for Succubus7/6 c22 Alice Scarlett Knabel
i mean you could make Edward basically a neverending supply of sexual energy
i mean you could make Edward basically a neverending supply of sexual energy
4/13 c22 Neapinea
I really do hope you finish this story sometime in the future, but take care of yourself and prioritize your life first and foremost. If you ever do update I am sure it’ll be as amazing as so far, you are an incredibly talented writer and storyteller.
I really do hope you finish this story sometime in the future, but take care of yourself and prioritize your life first and foremost. If you ever do update I am sure it’ll be as amazing as so far, you are an incredibly talented writer and storyteller.
3/31 c22 Guest
Great
Great
12/23/2023 c22 
4willowfaust
no what has to happen is. ... Edward has to sow more intentions. Has to show her what he wants. otherwise, they are just going to keep circling each other. and never get any where
4willowfaustno what has to happen is. ... Edward has to sow more intentions. Has to show her what he wants. otherwise, they are just going to keep circling each other. and never get any where
8/27/2023 c22 NobodyHimOrMe
Hi there,
Found this story and just couldn't put it down till I'd read the whole thing, so unfortunately can't really give much specific feedback lol. This was genuinely a first read fav for me and that's not common for an unfinished stories.
I'd honestly love to see further development between Edward and Bella, it's quite drawn out in the books so I doubt it'll be badly recieved.
Hope you are inspired continue, a twighlight fiction I like this much is quite rare. You writing is great.
Hi there,
Found this story and just couldn't put it down till I'd read the whole thing, so unfortunately can't really give much specific feedback lol. This was genuinely a first read fav for me and that's not common for an unfinished stories.
I'd honestly love to see further development between Edward and Bella, it's quite drawn out in the books so I doubt it'll be badly recieved.
Hope you are inspired continue, a twighlight fiction I like this much is quite rare. You writing is great.
7/1/2023 c22 1crystallinecollie
I think you're doing great FWIW. My vote is for more chapters of Edward and Bella exploring/deepening their relationship as you figure out where you want to go with the story. I have always been dying to know what will happen if Bella feeds from Edward, too. This story has been great (one of my faves on here) and I hope you find your inspiration to continue. Thank you!
1crystallinecollieI think you're doing great FWIW. My vote is for more chapters of Edward and Bella exploring/deepening their relationship as you figure out where you want to go with the story. I have always been dying to know what will happen if Bella feeds from Edward, too. This story has been great (one of my faves on here) and I hope you find your inspiration to continue. Thank you!
6/25/2023 c4 Czechm8
A 3000 foot drop? Damn. Indestructibiltu is nice. Edward and Tanya know who Bella is, so let's see what happens next. The idea fits clearly with the story's main events. The irresistible smell, her being hunted at the end, probably even her being able to hide her thoughts from Edward.
A 3000 foot drop? Damn. Indestructibiltu is nice. Edward and Tanya know who Bella is, so let's see what happens next. The idea fits clearly with the story's main events. The irresistible smell, her being hunted at the end, probably even her being able to hide her thoughts from Edward.
6/7/2023 c2 Czechm8
So, Bella is a succubus. I thought at first she was a vampire, thinking "succubus" was a nickname. You know suck. Clearly missed the AN at the end of the first chapter. It says she hadn't fed, so I'm guessing that's having entercourse with men. Aside from that...I know nothing. Let's see what these abilities are.
She seemed to handle herself pretty well with the werewolves. Let's see what happens next chapter with Forks high school and Edward Cullen.
So, Bella is a succubus. I thought at first she was a vampire, thinking "succubus" was a nickname. You know suck. Clearly missed the AN at the end of the first chapter. It says she hadn't fed, so I'm guessing that's having entercourse with men. Aside from that...I know nothing. Let's see what these abilities are.
She seemed to handle herself pretty well with the werewolves. Let's see what happens next chapter with Forks high school and Edward Cullen.
6/6/2023 c22 hearrtshaped
This is history is so singular! I’ve never read something so creative and interesting! You’re doing great, I hope you can find more inspiration to continue it. There’s a lot of sexual tension between Edward and Bella, even if it’s no explicit in the dialogues… the details of their conversation are amazing and I guess why not explore this side and see how their relationship will evolve from this… she’s a succubus after all and he’s a vampire, I don’t think you can find a sexier couple. Xoxo
This is history is so singular! I’ve never read something so creative and interesting! You’re doing great, I hope you can find more inspiration to continue it. There’s a lot of sexual tension between Edward and Bella, even if it’s no explicit in the dialogues… the details of their conversation are amazing and I guess why not explore this side and see how their relationship will evolve from this… she’s a succubus after all and he’s a vampire, I don’t think you can find a sexier couple. Xoxo
5/17/2023 c22 Noee
Hola no sabes mi felicidad
Busqué el fic para releerlo
Y encontrar un nuevo capítulo fue felicidad absoluta
Muchas gracias
Lamentó tu bloqueó mental
Me gusto este avance entre bella y edward
El compañerismo y sus pequeñas bromas
Hola no sabes mi felicidad
Busqué el fic para releerlo
Y encontrar un nuevo capítulo fue felicidad absoluta
Muchas gracias
Lamentó tu bloqueó mental
Me gusto este avance entre bella y edward
El compañerismo y sus pequeñas bromas
5/16/2023 c22 myfanficaddiction
Ahh I remember seeing when you updated and it made my day-love this fic so much! Unfortunately I wasn't able to read the latest chapter until now, but it was so worth the wait. This was such a great chapter. I loved seeing Edward and Bella spend more time together; how he's helping her with her powers and control; their growing chemistry and relationship. This was so much fun to read!
Ahh I remember seeing when you updated and it made my day-love this fic so much! Unfortunately I wasn't able to read the latest chapter until now, but it was so worth the wait. This was such a great chapter. I loved seeing Edward and Bella spend more time together; how he's helping her with her powers and control; their growing chemistry and relationship. This was so much fun to read!
4/16/2023 c22 BlueFlowerGuy
This is pretty good, twisting things up yet keeping close to canon. Actually quite impressive that it have not derailed entirely. By all accounts it should have like so many other fics.
Its strange, i would never have thought that you didnt know where you were going considering the pace is so good? The only thing i found weird pacing-wise was the way Bella got included into the treaty. They hardly knew each other and even up til now its pretty much been a Bella/Edward thing only with a bit of Alice.
I hope you keep going its quite good. Thank you for your words.
This is pretty good, twisting things up yet keeping close to canon. Actually quite impressive that it have not derailed entirely. By all accounts it should have like so many other fics.
Its strange, i would never have thought that you didnt know where you were going considering the pace is so good? The only thing i found weird pacing-wise was the way Bella got included into the treaty. They hardly knew each other and even up til now its pretty much been a Bella/Edward thing only with a bit of Alice.
I hope you keep going its quite good. Thank you for your words.
4/7/2023 c22 Jayia
Ok I'm invested so ima try to help a lil. Now that Bella knows what happen to her kind her demon begins to encourage her to be more forward with Edward as a means of protection just in case. The demon can be like a devil on the shoulder urging her to be more of a seductress. Definitely pick back up with Peter and Charlotte and your doing great don't stress too much. Till next time
Ok I'm invested so ima try to help a lil. Now that Bella knows what happen to her kind her demon begins to encourage her to be more forward with Edward as a means of protection just in case. The demon can be like a devil on the shoulder urging her to be more of a seductress. Definitely pick back up with Peter and Charlotte and your doing great don't stress too much. Till next time