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10CaskettFan5
I had forgotten about this story. That's not intended as a criticism as I'm sure a lot of people have forgotten my unfinished story. That bit with Malfoy is intriguing. Welcome back!
10CaskettFan5I had forgotten about this story. That's not intended as a criticism as I'm sure a lot of people have forgotten my unfinished story. That bit with Malfoy is intriguing. Welcome back!
3h c2 HeartsGlow
"Harry was acting different from the end of the school year" How would they know he is different? They didn't see him at the end of Fourth year, except maybe briefly when he brought Cedric back. Remus hasn't seen or interacted with him since the end of Third year, and Sirius only talked to him briefly at the end of Third year, then once in the fireplace at Hogwarts, and once or twice in the cave outside Hogsmeade during Fourth year.
"Harry was acting different from the end of the school year" How would they know he is different? They didn't see him at the end of Fourth year, except maybe briefly when he brought Cedric back. Remus hasn't seen or interacted with him since the end of Third year, and Sirius only talked to him briefly at the end of Third year, then once in the fireplace at Hogwarts, and once or twice in the cave outside Hogsmeade during Fourth year.
7h c18 Guest
A lot more of haphne fluff would be greatly appreciated. like the one in meeting the inlaws. Congrats on your comeback also.. :)
A lot more of haphne fluff would be greatly appreciated. like the one in meeting the inlaws. Congrats on your comeback also.. :)
8h c18 alan wake
kinda dissapointing at the end Harry still havent killed Nott and Umbridge come on just kill them author
kinda dissapointing at the end Harry still havent killed Nott and Umbridge come on just kill them author
15h c17 AkashimaUchiha
finally, thank you for updating this. I was disappointed to see this hasnt been updated in a year. But I'm glad it hasnt been abandoned, looking forward for more.
finally, thank you for updating this. I was disappointed to see this hasnt been updated in a year. But I'm glad it hasnt been abandoned, looking forward for more.
17h c18 Guest
glad your back
glad your back
17h c18 2uchiha cat
Dear God I thought I lost my mind when I saw this being updated. Its great to actually see this one update again. truly one of the more unique takes on the time travel cliche, they usually have Harry being much older instead of only a few years, not to mention the way you handled Dumbledore is also fairly refreshing. I am curious to see the changes in Malfoy and how that will effect things going forward.I will need to really go back and reread this one again I think to fully refresh myself. Theo is shaping up to be the primary antagonist within hogwarts, and interesting shift as that is usually Draco for obvious reasons.
2uchiha catDear God I thought I lost my mind when I saw this being updated. Its great to actually see this one update again. truly one of the more unique takes on the time travel cliche, they usually have Harry being much older instead of only a few years, not to mention the way you handled Dumbledore is also fairly refreshing. I am curious to see the changes in Malfoy and how that will effect things going forward.I will need to really go back and reread this one again I think to fully refresh myself. Theo is shaping up to be the primary antagonist within hogwarts, and interesting shift as that is usually Draco for obvious reasons.
3/10 c1 10Silent0
Going to be honest bro, your fiction is fuckin' phenomenal. You write on a pro tier if anything. I honestly suggest posting your stories on sites like Space Battles though, I've pretty much moved my stuff to there and post my own fanfics there. There's a lot more people giving advice and comments on the story, and it's where a lot of the big boys are now, like Seat_Admiral. I hope you join us there; it'll definitely give up a boost.
10Silent0Going to be honest bro, your fiction is fuckin' phenomenal. You write on a pro tier if anything. I honestly suggest posting your stories on sites like Space Battles though, I've pretty much moved my stuff to there and post my own fanfics there. There's a lot more people giving advice and comments on the story, and it's where a lot of the big boys are now, like Seat_Admiral. I hope you join us there; it'll definitely give up a boost.
2/9 c17 Ultach
Being almost 20 months since your last update, should I assume this tale is now abandoned?
If so, it behooves you to label this as such so that your readers know not to further waste our time.
Ciao.
Being almost 20 months since your last update, should I assume this tale is now abandoned?
If so, it behooves you to label this as such so that your readers know not to further waste our time.
Ciao.
1/6 c17 Shadowman
Is this story dead?
Is this story dead?
11/10/2024 c17 Asurascan
When will Harry gonna kill Nott ,Harry just kill him will you
When will Harry gonna kill Nott ,Harry just kill him will you
11/5/2024 c17 AkashimaUchiha
This is great, i wish you keep continuing this story. I got a itch for good time travel with Daphne in it. This fills that itch.
This is great, i wish you keep continuing this story. I got a itch for good time travel with Daphne in it. This fills that itch.