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7/12 c3 Annoyingfan
Pretty good chapter. A little on the short side and not much happened but we got a little more into our main character's mindset. One thing I have to say so is that I really think you should work on your flow. It was kind of hard to tell what was going on at multiple points there wasn't too many descriptors and I felt a little lost here and there. I get that the character's thoughts were supposed to be all over the place but it wasn't fun to read I guess. Either way I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
6/15 c1 Annoyingfan
Man this is such a weird and dark premise but I mean that in a good way. Would love to see more one day.
3/2 c1 2Satoru Taiyo
This is great so far. Good job!

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