the same style you used for your DOOM fic, too. It just flows really nicely and easily stored information in the brain.
As for the world building, really? The huge ass military spending cuts? I am trying to see and understand logical expectations as to why spending cuts would be necessary in this specific post war, current Second Cold War world environment, and I really just don’t see it happening. Sure you bring up the domestic social services and such, but that much of a budget cut? Really? That fucking massive, absolutely massive, and would loss in the deactivation of a HUGE fucking load of military assets of all kinds and types from all branches. To me, the logical thing to do we’re try to keep military capability in this world you have created and laid out for us.
Also please don’t do the thing where there is an outside force that’s gonna cause trouble for the protagonist’s team/side. It really seems like you are setting up the TCI to do exactly that. This kind of conflict is really overused in gate fanfics it’s just become cliche and just flat annoying. Very rarely do those stories make it so the third party’s actions actually have an important role in the plot, like at all. It’s so fucking overused and annoying please don’t do that.
Also, a question I’m sure others have as well: Why not continue v2? It is still up on your Wattpad, and you could have edited it to republish it back on FF, so why not work on v2?
The writing/flow could be a little more matted out, not gonna lie.
Your writing style has had a noticeable change from v2 to v3, and honestly I think your style you used in v2 worked better. The flow of the sentence structure in this new story is just kinda like you are trying to fit a noun and it s explanation all into one sentence, if that makes sense. The flow is a little too compact, is another way of looking at it. I liked your general writing style as a while in v2 just a little bit more, as it’s more comfortable to read and store the information. Your writing style for v2 also seems to be the same style you used for your DOOM fic, too. It just flows really nicely and easily stored information in the brain.
As for the world building, really? The huge ass military spending cuts? I am trying to see and understand logical expectations as to why spending cuts would be necessary in this specific post war, current Second Cold War world environment, and I really just don’t see it happening. Sure you bring up the domestic social services and such, but that much of a budget cut? Really? That fucking massive, absolutely massive, and would loss in the deactivation of a HUGE fucking load of military assets of all kinds and types from all branches. To me, the logical thing to do we’re try to keep military capability in this world you have created and laid out for us.
Also please don’t do the thing where there is an outside force that’s gonna cause trouble for the protagonist’s team/side. It really seems like you are setting up the TCI to do exactly that. This kind of conflict is really overused in gate fanfics it’s just become cliche and just flat annoying. Very rarely do those stories make it so the third party’s actions actually have an important role in the plot, like at all. It’s so fucking overused and annoying please don’t do that.
Also, a question I’m sure others have as well: Why not continue v2? It is still up on your Wattpad, and you could have edited it to republish it back on FF, so why not work on v2?
2/13/2021 c1 The Guy
Just a small little detail: the FBI is purely domestic. The CIA and NSA are the foreign specialists.
Just a small little detail: the FBI is purely domestic. The CIA and NSA are the foreign specialists.
2/13/2021 c1 Mr.X Gonna Give it to you
You cannot imagine the huge grin that I had once I saw that this story was back.
You cannot imagine the huge grin that I had once I saw that this story was back.
2/12/2021 c1 SpudyPotato
Great work mate, I didn't think it could get any better, but you've proven it with this. Good to have you back.
Great work mate, I didn't think it could get any better, but you've proven it with this. Good to have you back.
2/11/2021 c1 Guest
Great to see this story back
Great to see this story back
2/11/2021 c1 
7Mend1cant Bias
Dark Knight, you SOB! Glad to have you back with this project man, the chapter was fantastic. Hope to see some of the scorestreak tech from modern warfare, both from the past MWs and the reboot. Continue the great work!
7Mend1cant BiasDark Knight, you SOB! Glad to have you back with this project man, the chapter was fantastic. Hope to see some of the scorestreak tech from modern warfare, both from the past MWs and the reboot. Continue the great work!
2/11/2021 c1 Arms Dealer
I hope you add orbital kinetic bombardment weapons platform like ODIN/LOKI/THOR in the future. By the year 2035, US should have already improved many of their arsenal including space force, space weapon and space defense program. The orbital weapons will cause a lot of psychological warfare to Sadera Empire once they got hit by those tungsten rods. Can you imagine how would they react when their entire city become a huge crater with millions has been killed in just one day? They would think this is a punishment from gods.
I hope in this story is similar to Gate UNDF fought there where America don't give a shit about Sadera Empire and arrested Molt and his family for the massacre of Central Park in New York. No negotiation. No mercy. No Geneva Convention. No peace talk. Get in and finish the fight.
Also, since Falmart was huge and has to explore. I hope you invited some energy companies for expeditionary. This would make US and her allies have advantage over China and Iran when it come to energy and other natural resources in long term.
I hope you add orbital kinetic bombardment weapons platform like ODIN/LOKI/THOR in the future. By the year 2035, US should have already improved many of their arsenal including space force, space weapon and space defense program. The orbital weapons will cause a lot of psychological warfare to Sadera Empire once they got hit by those tungsten rods. Can you imagine how would they react when their entire city become a huge crater with millions has been killed in just one day? They would think this is a punishment from gods.
I hope in this story is similar to Gate UNDF fought there where America don't give a shit about Sadera Empire and arrested Molt and his family for the massacre of Central Park in New York. No negotiation. No mercy. No Geneva Convention. No peace talk. Get in and finish the fight.
Also, since Falmart was huge and has to explore. I hope you invited some energy companies for expeditionary. This would make US and her allies have advantage over China and Iran when it come to energy and other natural resources in long term.