12/29/2023 c1 kr0n0s00
Can you add the party system so that they can use a limited version of the gamer
Can you add the party system so that they can use a limited version of the gamer
12/26/2023 c6 Borello
i see
i see
5/27/2023 c2 reydrago
hmmm, since you asked? not really, since Rou's absorption make Origin irrelevant, and he doesn't like using Demise's death beam magic you can actually give him alternate blessing out of the other four greater gods and it still can do the same...
although the game did show that his skillset and maybe behavior changed, he is admit that fatherhood makes him gentler somehow in the novel
hmmm, since you asked? not really, since Rou's absorption make Origin irrelevant, and he doesn't like using Demise's death beam magic you can actually give him alternate blessing out of the other four greater gods and it still can do the same...
although the game did show that his skillset and maybe behavior changed, he is admit that fatherhood makes him gentler somehow in the novel
4/26/2022 c3 thething123789
wonderful story! great work and easy to read and injoy. keep up the good work
wonderful story! great work and easy to read and injoy. keep up the good work
11/15/2021 c5 12Oldtga
exotic prey hue keep the pace going i like to see your story evolve also naruto evolve i check your other storys
exotic prey hue keep the pace going i like to see your story evolve also naruto evolve i check your other storys
11/15/2021 c3 Oldtga
The stats showing up isn't really annoying to the reader except it is when you change the pop ups twice. gobu naruto is actually very small smaller than a human at least running from wolves us actually good for a recent chapter also the title on your final chapter suggest that he would be facing a stronger monster on accident. the cave can also be abused by putting everything in narutos gamer inventory. also the skinning knife should be a plus 100 to his actual skill not just a maxed out stat.
The stats showing up isn't really annoying to the reader except it is when you change the pop ups twice. gobu naruto is actually very small smaller than a human at least running from wolves us actually good for a recent chapter also the title on your final chapter suggest that he would be facing a stronger monster on accident. the cave can also be abused by putting everything in narutos gamer inventory. also the skinning knife should be a plus 100 to his actual skill not just a maxed out stat.
11/15/2021 c1 Oldtga
i like the game aspect but the first thing a shinobi would say is what the hell is that thing also you could unlock the observe skill early on having the system answer narutos question of what the old goblin was.
i like the game aspect but the first thing a shinobi would say is what the hell is that thing also you could unlock the observe skill early on having the system answer narutos question of what the old goblin was.
8/31/2021 c5 Matticus131
so i am loving the fic so far and i like your adding a spear as not many use them despite the tactical advantage they give in combat with good shield wall and a basic level of tactical training im also hopping to see gobukichi at some point.
so i am loving the fic so far and i like your adding a spear as not many use them despite the tactical advantage they give in combat with good shield wall and a basic level of tactical training im also hopping to see gobukichi at some point.