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7/28/2021 c5 Mastersgtjames
Uh... kinda cringey how the MC is behaving. I mean, he how he speaks, the dialogue. It just in no way lines up with Harry Potter. So he is not even remotely trying to be subtle or hide that he is basically a completely different person.
MC obviously is on the right track about needing to see a medical professional. Should do something about all those medical problems potter had. Broken bones, eyesight problems, his height, weight. Maybe check if he has any bindings on his magic.
7/28/2021 c4 Mastersgtjames
Hope MC does not renew his friendship with Ron when he tries to reconnect.
So, MC is a SI, but does he not have much metaknowledge? Cuz shouldn't he know that the Tri-Wiz SHOULD declare the MC as an adult. Since only of-age wizards can compete, and they are forcing him to compete?
Really hope the MC is doing SOME mind-magic. To defend his mind, enhance his memory, stuff like that. Especially so he can remember things easier. Maybe even give himself an eidetic memory.
Hope the MC raids the RoR for Galleons and stuff. Maybe get himself a trunk like Newt Scamanders where it is basically a mansion/house. Maybe buy/copy/steal himself an impressive library. Copying all the books he can get his hands on.
MC is apparently paranoid about dumbles, but not enough in my opinion. He has not tried learning various security and detection magics to check for tracking charms, potions, compulsions, etc...
7/28/2021 c3 Mastersgtjames
Wonder if this is going to go the fanfic route. With MC having properties that have been stolen/hidden from him, money stolen, etc...
Wonder if the MC is going to do any self-improvement/enhancement rituals. I mean, he does have that basilisk corpse he can use, among other things. Maybe awaken a metamorph ability, maybe gain magic-sight, maybe use Re'em blood to enhance his physical abilities.
Hope MC eventually looks into methods to make himself immortal. One thing I never get in fanfics is why people just use the existing methods. I mean, if someone made a method of immortality over 500-1000 years ago, then with advancements in the sciences and medicine there should be an improvement in the understanding and methods for immortality. Maybe figure out a way to become biologically immortal, have regeneration like Wolverine, or some method to make your soul immortal all Skyrim Dragon style.
7/28/2021 c2 Mastersgtjames
So... hope MC learns/practices wandless magic. Always seems like a bad idea to be dependent on something that can be taken away or lost. Wands, Philosophers stones, Horcruxes, etc...
Also, hope MC practices Mind Magic. Legillimency, memory charms, etc...
learns more than just what is taught at Hogwarts. Learn Conjuration, Alchemy, Wards, Cursebreaking, Enchanting, Sex Magic, Blood/Flesh Magic, Soul Magic, Mind Magic, Rituals.

So is MC just not able to not participate? Like, enter the arena, then leave? The contract requires he compete, says nothing about the level of his participation right?
7/28/2021 c1 Mastersgtjames
Hope the MC is a munchkin. Learning more than what is taught at Hogwarts, improving himself in all sorts of ways(Rituals, mind magic, soul magic, awakening/activating magical abilities like metamorphmagic, etc...). Investing in successful "muggle" businesses. Using foreknowledge ftw, like tampering with riddles fathers grave, learning occlumency, knowing where the horcruxes are, knowing that you yourself are not protected by the same rituals/enchantments as other horcruxes, so it should be easy to remove voldie from your head.
The Tri-Wizard Tournament never makes sense in SI Harry Potter fanfics. I mean, magical contracts cannot bind people against their will. Since it is their intent and magic that binds them, in accordance with a magical contract. If it were possible to bind people to contracts against their will it would be happening ALL THE TIME, governments would be using it, purebloods would, everyone would. It would be easy to use it to rob, enslave, or kill people. Heck, even if it only worked with rare artifacts like the Goblet it would STILL be used all the time, just adjusting the contract to compensate.
Aside from that, there is the simple fact that killing voldie and his Death Eaters should be really easy. I mean, once you have even one of his Horcruxes, you should be able to kill him. If someone having your blood is bad. Since they can curse it, and though it, you. Torturing you, even killing you. Then having a piece of someone soul HAS to be worse. You should be able to kill ALL of voldemort if you have even one of his horcruxes. Same with his DE's, since they have the Dark Mark, and ALL the Dark Marks are connected, you should be able to target them through that connection.
7/27/2021 c8 person1357
A political marriage might be what mc is more inclined towards, but remember in cannon hermione becomes the minister of magic.
7/27/2021 c8 12Sultan Asil Arslan-Hiatus
Whatever it takes.
7/26/2021 c8 Necromancy94
I hope Draco meets buckbeak again casually walking around Hogwarts then hiding him too make everyone think Draco is going crazy, that would be funny
7/26/2021 c6 Guest
Nah Fleur is too young for you...old ass man.
7/26/2021 c8 ImpEmp
Gotta say it's great seeing Daphne Greengrass, who is basically cemented in fanon as the good girl ice queen, getting treated like the typical student from the house of nazis in training.

Great story btw. Wish it was longer cause I enjoyed it
7/26/2021 c8 Barbaric Bob
he could give the memory of his second year where Lucious tried to FUCKING AK HARRY IN THE DAMNED SCHOOL
...that's a reputation killer and a half
7/26/2021 c8 Doctor Doofenshmirtz
Niiice. Glad to see this is back.
7/26/2021 c8 Glitner
this story is awesome ! but he should really go to the doctor and do a scan on himself for problems in his body i could only guess how many magical things he could get for his own body etc etc , anyway daphne and fluer is a good pairing a bit cliche but hey they work ? )
7/26/2021 c8 scyfly
you know it is actually really funny how hermione fights for house elf rights. if sirius black can be railroaded into azkaban without trial what would malfoy do against hermione if he is sick of her voice? ask snape or the ministry for her adress kill her and her parents? who would complain or be able to make a case against malfoy.

hermione making it to year seven in canon was a bloody miracle.

go house elves. priorities right?

400 galleons seems a bit expensive for enchanted glasses. but then what is the value of a galleon anyways? that is why you are better of not mentioning it.
"the glasses were kinda expensive but after some consideration he decided it was worth it. he left the story with considerable lighter pockets but he did not care"
no dubious questioning about the value of the galleon needed.

rita would you like the memory of how lucius malfoy tried to kill me but was stopped by an house elf? (second year right after freeing dobby, malfoy never got beyond avada)

pretty cool story
7/26/2021 c4 Glitner
daphne or fluer is the only pairing thats awesome ! xD
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