for Inevitable3/10/2021 c2 Sonia25
Good start to an ff. I am gald that Harry is not forgiving his friends for abandoning him. I doubt if Harry can ever forgive ron for the role he played unknowingly in the death of daphne by giving the secret to their house. I am gald that Harry has not gone ahead telling everyone he is from future and bla bla bla like some writter make him behave like an idiot in time travel fanfiction which kills the curiosity of the ff. All in all loved the first two chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Good start to an ff. I am gald that Harry is not forgiving his friends for abandoning him. I doubt if Harry can ever forgive ron for the role he played unknowingly in the death of daphne by giving the secret to their house. I am gald that Harry has not gone ahead telling everyone he is from future and bla bla bla like some writter make him behave like an idiot in time travel fanfiction which kills the curiosity of the ff. All in all loved the first two chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter.
3/9/2021 c2 ClichesAreTerrible
Great so far, well written tropes like yours still add to the story... Update soon!
Great so far, well written tropes like yours still add to the story... Update soon!
3/9/2021 c2 Pixie Duck
Great chapter.
I'm liking the story so far and the way Harry is acting and interacting with other characters. I can't wait to see him meet Daphne and how he'd react to see the woman he lived now alive in front of him.
I loved the ending about Sirius and how it captures the trauma that he still has from Azkaban.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Great chapter.
I'm liking the story so far and the way Harry is acting and interacting with other characters. I can't wait to see him meet Daphne and how he'd react to see the woman he lived now alive in front of him.
I loved the ending about Sirius and how it captures the trauma that he still has from Azkaban.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
3/9/2021 c1 
6thunderofdeath97
just two questions/issues here
1.) if voldemort kills harry, due to death being, i assume a god of some sort, he could not interefere, which means, that voldemort would live on thanks to his horcruxes
2.) even if harry gives up one of the hallows, like death wants, or if harry gives up two, even, he still technically has one or two of the other ones, why would death not want all three? i mean i know without having all three, than harry cannot be this "master of death", but still they are technically the property of death?
6thunderofdeath97just two questions/issues here
1.) if voldemort kills harry, due to death being, i assume a god of some sort, he could not interefere, which means, that voldemort would live on thanks to his horcruxes
2.) even if harry gives up one of the hallows, like death wants, or if harry gives up two, even, he still technically has one or two of the other ones, why would death not want all three? i mean i know without having all three, than harry cannot be this "master of death", but still they are technically the property of death?
3/8/2021 c2 asighoaighnqllg
Lucky that it wasn't a Greek tragedy. Man talk about appropriate referencing! Haha.
I'm an avid fan of your Invictus story. I look forward to what you bring to the Potterverse.
Sincere reader,
Burning Moonlight.
Lucky that it wasn't a Greek tragedy. Man talk about appropriate referencing! Haha.
I'm an avid fan of your Invictus story. I look forward to what you bring to the Potterverse.
Sincere reader,
Burning Moonlight.
3/8/2021 c2 Haphne Emeraldplains
I can't believe I didn't notice this before...but the soul that death was willing to give to fate was it Daphne? Oh and this type of sirius looks like a sirius that would have been raised by the black family. Please do continue, the story is starting to pick of and I am here for the ride
I can't believe I didn't notice this before...but the soul that death was willing to give to fate was it Daphne? Oh and this type of sirius looks like a sirius that would have been raised by the black family. Please do continue, the story is starting to pick of and I am here for the ride
3/8/2021 c2 10CaskettFan5
Raging Smurf - I'm not quite sure what to think of that but it does conjure a rather funny image. As for the story, I generally dislike time travel stories but the pairing encouraged me to take a chance on it and so far, so good.
10CaskettFan5Raging Smurf - I'm not quite sure what to think of that but it does conjure a rather funny image. As for the story, I generally dislike time travel stories but the pairing encouraged me to take a chance on it and so far, so good.
3/8/2021 c2 BruhImTheGlitch
Hallelujah, we get a new chapter of invictus after we just got a new chapter of this! Its like christmas came early
Hallelujah, we get a new chapter of invictus after we just got a new chapter of this! Its like christmas came early
3/8/2021 c2 2Everpeach
We will be watching this story's career with great interest.
Actually, at this point why don't you just write an entire political fic where Harry is based off of Palpatine, it would be glorious.
2EverpeachWe will be watching this story's career with great interest.
Actually, at this point why don't you just write an entire political fic where Harry is based off of Palpatine, it would be glorious.
3/8/2021 c2 3Kaladin77
A good chapter. Harry's molded by his future experiences and just a single line about Sirus being uncomfortable in his own bed is something that many people overlook. 13 years in a hell hole and either he gets freed immediately or dies. He is slowly getting back into society and it's refreshing to see how he is coping with it as well.
3Kaladin77A good chapter. Harry's molded by his future experiences and just a single line about Sirus being uncomfortable in his own bed is something that many people overlook. 13 years in a hell hole and either he gets freed immediately or dies. He is slowly getting back into society and it's refreshing to see how he is coping with it as well.