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10/5/2023 c17 ReadingAddict
I love the character of harry is much more like how James is told in the books.
Your style of writing is quite witty and funny.
I am probably sure this is one of the best time travel HaryxDaphne fics

Cheers!
Keep on writing
9/27/2023 c1 Guest
“ Those touched by Death and Fate in the way that Potter is has caused far too many issues in the past when we weren't there to fix the mistake” needs to have “has” changed to “have”.
9/25/2023 c17 Chump03
Absolutely love this story so far!

Can you please update it soon?
9/24/2023 c7 argyrus
Its not gae, but trans, not that it matters too much. Both are an evolutionary dead end.
8/16/2023 c8 2hpfan111
It's painful to read your story, not because it's bad or anything but the way you write is just not great. Who includes the word 'quote' in writing when they are going to quote the required words anyway? Also, the sentences are too long winded and grammar is piss poor in many places, making the sentences you write difficult to comprehend. You need to edit badly
8/15/2023 c17 Ariadne Venegas
You forgot the Iberians!
Boudicca was Iberic exactly from was is now Portugal. She came with the Romans in the cavalry and gain her lands from them. But you know what yhe Roman did to her years after.
8/14/2023 c13 Ariadne Venegas
I think at least he could have go with Dumbly to infirmary and ask for sleeping potion minimun
8/12/2023 c5 Ariadne Venegas
You must see that the potion trope has a real canon thing in it Molly used them for Arthur and laugh about it and tell the girls how it was appropriate for getting the boy to notice you!

Then you get a Harry that never even notice the fangirl and one day is jealous of everyone looking at her and mooning on her from nothing the day before! That is how half the fandom think it was potioned, specially knowing that the twins sell the stuff and Ginny is their sister.

So she had the knowing, the motive, the opportunity, and the means.

Even the fact that Hermione changed personality and regressed to first year in sixth was strange and out of character. All her development disappeared! So some also think some potions went there, maybe so she didn’t notice, not necessarily because she loved Harry.

So it is not something to comes from nowhere!
But you are right that it have being made till tiredness.

Also I’m not saying that Hermione and Harry are the loves or their lives. I think that both of them deserved better than the Weasleys as husband or wife.
8/8/2023 c17 10thunderofdeath97
1.) The Malfoy's are nothing but cowards. Making them out to be this old and powerful house and bloodline is hilarious, and kind of ridiculous, honestly.

2.) A little bit of a, somewhat, harsh worded sentence is uncalled for, really? That's like really childish on Daphne's part.

3.) Hermione forcing her way into the meeting with Harry and Daphne is annoying.
7/31/2023 c17 lord of the east
This is a fun fic !
7/21/2023 c17 eekii8825mac.com
Enjoyed it. YES! Really want the next installment. Malfoy git a dose or two of Grow-a-set? Excellent. Gives you more ways to spin him.
7/17/2023 c8 BoredKing
The timeline doesn't make sense. He met Daphne in the abandoned classroom on Friday night and then met her again the day before the first study group, which would be Friday since the first group was held on Saturday.
7/1/2023 c17 elgaucho
This Harry does not act as an adult coming back to do something important. He is, in fact, a supercilious ass, showing real respect to only a, few people, like Daphne and her family, some teachers, kowtowing to Albus D. apparently thinking arrogance can replace manners and civility.

Neville chose to fight at his side, but he just airily ghost him -and Luna, knowing how much a word or some friendly gesture might mean to them. Not a deserving MOD.
7/1/2023 c17 Neotono
Kinda ruined this chapter by having Hermione tag along to something that doesn't concern her.

I want Harry to ditch his old friends but sadly this Harry won't.

Hope you update soon as this is one of the better Haphne stories that is actually being updated somewhat regularly. I just hope you don't add any angst for the sheer hell of it.
6/29/2023 c17 Mr.Heller
Liked the origins part. Peverells with names like Antioch, Cadmus and Ignotus are very obviously Roman in origin. Wonder what Linfred the Potterer from Stinchcombe was.
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