7/9/2021 c12 6Masso 2010
Great chapter, loved the interactions between the two, felt a lot more wholesome. keep it up mate.
Great chapter, loved the interactions between the two, felt a lot more wholesome. keep it up mate.
6/30/2021 c11 9Ranger McAleer
Such a good chapter. This is something I loved about the game, you knew what happened (world ended) and we knew why (machines) but we didn't know how humans survived. And I think that's what makes the story unique. It could have easily been a boring cliched 'oh the robots killed nearly everyone but humans beat them in the end' story and in a way they gave us that cliche yet turned it on its head and went "we know your smart enough to figure that part out, but why has the world ended up like it has?" I get this is a mess but hopefully you get what I'm trying to say. But to boil it down, I love this game and its story pulled me in like no other game has.
Such a good chapter. This is something I loved about the game, you knew what happened (world ended) and we knew why (machines) but we didn't know how humans survived. And I think that's what makes the story unique. It could have easily been a boring cliched 'oh the robots killed nearly everyone but humans beat them in the end' story and in a way they gave us that cliche yet turned it on its head and went "we know your smart enough to figure that part out, but why has the world ended up like it has?" I get this is a mess but hopefully you get what I'm trying to say. But to boil it down, I love this game and its story pulled me in like no other game has.
6/30/2021 c11 raven2327
this is making me want to read more so bad
btw are you going to add the 2 dlc's to this
this is making me want to read more so bad
btw are you going to add the 2 dlc's to this
6/29/2021 c11 SilverClaw
Liking this story so far! Aloy and Shepard being a badass couple is awesome! Thanks for writing!
Liking this story so far! Aloy and Shepard being a badass couple is awesome! Thanks for writing!
6/29/2021 c11 6Masso 2010
great chapter, I had a feeling that Shepard wouldn't like learning that all those he fought with where dying just to by time for others to survive, though a part of me thinks that he was pulled away because he was being trusted to be the new leader or general or something like that, I think it would be cool if they entered the main facility where Gaia is and she just recognizes Shepard or something like that, or the message she leaves does at least. Either way, keep it up mate.
great chapter, I had a feeling that Shepard wouldn't like learning that all those he fought with where dying just to by time for others to survive, though a part of me thinks that he was pulled away because he was being trusted to be the new leader or general or something like that, I think it would be cool if they entered the main facility where Gaia is and she just recognizes Shepard or something like that, or the message she leaves does at least. Either way, keep it up mate.
6/15/2021 c10 Masso 2010
great chapter looking forward to main quest to start now that this side one is out of the way, can't wait to see it. Keep up the good work mate.
great chapter looking forward to main quest to start now that this side one is out of the way, can't wait to see it. Keep up the good work mate.
6/2/2021 c9 MegaBatz
Wonderful chapter! Aloy and Shepard’s relationship seems to be progressing wonderfully. That Ersa mission though... It broke my heart when I first played it. And it breaks my heart now. Keep up the good work!
Wonderful chapter! Aloy and Shepard’s relationship seems to be progressing wonderfully. That Ersa mission though... It broke my heart when I first played it. And it breaks my heart now. Keep up the good work!
6/2/2021 c9 6Masso 2010
great chapter, so happy they're together now and I cannot wait to see what comes next once they step onto the main plot of the story.
great chapter, so happy they're together now and I cannot wait to see what comes next once they step onto the main plot of the story.
5/27/2021 c8 MegaBatz
Wonderful! I just found this story today and I love it. I’ve been getting back into playing Horizon over the last few days and I was looking for a fic and here you are! This is qabsolutely fantastic so far. Please keep up the good work! I look forward to your next update!
Wonderful! I just found this story today and I love it. I’ve been getting back into playing Horizon over the last few days and I was looking for a fic and here you are! This is qabsolutely fantastic so far. Please keep up the good work! I look forward to your next update!
5/21/2021 c8 9Ranger McAleer
Damn these two are cute. Can't wait for them to get round to confessing.
Damn these two are cute. Can't wait for them to get round to confessing.