for The Lion Cub (HP SI)8/16 c32 AIP Alexander
Uff, i just binge-read this story after reading the GOT fic. I absolutely love the characterization of Perenelle Flamel and the depth it adds to the story!
Uff, i just binge-read this story after reading the GOT fic. I absolutely love the characterization of Perenelle Flamel and the depth it adds to the story!
8/16 c8 NastySquire
All the 'righteous speeches' and the way the MC sometimes talks can be a bit cringy. Other than that I'm enjoying the story.
All the 'righteous speeches' and the way the MC sometimes talks can be a bit cringy. Other than that I'm enjoying the story.
8/16 c3 NastySquire
(from chp 3) Yay for minimum angst. But also hope for Occlumency soon. That is the HP thing that should always be included even if it just ends up being a passive improvement to help with memory.
(from chp 3) Yay for minimum angst. But also hope for Occlumency soon. That is the HP thing that should always be included even if it just ends up being a passive improvement to help with memory.
8/16 c2 
7era-romance
stone to wood. probably extremely difficult as you're turning an abiotic material into a biotic material. Basically you're giving life to an unloving organism.
7era-romancestone to wood. probably extremely difficult as you're turning an abiotic material into a biotic material. Basically you're giving life to an unloving organism.
8/13 c26 misteryman526
You seem to have too many commas in the numbers you use when discussing the Malfoy loan from the Black vaults. there should always be three digits between each comma, instead of alternating between 3 and 2 digits.
You seem to have too many commas in the numbers you use when discussing the Malfoy loan from the Black vaults. there should always be three digits between each comma, instead of alternating between 3 and 2 digits.
8/13 c36 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
8/13 c3 LordRhyolith
Hope there will some juicy bashing. I love a good bashing. Nothing ridiculous, but it is so easy to bash some characters in the Harry Potter verse.
Hope there will some juicy bashing. I love a good bashing. Nothing ridiculous, but it is so easy to bash some characters in the Harry Potter verse.