for Advice and the outcome6/1/2021 c1 
1Daysleeper03
Your story idea was really cute but you confused the terms obvious and oblivious. If you change that the story will be way more enjoyable.
1Daysleeper03Your story idea was really cute but you confused the terms obvious and oblivious. If you change that the story will be way more enjoyable.
2/18/2021 c1 3LayLay lives
This is so cute. I can almost see the pout on their faces with the small standoff before the I love you.
3LayLay livesThis is so cute. I can almost see the pout on their faces with the small standoff before the I love you.
2/14/2021 c1 5PanadeineForte
This was so cute! When Natsu asked if it was Gray I read it in his voice and I imagined him pulling a face about it.
I know this is a one-shot, but I think you could stretch this out to two or three! It’s a great little plot and you could have a lot of fun with it! It’s just as sweet as it is right now, though!
5PanadeineForteThis was so cute! When Natsu asked if it was Gray I read it in his voice and I imagined him pulling a face about it.
I know this is a one-shot, but I think you could stretch this out to two or three! It’s a great little plot and you could have a lot of fun with it! It’s just as sweet as it is right now, though!