for The Lion Cub (HP SI)11/9 c44 Vukk
Due to magic and dedication, someone at that age and shape should be able to easily run well over a mile (or about 2 km) in 7 minutes. Walking would cover at least 4-5 football/association football fields in length. But you had him running all out and it took him 7 minutes?
Due to magic and dedication, someone at that age and shape should be able to easily run well over a mile (or about 2 km) in 7 minutes. Walking would cover at least 4-5 football/association football fields in length. But you had him running all out and it took him 7 minutes?
11/5 c77 
28Kairan1979
Thanks for the chapter.
Rebuilding Potter Manor as a bait? I didn't expect that.
28Kairan1979Thanks for the chapter.
Rebuilding Potter Manor as a bait? I didn't expect that.
11/5 c17 Vukk
Since when did Harry or Ron take muggle studies? Granted, it makes sense for every muggle born/raised as it should be an easy O, but Harry and Ron took CoMC and divination.
Since when did Harry or Ron take muggle studies? Granted, it makes sense for every muggle born/raised as it should be an easy O, but Harry and Ron took CoMC and divination.
11/4 c77 Guest
Great job!
Great job!
11/3 c1 steve
you should have put oc instead if it's a self insert it's not harry potter at all it's who ever the hell you are witch makes it a self insert jerk off fantasy nothing more and the writer should be the only one reading it.
you should have put oc instead if it's a self insert it's not harry potter at all it's who ever the hell you are witch makes it a self insert jerk off fantasy nothing more and the writer should be the only one reading it.
11/3 c77 Temsen
Damn, Harry's been a wizard for too long, he's already forgetting math. 32711 indeed.
Damn, Harry's been a wizard for too long, he's already forgetting math. 32711 indeed.
11/3 c77 scyfly
a mountain of corpses is different from a mountain with corpses...
so this prophecy orb is a portkey into a volcano right? or better yet space
a mountain of corpses is different from a mountain with corpses...
so this prophecy orb is a portkey into a volcano right? or better yet space
11/3 c77 scyfly
everytime i think you hit rock bottom you find a new low.
there is no way any wizard would hand out autographs on paper that isnt his own and then has the link to them broken. the goblet of fire shows why. but writing it on something that conveniently looks like a doll but really is contract ranging from slavery to transfering all gold...
boggles the mind
everytime i think you hit rock bottom you find a new low.
there is no way any wizard would hand out autographs on paper that isnt his own and then has the link to them broken. the goblet of fire shows why. but writing it on something that conveniently looks like a doll but really is contract ranging from slavery to transfering all gold...
boggles the mind
11/1 c31 Guest
This “immortal witch” OC ruined the entire story and made this story garbage. Honestly if I knew this would happen then I would have never wasted on my time on this dumpster fire of a story. Go f*ck yourself for making me waste my time on this trash.
This “immortal witch” OC ruined the entire story and made this story garbage. Honestly if I knew this would happen then I would have never wasted on my time on this dumpster fire of a story. Go f*ck yourself for making me waste my time on this trash.
10/29 c68 Seananagan
Honestly lame the MC cut things off with Fleur and how it was done. I get he wants political power but he should know even if he gets Daphne that the power lies with Perenelle not Daphne or her family so he could have kept things with Fleur and still had it. The love triangle feels incredibly unnecessary.
Honestly lame the MC cut things off with Fleur and how it was done. I get he wants political power but he should know even if he gets Daphne that the power lies with Perenelle not Daphne or her family so he could have kept things with Fleur and still had it. The love triangle feels incredibly unnecessary.
10/26 c68 r-Sam
THAN YOU for Harry not just telling the whole school about the RoR. That always bugs the shit out of me. Your way of handling it was spot on.
THAN YOU for Harry not just telling the whole school about the RoR. That always bugs the shit out of me. Your way of handling it was spot on.
10/25 c76 Kairan1979
Thanks for the chapter.
I agree with Snape that replacing the Prophecy makes the perfect sense.
Thanks for the chapter.
I agree with Snape that replacing the Prophecy makes the perfect sense.