for The Lion Cub (HP SI)4/15/2021 c7 shugokage
Definitely an impressive chapter especially the ending scene and great scenes!
Definitely an impressive chapter especially the ending scene and great scenes!
4/15/2021 c7 scyfly
pointing out the stupidity of ppl is not bashing, bashing is turning someone into a caricature which only focusses on the bad points without nuance.
imo dumbledore is not evil but plain incompetent, that man simply lacks a spine to do what is necceccary, grindelwald knew this and therefore made sure to have that bloodpack in place.
an ROB involving themself in a story is always a bad choice, just making an SI should be the max of his involvement.
i do believe you are somewhat underutilizing the ROR, there are a lot of obscure questions that it could awnsers. rituals, to fix his bodyeyesight, enhance it, pruge the horcrux. more of everything basicly
pointing out the stupidity of ppl is not bashing, bashing is turning someone into a caricature which only focusses on the bad points without nuance.
imo dumbledore is not evil but plain incompetent, that man simply lacks a spine to do what is necceccary, grindelwald knew this and therefore made sure to have that bloodpack in place.
an ROB involving themself in a story is always a bad choice, just making an SI should be the max of his involvement.
i do believe you are somewhat underutilizing the ROR, there are a lot of obscure questions that it could awnsers. rituals, to fix his bodyeyesight, enhance it, pruge the horcrux. more of everything basicly
4/15/2021 c7 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
interesting that the staff is taking some action wonder what the fallout be from that
here is hoping he just toss the wands away :D
nice chapter thx for writing it
interesting that the staff is taking some action wonder what the fallout be from that
here is hoping he just toss the wands away :D
4/15/2021 c4 scyfly
still no occlumency, not as if crouch jr, dumbledore and snape can read minds or anything.
other then some bad english its not to bad
still no occlumency, not as if crouch jr, dumbledore and snape can read minds or anything.
other then some bad english its not to bad
4/15/2021 c2 scyfly
shouldnt his first priority be occlumency? not only his knowledge but his scattered memories need to be dealt with
shouldnt his first priority be occlumency? not only his knowledge but his scattered memories need to be dealt with
4/14/2021 c7 
12Hit1903
This chapter was great. Hope you have Snape fired or at least something worse. I would love to have different POV, especially from Slytherin side about change in harry.
You can also get Snape fired by saying that he single handedly destroyed healers and aurorers profession
12Hit1903This chapter was great. Hope you have Snape fired or at least something worse. I would love to have different POV, especially from Slytherin side about change in harry.
You can also get Snape fired by saying that he single handedly destroyed healers and aurorers profession
4/14/2021 c7 1sykartracer
Definitely a good chapter. I don't mind having a Harry/Fleur pairing, but distance does raise a question. Can I put my vote for Harry and Tracey Davis? We know, with regards to canon that she's one of the few half-bloods in Slytherin. If you want to play off her friendship with Greengrass, you could set up some kind of fight between them where she takes a stand against them and Harry just happens to be near and remarks that she's embracing the house of ambition by making this stand. Plus, you can also use it to strain Ron more because of his hatred of Slytherins.
1sykartracerDefinitely a good chapter. I don't mind having a Harry/Fleur pairing, but distance does raise a question. Can I put my vote for Harry and Tracey Davis? We know, with regards to canon that she's one of the few half-bloods in Slytherin. If you want to play off her friendship with Greengrass, you could set up some kind of fight between them where she takes a stand against them and Harry just happens to be near and remarks that she's embracing the house of ambition by making this stand. Plus, you can also use it to strain Ron more because of his hatred of Slytherins.
4/14/2021 c7 kapilmaheshsuri
The monologue is not bashing. It is just Harry Drawing a line and telling people that he will not let them walk over him any more. Also very good work with the chapter
The monologue is not bashing. It is just Harry Drawing a line and telling people that he will not let them walk over him any more. Also very good work with the chapter
4/11/2021 c6 Guest
This is just amazing. Very well done.
This is just amazing. Very well done.
4/7/2021 c2 darkimortal
I feel this Harry's priorities is all wrong or at least partly. He should be looking for ways to fix his abused body before looking up magic. A week looking for a fix for his body would have been better. No matter how you look at it magic flows through the body one way or another, a better body would mean better magic.
I feel this Harry's priorities is all wrong or at least partly. He should be looking for ways to fix his abused body before looking up magic. A week looking for a fix for his body would have been better. No matter how you look at it magic flows through the body one way or another, a better body would mean better magic.