
3/1/2021 c1
1AscendedHumanity
Well not sure how DxD will handle some champions like the voidlings and some space guys like Sol

Well not sure how DxD will handle some champions like the voidlings and some space guys like Sol
3/1/2021 c1
4BattleCharger
Interesting first chapter, you did a real good job writing it. The story flows, and the speech patterns and dialogue are great. Looking forward to reading more chapters, keep up the good work.

Interesting first chapter, you did a real good job writing it. The story flows, and the speech patterns and dialogue are great. Looking forward to reading more chapters, keep up the good work.
3/1/2021 c1 Spacecore94
So long I have waited for a Naruto LoL fic that bypassed the massive amount of lore in League.
and you have DELIVERED! PLEASE continue this!
ONE bit of advice I would say would be tone down the Meta a tad
So long I have waited for a Naruto LoL fic that bypassed the massive amount of lore in League.
and you have DELIVERED! PLEASE continue this!
ONE bit of advice I would say would be tone down the Meta a tad
3/1/2021 c1 blazes207
I always hate when Naruto joins a peerage especially by force. Such a strong guy to be forced to do something. It's always distasteful to me but I'll listen to your story to hoping that it will be better or newer.
That why I can't finish reading these story. I love the hero of these to be the king of these story.
thank you
I always hate when Naruto joins a peerage especially by force. Such a strong guy to be forced to do something. It's always distasteful to me but I'll listen to your story to hoping that it will be better or newer.
That why I can't finish reading these story. I love the hero of these to be the king of these story.
thank you