for The Lion Cub (HP SI)9/22 c19 Soraslove
Madam Bones is a bitch in this story. Then again, she is a politician, I suppose looking good is all that matters.
Madam Bones is a bitch in this story. Then again, she is a politician, I suppose looking good is all that matters.
9/17 c73 Guest
ШТА?
ШТА?
9/16 c73 Rudo the Barbarian Hero
Wondering if Fawke's action following Dumbledore's disarmament affected the Scar. Wondering if Fawke's is now acting as Harry's familiar.
Wondering if Fawke's action following Dumbledore's disarmament affected the Scar. Wondering if Fawke's is now acting as Harry's familiar.
9/15 c73 Ironcoil
Im loving the addition of Perenell as it opens the world up to a degree that was truly missed out on in canon. I always thought that confining the wizarding world to one set of islands and ignoring the redt of the world was a missed oppertunity in the books and something i always hoped JK would expand further. Im truly grateful that your imagination is taking us on such a journey and im truly enjoying your work!
Thanks again for an amazing read!
Im loving the addition of Perenell as it opens the world up to a degree that was truly missed out on in canon. I always thought that confining the wizarding world to one set of islands and ignoring the redt of the world was a missed oppertunity in the books and something i always hoped JK would expand further. Im truly grateful that your imagination is taking us on such a journey and im truly enjoying your work!
Thanks again for an amazing read!
9/15 c73 kageknuser2710
I really like the turn this story has taken! Makes it so much more interesting!
I really like the turn this story has taken! Makes it so much more interesting!
9/15 c73 Guest
Harry should fuck and breed Perenelle. There's a huge lack of such a pairing.
Harry should fuck and breed Perenelle. There's a huge lack of such a pairing.
9/15 c73 Dracaris5470
I still see absolutely no conceivable way muggles could ever be a threat for even 10 halfways organized non retard wizzards not even mention an extinction event
I still see absolutely no conceivable way muggles could ever be a threat for even 10 halfways organized non retard wizzards not even mention an extinction event
9/15 c73 Dzerx
Hopefully Harry isn't just another pawn being strung along to the tune of others. Ngl it really seems he's being used quite a bit.
Hopefully Harry isn't just another pawn being strung along to the tune of others. Ngl it really seems he's being used quite a bit.
9/15 c73 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
9/12 c31 
17Karmic Acumen
I read up to this point, but I'm going to have to stop. I'm not a fan of shadowy OCs that are somehow more insidious and formidable than the biggest canon characters.
From a more objective perspective, though, it's because this undermines your own premise, as well as pretty much everything this Harry has against the world and people in it. That you felt the need to invent this greater scope threat is you admitting that none of the people or stuff in canon are really all that dangerous or hard to live alongside as this story condemns them.
It... basically makes all the drama seem completely childish and pointless, because none of the things and people involved are really important. Only this Lilith is.
17Karmic AcumenI read up to this point, but I'm going to have to stop. I'm not a fan of shadowy OCs that are somehow more insidious and formidable than the biggest canon characters.
From a more objective perspective, though, it's because this undermines your own premise, as well as pretty much everything this Harry has against the world and people in it. That you felt the need to invent this greater scope threat is you admitting that none of the people or stuff in canon are really all that dangerous or hard to live alongside as this story condemns them.
It... basically makes all the drama seem completely childish and pointless, because none of the things and people involved are really important. Only this Lilith is.
9/7 c68 Glitner
not going to lie ... that thing with fluer just ruind the story sorry i loved the story but it was so badly written and his thoughts about his relationship with fluer and how it ended to fast was just to boring for my taste , good luck with ur writing enjoyed ur storie while it lasted :))
not going to lie ... that thing with fluer just ruind the story sorry i loved the story but it was so badly written and his thoughts about his relationship with fluer and how it ended to fast was just to boring for my taste , good luck with ur writing enjoyed ur storie while it lasted :))
9/6 c72 28Kairan1979
Thanks for the chapter.
Leaving Umbridge at Hogwarts can only lead to another incident.
28Kairan1979Thanks for the chapter.
Leaving Umbridge at Hogwarts can only lead to another incident.