for Broken soul Broken heart8/3/2005 c1 amber
is there going to be a continuenced chapter for this?
sinceraly
amber
is there going to be a continuenced chapter for this?
sinceraly
amber
4/17/2005 c1 
7littlematchgirl
poor kikyou, take that inuyasha! that's what you get for going with kikyou!
-LMG
7littlematchgirlpoor kikyou, take that inuyasha! that's what you get for going with kikyou!
-LMG
3/30/2005 c1 1The One Who Creeps You Out
Wow, those exclamation and question marks really convey Inuyashas' emotions.
1The One Who Creeps You OutWow, those exclamation and question marks really convey Inuyashas' emotions.
10/30/2004 c4 coolgirl
Please continue writiing. UPDATE UPDATE please
Please continue writiing. UPDATE UPDATE please
10/22/2004 c2 Deadly Sinner 666
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this was... um... interesting...
well, just somethings i feel i should point out to you:
1) Inuyasha loves Kagome AND Kikyou
2) Kikyou DOES have a reflection
3) Kikyou wouldnt want Inuyasha to kill her. She would like to die WITH him or atleast stay with him and watch Kagome die...
4) Kagome knows Inuyasha loves her and Kouga isnt her type.
5) if Kikyou says 'sit', it doesnt mean Inuyasha will fall. It only works for Kagome. and Kikyou wouldnt threat Inuyasha to use that word.
6) in any of the eps, have you EVER seen a PUPPY in Inuyasha's time? OMFG! -sighs out her anger-
there are probably other things i could tell you but i have already forgotten about but oh well.
and not to be mean or anything but, you shouldnt continue this fic. there is no way of saving it either.
A PUPPY? -growls- WTF?
...
this was... um... interesting...
well, just somethings i feel i should point out to you:
1) Inuyasha loves Kagome AND Kikyou
2) Kikyou DOES have a reflection
3) Kikyou wouldnt want Inuyasha to kill her. She would like to die WITH him or atleast stay with him and watch Kagome die...
4) Kagome knows Inuyasha loves her and Kouga isnt her type.
5) if Kikyou says 'sit', it doesnt mean Inuyasha will fall. It only works for Kagome. and Kikyou wouldnt threat Inuyasha to use that word.
6) in any of the eps, have you EVER seen a PUPPY in Inuyasha's time? OMFG! -sighs out her anger-
there are probably other things i could tell you but i have already forgotten about but oh well.
and not to be mean or anything but, you shouldnt continue this fic. there is no way of saving it either.
A PUPPY? -growls- WTF?
9/17/2004 c2 2irathernot
so sad... i souds as if InuYasha was using Kikyo, but the story is good, stupid kagome please update soon i wanna see more!
2irathernotso sad... i souds as if InuYasha was using Kikyo, but the story is good, stupid kagome please update soon i wanna see more!
8/31/2004 c3 Yo
continue!
i like toseethe rest!
continue!
i like toseethe rest!
7/30/2004 c1 Kikyodabest
whoa! i'm an inuyasha fan! but this is totally NOT kikyo! still the fic is good
whoa! i'm an inuyasha fan! but this is totally NOT kikyo! still the fic is good